for Let Go4/4/2010 c11 
9SugarhogRose
Okay so let me get this straight- you are going to do 3 different sequels for this story? And they are going to be based on Amy's diffrent decisions?
Cool- can't wait to read them =D
I really liked this story and I loved the demons all telling here what to do! =3 But are they saying choose the demon and everything will be okay and if you choose the hero something will go bad? Sorry just got slightly confussed on that part =/
Will the sequels be SonAmy or ShadAmy or both?
Anyway sorry about al the questions =D Great story, keep it up =D
SugarhogRose x
9SugarhogRoseOkay so let me get this straight- you are going to do 3 different sequels for this story? And they are going to be based on Amy's diffrent decisions?
Cool- can't wait to read them =D
I really liked this story and I loved the demons all telling here what to do! =3 But are they saying choose the demon and everything will be okay and if you choose the hero something will go bad? Sorry just got slightly confussed on that part =/
Will the sequels be SonAmy or ShadAmy or both?
Anyway sorry about al the questions =D Great story, keep it up =D
SugarhogRose x
4/7/2009 c6 6Radman
The sentence: that must have been Shadow, he's such a gentleman has terrible grammar. Also Vector thinking of the island directly after Amy mentions it is so predictable. Maybe you should find a beta-reader, spelling and grammar are somewhat erratic.
6RadmanThe sentence: that must have been Shadow, he's such a gentleman has terrible grammar. Also Vector thinking of the island directly after Amy mentions it is so predictable. Maybe you should find a beta-reader, spelling and grammar are somewhat erratic.
4/7/2009 c5 Radman
You do know that its spelled Chaos Control, not Choas, right? Describe the mob. Were they a "burgeoning mass of humanity that rolled over her like a wave"? Description is golden.
You do know that its spelled Chaos Control, not Choas, right? Describe the mob. Were they a "burgeoning mass of humanity that rolled over her like a wave"? Description is golden.
4/7/2009 c4 Radman
Great chap! Some minor errors, but otherwise fine. Describe 14 old Amy in more detail. How much has she matured?
Great chap! Some minor errors, but otherwise fine. Describe 14 old Amy in more detail. How much has she matured?
4/7/2009 c3 Radman
Go into more detail about your "prince" plot device. Describe: the prison, what Sonic looks like now, and the guard. Some punctuation errors.
Go into more detail about your "prince" plot device. Describe: the prison, what Sonic looks like now, and the guard. Some punctuation errors.
4/7/2009 c2 Radman
Good chap, needs a better chapter name. Revenge, Darkness, anything like that would work. Keep up the good work.
Good chap, needs a better chapter name. Revenge, Darkness, anything like that would work. Keep up the good work.
4/7/2009 c1 Radman
Hmm... a nice start, but there were a couple punctuation errors. Ark is either capitalized or all caps. "tails and knuckles" are capitalized too. Also, chapter length. Generally you never want to publish a chap thats less than 10 words, and you should try to make it at least 2k if you can.
Hmm... a nice start, but there were a couple punctuation errors. Ark is either capitalized or all caps. "tails and knuckles" are capitalized too. Also, chapter length. Generally you never want to publish a chap thats less than 10 words, and you should try to make it at least 2k if you can.
3/14/2009 c11 19Souja O
0.0 ... let's take a check, The gaurds are still meanies; but They're somewhat ok.
Amy choice decides te fate of either Sonic or Shadow.
Great last Chapter!
19Souja O0.0 ... let's take a check, The gaurds are still meanies; but They're somewhat ok.
Amy choice decides te fate of either Sonic or Shadow.
Great last Chapter!
3/11/2009 c11 1ColurfulStar
Great story, but im mad u ended it dat way...
But anywayz i kant wait 4 da sequels!
1ColurfulStarGreat story, but im mad u ended it dat way...
But anywayz i kant wait 4 da sequels!
3/4/2009 c10 ColurfulStar
Diz story iz so amazin!
i sould hav told u in da last chap, but i luved how the demons cam 2 amy in a dream... anywayz i cant wait 4 da next update
Diz story iz so amazin!
i sould hav told u in da last chap, but i luved how the demons cam 2 amy in a dream... anywayz i cant wait 4 da next update
2/26/2009 c6 19Souja O
Vector's a tool. He must die for his incompetence!
Will Tails be okay... or is it too late for him?
19Souja OVector's a tool. He must die for his incompetence!
Will Tails be okay... or is it too late for him?
2/25/2009 c6 18No Line on the Horizon
Intresting story you have going here, i like how you've had Vector and others betraying Sonic's friends for what he's done. It's a nice idea. Good work and hope you update soon!
18No Line on the HorizonIntresting story you have going here, i like how you've had Vector and others betraying Sonic's friends for what he's done. It's a nice idea. Good work and hope you update soon!