for I Close My Eyes2/12/2009 c1 
3LadyRavenlocke
I really liked this piece. There's a definite poignant emotion to the narrative, and you captured the hope-turned-horror that Dom clearly felt when he finally found his wife. I know it echoed the hope-turned-horror I felt when I found her in-game. A beautifully written piece.
3LadyRavenlockeI really liked this piece. There's a definite poignant emotion to the narrative, and you captured the hope-turned-horror that Dom clearly felt when he finally found his wife. I know it echoed the hope-turned-horror I felt when I found her in-game. A beautifully written piece.
2/12/2009 c1 2LoboDiabloLoneWolf
*sniffle* Poor Dom... that part of the game always choked me up, after all that searching, only to kill one of the people you love the most...
And this captured that, part hope, part despair, part just wanting to blow away as many as Locust. It's sad that he will have to learn to keep going...
Good work.
2LoboDiabloLoneWolf*sniffle* Poor Dom... that part of the game always choked me up, after all that searching, only to kill one of the people you love the most...
And this captured that, part hope, part despair, part just wanting to blow away as many as Locust. It's sad that he will have to learn to keep going...
Good work.