for My Shattered Faith6/10/2010 c2 Soulbow109
u planing on updating this anytime soon i really like how this story is doing so far.
u planing on updating this anytime soon i really like how this story is doing so far.
4/7/2009 c2 
3Crimson ultrafox
I like this story. So far I like how Naruto is ignoring Sakura. I enjoy how you put this together, though I do feel it needs some more content, because I read the chapters really quickly, and it was slightly short. But anyways, update soon so I can see how Tayuya reacts to Naruto getting her flowers.
3Crimson ultrafoxI like this story. So far I like how Naruto is ignoring Sakura. I enjoy how you put this together, though I do feel it needs some more content, because I read the chapters really quickly, and it was slightly short. But anyways, update soon so I can see how Tayuya reacts to Naruto getting her flowers.
3/23/2009 c2 1Geezorbee
Nice start, altho I kinda wonder how you're gonna get Tayuya to be accepted by Konoha. She cant be in his home all the time, how about his birthday? She supposed to be there when the villagers rape his house? :P
Well anyway I'm looking forward to seeing the result! Great start tho! ;-)
1GeezorbeeNice start, altho I kinda wonder how you're gonna get Tayuya to be accepted by Konoha. She cant be in his home all the time, how about his birthday? She supposed to be there when the villagers rape his house? :P
Well anyway I'm looking forward to seeing the result! Great start tho! ;-)
3/21/2009 c2 adfdsvn1
well its got a few mistakes here and there but over all nothing major but i like it it was actually the type of narutayu story i was looking for so in all i like the plot and cant wait for more
well its got a few mistakes here and there but over all nothing major but i like it it was actually the type of narutayu story i was looking for so in all i like the plot and cant wait for more
3/20/2009 c2 2SordweilderSurvivor
well this story is interestting to say the lest. its good writting. keep it up.
2SordweilderSurvivorwell this story is interestting to say the lest. its good writting. keep it up.
3/10/2009 c1 tayuya fan 13
tayuya and naruto is a great pair. like to see more and it is the best i read so far. your story is number 1!. yeah keep up the great work. o yeah tayuya is my farorite character in naruto. sakura could just die.
tayuya and naruto is a great pair. like to see more and it is the best i read so far. your story is number 1!. yeah keep up the great work. o yeah tayuya is my farorite character in naruto. sakura could just die.
3/9/2009 c2 Lex luthore
Great fic this could be the best naruto x tayuya ever but please do not pair naruto with any body else and could hinata be antagonistic to tayuya
Great fic this could be the best naruto x tayuya ever but please do not pair naruto with any body else and could hinata be antagonistic to tayuya
2/28/2009 c2 FamousFox89 aka the black Crow
1. Chapter turned out verry well!
2. Ideas for the next chapter are great. (Thought Sakura shouldnt find out about Tayuya anitime soon)
3. Love to read more!
Your dear reader
FF89atbC
1. Chapter turned out verry well!
2. Ideas for the next chapter are great. (Thought Sakura shouldnt find out about Tayuya anitime soon)
3. Love to read more!
Your dear reader
FF89atbC
2/28/2009 c2 Edylis
Thanks for the update, I love you.
I'm beginnign to see the makes of a very good writer in your chapter. Like the way you set up the love triangle, not like it hasn't been done befoore but it was a lot more realistic than a few of the renderings I've read in the past.
The only qualms I have with the latest chapter are the length (which is just as much my fault for showing too much preference to Fics with larger chapters, I understand how much of a tight spot some authors are in with regards to their writing time, patience and ability) and the lack of depth in the story.
From an author I like to see a more broad - somewhat quixotical - viewpoint in the story. I'd like to read something from a writer's point of view. This is really the paragon of a great author to me, a observer's angle that reminds me of the freshness of grated orange rind and mowed grass. It's a lot for a reviewer to demand of an author, I know, but I'm just requesting you expand your writing experience.
Hope I haven't come off as a fussy reader. I'm just trying to make my points as clearly as possible.
Now don't make us wait for the next chap to long m'kay?
Thanks for the time
-Cinn
Thanks for the update, I love you.
I'm beginnign to see the makes of a very good writer in your chapter. Like the way you set up the love triangle, not like it hasn't been done befoore but it was a lot more realistic than a few of the renderings I've read in the past.
The only qualms I have with the latest chapter are the length (which is just as much my fault for showing too much preference to Fics with larger chapters, I understand how much of a tight spot some authors are in with regards to their writing time, patience and ability) and the lack of depth in the story.
From an author I like to see a more broad - somewhat quixotical - viewpoint in the story. I'd like to read something from a writer's point of view. This is really the paragon of a great author to me, a observer's angle that reminds me of the freshness of grated orange rind and mowed grass. It's a lot for a reviewer to demand of an author, I know, but I'm just requesting you expand your writing experience.
Hope I haven't come off as a fussy reader. I'm just trying to make my points as clearly as possible.
Now don't make us wait for the next chap to long m'kay?
Thanks for the time
-Cinn
2/27/2009 c2 5Muffin-crumbs
Great chapter and Sakura in distress is always a good thing in my opinion. Don't get me wrong, i think shes a great character just that she doesn't seem like a good fit for naruto.
Any way i have some questions. You mentioned jutsu names in the last chapter's A/N and i want to know. Is this fic heading into action territory? Because you were right when NaruXTayu fics, are generally harem. And from what i've read so far i see promise for what i'm looking for.
Will this follow any cannon or is it complete AU? Seeing as its 7 weeks after Sasuke defected, and he should be on the road with Jiraya. lastly
Also do you have any estimate on how long this is going to be? You don't have to answer this one because I admit it's a rude question, just, i want to know what i am commiting myslef to.
Thank you
5Muffin-crumbsGreat chapter and Sakura in distress is always a good thing in my opinion. Don't get me wrong, i think shes a great character just that she doesn't seem like a good fit for naruto.
Any way i have some questions. You mentioned jutsu names in the last chapter's A/N and i want to know. Is this fic heading into action territory? Because you were right when NaruXTayu fics, are generally harem. And from what i've read so far i see promise for what i'm looking for.
Will this follow any cannon or is it complete AU? Seeing as its 7 weeks after Sasuke defected, and he should be on the road with Jiraya. lastly
Also do you have any estimate on how long this is going to be? You don't have to answer this one because I admit it's a rude question, just, i want to know what i am commiting myslef to.
Thank you