for How it all began...9/6/2012 c2 Random Junk 13
Well you have my attention!:)
Your doing a good job!:D
Update soon please!
Well you have my attention!:)
Your doing a good job!:D
Update soon please!
2/11/2005 c2 spyro's lost twin sister
well i'm back!
the last few years is were i left off.
nina: elora! it's time to do my training!(waits5min) ELORA!GET YOUR BUTT DOWN HERE NOW!
elora: ok!
agent9: what's is going on in here !
elora: umm nina? i'v got some thing to show you.
nina: like what?
elora: see the locket i'm holding?
nina: yah. what about it?
elora: open it
nina:(opens the locket)
elora: what is in side
nina: i see another dragon. is he my brother?
elora: yes your twin brother.
nina: why didn't you tell me!
elora: because we wanted you to grow up a little more. now lets get to your-(cut off from ripto)
RIPTO: NOW ISHALL OFICHUALY(DID I SPELL THAT WRONG? PLEAS TELL)TAKE OVER THE WORLD! HA!HA!
mean wile in spyro's world
spyro: is this rain ever gona stop? i forgot what the sun looks like, we should go on vacation somewhere worm somewhere sunny,DRAGON SHORS!YAH!WE HAVE NOT BEEN THERE SINC I KIKED
GNASTY GNORK'S BUT! LAST ONE THERE IS A GNORK!
MEAN WILE IN AVALAR( WOW THATS ALOT OF A'S!)
ELORA: IS IT READY PROFESSER?
PROF: ALMOST JUST FEW MORE ADJUSTMENTS TO THES ORBS AND -(CUT OFF BY HUNTER)
HUNTER: MABY THIS ISN'T SUCH A GOOD IDEA BRINGING A DRAGON HERE CAN JUST MAKE RIPTO ANGRYER
ELORA: QUIET DOWN HUNTER AND STOP FIGITING!
HUNTER: BUT YOU SAW THE PROFESSER'S BOOK! THEY CLAWS LIKE THIS!- ( SHOWS HOW LONG THERE CLAWS ARE) TEETH LIKE THIS - ( SMAE HERE FOR TEETH)AND THEY SPIT FIRE LIKE THIS POO POO THEY SOUN MUCH MORE DANGERIS THAN RIPTO!
PROF: I'VE GOT IT I'V GOT A DRAGON!
NINA: ARE YOU SURE THIS IS GOING- ( CUT OFF BY YOU KNOW WHO AND ITS NOT RIPTO OR HE WOULD BE DEAD) THATS IT FOR NOW! BY EVERY BODY! ^_^
well i'm back!
the last few years is were i left off.
nina: elora! it's time to do my training!(waits5min) ELORA!GET YOUR BUTT DOWN HERE NOW!
elora: ok!
agent9: what's is going on in here !
elora: umm nina? i'v got some thing to show you.
nina: like what?
elora: see the locket i'm holding?
nina: yah. what about it?
elora: open it
nina:(opens the locket)
elora: what is in side
nina: i see another dragon. is he my brother?
elora: yes your twin brother.
nina: why didn't you tell me!
elora: because we wanted you to grow up a little more. now lets get to your-(cut off from ripto)
RIPTO: NOW ISHALL OFICHUALY(DID I SPELL THAT WRONG? PLEAS TELL)TAKE OVER THE WORLD! HA!HA!
mean wile in spyro's world
spyro: is this rain ever gona stop? i forgot what the sun looks like, we should go on vacation somewhere worm somewhere sunny,DRAGON SHORS!YAH!WE HAVE NOT BEEN THERE SINC I KIKED
GNASTY GNORK'S BUT! LAST ONE THERE IS A GNORK!
MEAN WILE IN AVALAR( WOW THATS ALOT OF A'S!)
ELORA: IS IT READY PROFESSER?
PROF: ALMOST JUST FEW MORE ADJUSTMENTS TO THES ORBS AND -(CUT OFF BY HUNTER)
HUNTER: MABY THIS ISN'T SUCH A GOOD IDEA BRINGING A DRAGON HERE CAN JUST MAKE RIPTO ANGRYER
ELORA: QUIET DOWN HUNTER AND STOP FIGITING!
HUNTER: BUT YOU SAW THE PROFESSER'S BOOK! THEY CLAWS LIKE THIS!- ( SHOWS HOW LONG THERE CLAWS ARE) TEETH LIKE THIS - ( SMAE HERE FOR TEETH)AND THEY SPIT FIRE LIKE THIS POO POO THEY SOUN MUCH MORE DANGERIS THAN RIPTO!
