for Murder at 1534 Lane2/16/2009 c4 LucyCrewe11
Wow, so they figured it out! good for them. Like I said before Mystery stories aren't really my thing but you did a pretty good job with this one and the Pevensies were pretty much in character all the way through so that was good as well. I'll bet the Epilogue will be interesting.
Wow, so they figured it out! good for them. Like I said before Mystery stories aren't really my thing but you did a pretty good job with this one and the Pevensies were pretty much in character all the way through so that was good as well. I'll bet the Epilogue will be interesting.
2/14/2009 c3 
69LucyCrewe11
Intresting chapter. I liked the bit about the secret passage rooms thing. that was cool. And the part at the beginning where Edmund searches the books. Also cool.
69LucyCrewe11Intresting chapter. I liked the bit about the secret passage rooms thing. that was cool. And the part at the beginning where Edmund searches the books. Also cool.
2/13/2009 c2 LucyCrewe11
So these kind of stories aren't really my cup of tea, but that fact aside, I just want to say, I think you did a pretty good job with this so far. Anyway, keep up the good work.
So these kind of stories aren't really my cup of tea, but that fact aside, I just want to say, I think you did a pretty good job with this so far. Anyway, keep up the good work.
2/12/2009 c2 3K.J. Almazan
I find this fanfic very interesting, really, I'm looking forward to the next chapter
3K.J. AlmazanI find this fanfic very interesting, really, I'm looking forward to the next chapter