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3Cleome45
Nitpick: Do you mean "KELL-El," (ie- Superman X) rather than "Kal-EL (original Superman) ? Just wondering.
Other than that, I really enjoyed this. The dialogue was top-notch, and it's great to see all the "regulars" get their time in, even in a short fic.
Cheers. :)
3Cleome45Nitpick: Do you mean "KELL-El," (ie- Superman X) rather than "Kal-EL (original Superman) ? Just wondering.
Other than that, I really enjoyed this. The dialogue was top-notch, and it's great to see all the "regulars" get their time in, even in a short fic.
Cheers. :)
2/17/2009 c1 1Saani
This was so cute! It was nice to see a Saturn Girl and Lightning Lad fic, there's so few of them which I find odd, but whatever.
I think everyone was in character, and there were no obvious errors I picked up, overall, a really nice job. =)
I look forward to reading whatever you happen to come up with next.
~Saani
1SaaniThis was so cute! It was nice to see a Saturn Girl and Lightning Lad fic, there's so few of them which I find odd, but whatever.
I think everyone was in character, and there were no obvious errors I picked up, overall, a really nice job. =)
I look forward to reading whatever you happen to come up with next.
~Saani