PROF: I'VE GOT IT I'V GOT A DRAGON!
NINA: ARE YOU SURE THIS IS GOING- ( CUT OFF BY YOU KNOW WHO AND ITS NOT RIPTO OR HE WOULD BE DEAD) THATS IT FOR NOW! BY EVERY BODY! ^_^
2/6/2005 c1 spyro's lost twin sister
well the first time i met spyro was in avalar lett me tell you the story it all started like spyro's story
i opened my eyes and i just lade there then i just stared around for a moment lookeing at every thing incuding hunter the cheeta & elora the faun
elora: she...she's hatched to ealy but how ( time is slower in avalar) could she?
hunter: ( he's tring to stuff me back in to my egg shell and the prof. comes in )
prof: it seems as though she may have finished the food in the egg( yoke )
me: (reaches up for Elora)a.
elora: aw she so cute!(picks me up)
me: (starts blowing bubles) b b b b b b b b b b b b b b
Hunter: ( pops bubbles and ripto attacks )
ripto: after i finish this place i'll destory your baby dragon! hahahahahahahahahahahaha !
me:wa wa gasp wa!
un fortunetly i knew what that ment
hunter: so uh what are we going to name her?
elora :hm how about gabby?
hunter: that aint even a name!
i listened for a name that i wanted well here is a list
1.gabby
2.angel
3.may
4.summer
5.stormy
6.demona may
7.destean
8.smokey
9.lidya
10.anastaga
11.(this is one that hunter chose but i chose my own) hatred
12.elizabeth
13.nala
14.seroby
15.jessica
16.nina
17.mina
18.britannia
(whew this is a lot of names good luck whoever is going to read this)
19.icy
20.darcy
21.thorn
22.bloom
23.stella
24.(this is the prof.'s name) agent 639
25.meusa
26.charcaol
27.carol
28.hermon
29.icicleah
30.isabella
ME: eah eah eah eah
elora: i think she just chose nina
hunter:nina it is then!
THE NEXT FEW YEARS I GREW RAPEDLY YOU SEE I AM NOT A NORMAL DRAGON AND THAT IS IT SEE YAH !
well the first time i met spyro was in avalar lett me tell you the story it all started like spyro's story
i opened my eyes and i just lade there then i just stared around for a moment lookeing at every thing incuding hunter the cheeta & elora the faun
elora: she...she's hatched to ealy but how ( time is slower in avalar) could she?
hunter: ( he's tring to stuff me back in to my egg shell and the prof. comes in )
prof: it seems as though she may have finished the food in the egg( yoke )
me: (reaches up for Elora)a.
elora: aw she so cute!(picks me up)
me: (starts blowing bubles) b b b b b b b b b b b b b b
Hunter: ( pops bubbles and ripto attacks )
ripto: after i finish this place i'll destory your baby dragon! hahahahahahahahahahahaha !
me:wa wa gasp wa!
un fortunetly i knew what that ment
hunter: so uh what are we going to name her?
elora :hm how about gabby?
hunter: that aint even a name!
i listened for a name that i wanted well here is a list
1.gabby
2.angel
3.may
4.summer
5.stormy
6.demona may
7.destean
8.smokey
9.lidya
10.anastaga
11.(this is one that hunter chose but i chose my own) hatred
12.elizabeth
13.nala
14.seroby
15.jessica
16.nina
17.mina
18.britannia
(whew this is a lot of names good luck whoever is going to read this)
19.icy
20.darcy
21.thorn
22.bloom
23.stella
24.(this is the prof.'s name) agent 639
25.meusa
26.charcaol
27.carol
28.hermon
29.icicleah
30.isabella
ME: eah eah eah eah
elora: i think she just chose nina
hunter:nina it is then!
THE NEXT FEW YEARS I GREW RAPEDLY YOU SEE I AM NOT A NORMAL DRAGON AND THAT IS IT SEE YAH !
5/10/2004 c2 Kittie Gaby
(claps) Bravo, bravo, thats a great story; its a good thing that I already all three Spyro games but I'm not gonna mess it up for any one who hasn't played it yet. Good luck. ^-^
(claps) Bravo, bravo, thats a great story; its a good thing that I already all three Spyro games but I'm not gonna mess it up for any one who hasn't played it yet. Good luck. ^-^
3/21/2003 c1 
19The NightDragon
Great story!
