for She's Gonna Break7/24/2010 c2 
76LukeAndLorelai Brucas Fan
An for the second time today Rory and Jess almost made me cry! Geez. I love this, it is so... Well, I wouldn't exactly say fun, but I want more and I really do hope you continue it sometime soon.
76LukeAndLorelai Brucas FanAn for the second time today Rory and Jess almost made me cry! Geez. I love this, it is so... Well, I wouldn't exactly say fun, but I want more and I really do hope you continue it sometime soon.
6/12/2010 c2 26Lady.of.Victory.Rising
So is there an end? There really should be an end! We've got the beginning, we've got the middle, where's the rest of it! UPDATE SOON!
*does Grandma Kim's ritual of 108 bows in order to convince you to update*
26Lady.of.Victory.RisingSo is there an end? There really should be an end! We've got the beginning, we've got the middle, where's the rest of it! UPDATE SOON!
*does Grandma Kim's ritual of 108 bows in order to convince you to update*
6/12/2010 c1 Lady.of.Victory.Rising
Okay, I know it's been more than a year since you updated, but you NEED to update now. This has the potential to be absolutely incredible, absolutely amazing, absolutely wonderful.
Hell, if you ever finish this, it could rival Of Books and Music (widely regarded as the best Lit fic ever written) in terms of scope and emotional impact. So yeah, write more soon, will ya? I'm gonna go read the second chapter now and pray that you update! Like, Mrs. Kim praying, because I just don't think regular praying is gonna cut it!
Okay, I know it's been more than a year since you updated, but you NEED to update now. This has the potential to be absolutely incredible, absolutely amazing, absolutely wonderful.
Hell, if you ever finish this, it could rival Of Books and Music (widely regarded as the best Lit fic ever written) in terms of scope and emotional impact. So yeah, write more soon, will ya? I'm gonna go read the second chapter now and pray that you update! Like, Mrs. Kim praying, because I just don't think regular praying is gonna cut it!
8/31/2009 c2 5PlrtzGlrb
Hey, this story is great. I'm going to be uninventive and just say "please continue," because I think it would be just peachy if you did.
5PlrtzGlrbHey, this story is great. I'm going to be uninventive and just say "please continue," because I think it would be just peachy if you did.
3/6/2009 c2 8watergurl123
i love it. you're doing a good job with the characters. please update soon.
8watergurl123i love it. you're doing a good job with the characters. please update soon.
3/6/2009 c2 28ICanSeeYourFace
Wow, hardcore Rory certainly got a wake up call worth the name.
Great story, with even greater potential! I'll be sure to follow this one. :)
You've captured the characters well, there is magic between Rory and Jess, and Logan is just annoyingly cocky enough. Can't wait for more chapters to see where this is heading!
Good work! :)
28ICanSeeYourFaceWow, hardcore Rory certainly got a wake up call worth the name.
Great story, with even greater potential! I'll be sure to follow this one. :)
You've captured the characters well, there is magic between Rory and Jess, and Logan is just annoyingly cocky enough. Can't wait for more chapters to see where this is heading!
Good work! :)
3/6/2009 c2 blackcoldworld
cant wait for the next update!
cant wait for the next update!
2/19/2009 c1 26cherryXbomb
Very cute opening. You really captured Rory's personality, and also the fact that she can call Jess for anything. I cannot wait for an update.
26cherryXbombVery cute opening. You really captured Rory's personality, and also the fact that she can call Jess for anything. I cannot wait for an update.
2/16/2009 c1 5PlrtzGlrb
God, I want to keep reading and never stop.
I thought all the good writers had like, died or something.
So, keep this one going. Please. It would be a shame to waste such an awesome first chapter, with the superb characterization and whatnot. Such a shame.
Write it! Go!
Faithfully,
Taylor
5PlrtzGlrbGod, I want to keep reading and never stop.
I thought all the good writers had like, died or something.
So, keep this one going. Please. It would be a shame to waste such an awesome first chapter, with the superb characterization and whatnot. Such a shame.
Write it! Go!
Faithfully,
Taylor