for The scavengers of Archenos5/5/2011 c11 
1P.Jackson
Oh and I totally agree that Bungie is selfish to only creat Halo: CE and Halo 2 on the pc.
1P.JacksonOh and I totally agree that Bungie is selfish to only creat Halo: CE and Halo 2 on the pc.
5/5/2011 c12 P.Jackson
It's real good. The battles are very exciting and doesn't make me bored at all. And codythedude, thanks for sharing that a 50 cal is 12.7mm. I didn't know the difference till now.
I WANT A HAVOK SWEET!
It's real good. The battles are very exciting and doesn't make me bored at all. And codythedude, thanks for sharing that a 50 cal is 12.7mm. I didn't know the difference till now.
I WANT A HAVOK SWEET!
9/28/2010 c6 SuddenSummerStorm
Hey I already wrote a review for chapter four but I was rereading it noticed a typo. Normally I don't point out typos mainly because I am Queen Typo on all her glory, lol but in the 38th paragraph I think it was (including dialogue) you Ray as Rat lol. Just thought I'd point that out. Happy writing!
Hey I already wrote a review for chapter four but I was rereading it noticed a typo. Normally I don't point out typos mainly because I am Queen Typo on all her glory, lol but in the 38th paragraph I think it was (including dialogue) you Ray as Rat lol. Just thought I'd point that out. Happy writing!
9/28/2010 c4 SuddenSummerStorm
Hiya! Great rewrite! I'm not sure how much you changd, but I feel like it's has a better flow and the details are much more clear. Can't wait for the next one! Woo hoo!
Hiya! Great rewrite! I'm not sure how much you changd, but I feel like it's has a better flow and the details are much more clear. Can't wait for the next one! Woo hoo!
9/25/2010 c11 SuddenSummerStorm
Such a cool and unique story. Honestly this is awesome! Please do update if you are still indeed writing this fic. I will be checking out your other works!
Such a cool and unique story. Honestly this is awesome! Please do update if you are still indeed writing this fic. I will be checking out your other works!
9/23/2010 c5 SuddenSummerStorm
This story is awesome so far! I really like how your battle scenes are interesting and flow really well. Please do keep updating and/or rewriting chapters ( are you trying to fix it up? I thought it was good but hey always room for improvement) I will continue to read your story and will review once I'm done! Bye!
This story is awesome so far! I really like how your battle scenes are interesting and flow really well. Please do keep updating and/or rewriting chapters ( are you trying to fix it up? I thought it was good but hey always room for improvement) I will continue to read your story and will review once I'm done! Bye!
9/12/2010 c12 codythedude
Dude great story. You should check on some minor grammar and spelling errors but thats about it. BTW the hog uses a 50 cal not a 50 mm, 50 mm is like this wide. / so yeah other than that you have a great story. Oh and a 50 cal is 12.7 mm
Dude great story. You should check on some minor grammar and spelling errors but thats about it. BTW the hog uses a 50 cal not a 50 mm, 50 mm is like this wide. / so yeah other than that you have a great story. Oh and a 50 cal is 12.7 mm
9/4/2010 c10 Wraith Five
I agree with this entirely, but I heard Halo 3 PC was coming out sometime next year...
I agree with this entirely, but I heard Halo 3 PC was coming out sometime next year...
4/21/2009 c1 8DelVarO
yeah, thats one of my problems, i will try to fix those problems in the next chapters, like giving at least a measure of a backstory about the characters.
and yeah i really shouldnt worry much about the reviews but eh, this is my first story ever (so to say) and i really wanted someone to review it and tell me how it is :D
thanks for the review, keep reading and have fun!
8DelVarOyeah, thats one of my problems, i will try to fix those problems in the next chapters, like giving at least a measure of a backstory about the characters.
and yeah i really shouldnt worry much about the reviews but eh, this is my first story ever (so to say) and i really wanted someone to review it and tell me how it is :D
thanks for the review, keep reading and have fun!
4/20/2009 c5 4Private Jenkins
Hey this story isn't half bad for a first fic, I'd say the only thing you need to work on is who the characters are... you kinda just throw them out there, but besides that pretty good. Btw dont worry bout the # of reviews you get, I only got like 5 reviews on mine but at least you know ppl are reading it. Keep up the good work!
4Private JenkinsHey this story isn't half bad for a first fic, I'd say the only thing you need to work on is who the characters are... you kinda just throw them out there, but besides that pretty good. Btw dont worry bout the # of reviews you get, I only got like 5 reviews on mine but at least you know ppl are reading it. Keep up the good work!
2/18/2009 c2 1ShadowLea
Nice :)
Is there really anything for me to say i haven't said? :p Can't correct you on any facts either, i'd be owning myself if i did XD i'll get back to kicking the hotmail server now. no luck so far... :(
not the normal 'keep 'em coming' comments either.. that's really kinda my fault.. :p yeah yeah i'm on it! :p
1ShadowLeaNice :)
Is there really anything for me to say i haven't said? :p Can't correct you on any facts either, i'd be owning myself if i did XD i'll get back to kicking the hotmail server now. no luck so far... :(
not the normal 'keep 'em coming' comments either.. that's really kinda my fault.. :p yeah yeah i'm on it! :p