You might want to consider converting the entire game's storyline into a longer story, but this was great. I have a sudden urge to whip Spyro out and play again!
For just a short story, you ended in just the right place, and you stayed true to character. Well done!
19The NightDragonGreat story!
You might want to consider converting the entire game's storyline into a longer story, but this was great. I have a sudden urge to whip Spyro out and play again!
For just a short story, you ended in just the right place, and you stayed true to character. Well done!
1/4/2003 c2 1Arissa GoldStripe
Heh! Pretty cute! A little short...You coul've beefed it up a little...
1Arissa GoldStripeHeh! Pretty cute! A little short...You coul've beefed it up a little...
8/9/2002 c1 Rumorgirl411 co
Razor: Hi Razor here. It looks like this is going to be one HECK of a party!
Green Glow: I told you, I'm a Medabot, unless you flam is as powerful as Recoil's you won't leave a dent in me.
Recoil: Who are you talking to?
Green Glow: (Holds up Rintaro holding a flame thrower) This.
Rintaro: Dude dragons are cool! I wanna be a dragon to Dude-...-et.
Recoil: How did you get in the time dimention veical?
Rintaro: I hid myself in Green Glow's suit case dude! He let me Dude!
Mimic: I thought we scaned all the suit cases except for Green Glow's candy thingy. GREEN GLOW!
Rumorgirl: We don't own medabots.
Rintaro: Cool fic dude!
Everyone else: Got that right.
PS: Dew to AnT's fic, in the medabot's section, the rating machine blew up and were getting it repaired as we speak.
Razor: Hi Razor here. It looks like this is going to be one HECK of a party!
Green Glow: I told you, I'm a Medabot, unless you flam is as powerful as Recoil's you won't leave a dent in me.
Recoil: Who are you talking to?
Green Glow: (Holds up Rintaro holding a flame thrower) This.
Rintaro: Dude dragons are cool! I wanna be a dragon to Dude-...-et.
Recoil: How did you get in the time dimention veical?
Rintaro: I hid myself in Green Glow's suit case dude! He let me Dude!
Mimic: I thought we scaned all the suit cases except for Green Glow's candy thingy. GREEN GLOW!
Rumorgirl: We don't own medabots.
Rintaro: Cool fic dude!
Everyone else: Got that right.
PS: Dew to AnT's fic, in the medabot's section, the rating machine blew up and were getting it repaired as we speak.
7/22/2002 c1 Gijinka Renamon
I really like this! A good prolouge to the first Spyro game.
I really like this! A good prolouge to the first Spyro game.
3/13/2002 c1 Saldi Stone
That was a great little proglogue! I really enjoyed it. : )
That was a great little proglogue! I really enjoyed it. : )
1/24/2002 c1 1iCe6
good idea hey, spyro is so cute ^_^ wouldn't he jsut look so gorgeous as a baby hehe
1iCe6good idea hey, spyro is so cute ^_^ wouldn't he jsut look so gorgeous as a baby hehe
1/14/2002 c1 Maddy the Dragon2 lazy to get on right now prepsrule12hotmail.com
GREAT STORY! Thanks for the review. Do you know of any songs I could use for a sequle for "I'm already there"(I need some better ideas then "I'll be there for you"(aka:The friends theam song.))
GREAT STORY! Thanks for the review. Do you know of any songs I could use for a sequle for "I'm already there"(I need some better ideas then "I'll be there for you"(aka:The friends theam song.))
1/12/2002 c2 57Drakena the Destroyer
*is seen walking in a forest* Just to tell you, Love Spell Gone Bad is not my only Spyro fic. My Gnasty LotR is a Spyro version of Lord of the Rings book and movie. Anyway, I hope you get that Pros and Cons list up soon! *looks side to side* Oh yeah, if you see nine ghost knights on black horses, run for it. *hears galloping* Gotta run!
57Drakena the Destroyer*is seen walking in a forest* Just to tell you, Love Spell Gone Bad is not my only Spyro fic. My Gnasty LotR is a Spyro version of Lord of the Rings book and movie. Anyway, I hope you get that Pros and Cons list up soon! *looks side to side* Oh yeah, if you see nine ghost knights on black horses, run for it. *hears galloping* Gotta run!
1/8/2002 c1 Futekito Remon
You mostly copied the game. Could use more creativity.
You mostly copied the game. Could use more creativity.
1/5/2002 c1 Pie of the Day
Oooo... this is so cool! Im surprised you actually got the dragons names right
Oooo... this is so cool! Im surprised you actually got the dragons names right