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5Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom
Aww, this is such a cute story! I can't wait to read more!
-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.
5Pearl Bramble of WillowbottomAww, this is such a cute story! I can't wait to read more!
-Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom.
6/8/2010 c4 jjjc
It seems the pevenie children's early years were pretty hectic.
" Mummy, where do babies come from?" LOL.
As I said, I like the story, but I would enjoy it so much more
if it wasn't so.. I don't know.. unfeeling.
I'm not talking about your charectors emotions, you don't really use ? marks and overuse commas!
It's just a suggestion, I've read your other fanfics and I didn't notice grammer mistakes, just typeing errors.
It seems the pevenie children's early years were pretty hectic.
" Mummy, where do babies come from?" LOL.
As I said, I like the story, but I would enjoy it so much more
if it wasn't so.. I don't know.. unfeeling.
I'm not talking about your charectors emotions, you don't really use ? marks and overuse commas!
It's just a suggestion, I've read your other fanfics and I didn't notice grammer mistakes, just typeing errors.
6/8/2010 c2 jjjc
I like the idea and the story over all, your spelling's good, but there are a lot of commas and some capitalization mistakes.
You're a very talented writer, I think it wuold be excellent
for you to pay attention to grammer.
I like the idea and the story over all, your spelling's good, but there are a lot of commas and some capitalization mistakes.
You're a very talented writer, I think it wuold be excellent
for you to pay attention to grammer.
2/26/2009 c4 8Corilyne
I had to mention this now (I was going to review when I finished the chapters you had posted), but I really am allergic to peas, and potatoes, and turkey. Scary, huh?
8CorilyneI had to mention this now (I was going to review when I finished the chapters you had posted), but I really am allergic to peas, and potatoes, and turkey. Scary, huh?
2/26/2009 c5 90Lady Eleanor Boleyn
Poor Peter! His classmates are so mean! Just because they don't lisp, doesn't mean they won't at some point!
I love the way that, although Peter's seven, and doesn't want to be treated like a baby, he can't help but be pleased by his grandmother's comment about how precious he is!
It was a great story - well done!
Please write more stories about the Pevensie's as they grew up - I'd really love to read them!
90Lady Eleanor BoleynPoor Peter! His classmates are so mean! Just because they don't lisp, doesn't mean they won't at some point!
I love the way that, although Peter's seven, and doesn't want to be treated like a baby, he can't help but be pleased by his grandmother's comment about how precious he is!
It was a great story - well done!
Please write more stories about the Pevensie's as they grew up - I'd really love to read them!
2/26/2009 c5 5Simply Ella
This was such a cute story. Will you please do one like this for the other kids too?
5Simply EllaThis was such a cute story. Will you please do one like this for the other kids too?
2/26/2009 c5 69LucyCrewe11
Aw, that was cute. That was mean of the kids to make him say his sisters names just to hear him lisp. Poor thing. Good chapter and a nice way to end the fic. you should do fics like thsi for the other three pevensies too.
69LucyCrewe11Aw, that was cute. That was mean of the kids to make him say his sisters names just to hear him lisp. Poor thing. Good chapter and a nice way to end the fic. you should do fics like thsi for the other three pevensies too.
2/24/2009 c4 6Peace-Love-And-Mokneys7112
lol awsome.I loved the last part, where nana's like, that's what i'm for lol
6Peace-Love-And-Mokneys7112lol awsome.I loved the last part, where nana's like, that's what i'm for lol
2/24/2009 c4 5Simply Ella
Good story, little Peter is so cute! I love this part:"That's cause she takes the peas out and Mummy gave me a trillion and one peas and it's too much I think I might die and then you and Mummy will have that on your conscience." It made me laugh so hard.Can't wait to read more.
5Simply EllaGood story, little Peter is so cute! I love this part:"That's cause she takes the peas out and Mummy gave me a trillion and one peas and it's too much I think I might die and then you and Mummy will have that on your conscience." It made me laugh so hard.Can't wait to read more.
2/24/2009 c4 69LucyCrewe11
great chapter. Yay, the site finally let me log in! IT wouldn't let me for like a couple of days! I was going crazy. I can update soon! Yay!
Anyway, loved this chapter. So very funny and a great read. Please update soon.
69LucyCrewe11great chapter. Yay, the site finally let me log in! IT wouldn't let me for like a couple of days! I was going crazy. I can update soon! Yay!
Anyway, loved this chapter. So very funny and a great read. Please update soon.
2/21/2009 c3 LucyCrewe11
(Yes, It's me, I'm just not signed in is all)
Why did you take it off and re-post it? Just wondering.
(Yes, It's me, I'm just not signed in is all)
Why did you take it off and re-post it? Just wondering.
2/21/2009 c3 LucyCrewe11
what a cute chapter! I loved it. Very adorable. So funny how Edmund tried to pin the blame about stealing snacks on Lucy. And I liked Peter forgetting to tell her about the snack until the last minute.
what a cute chapter! I loved it. Very adorable. So funny how Edmund tried to pin the blame about stealing snacks on Lucy. And I liked Peter forgetting to tell her about the snack until the last minute.