for Shinobi of the Ebon Blade5/17 c15 Guest
Naruto: No wonder she wore that jacket, those things are freaking watermelons!" Lmao!
Naruto: No wonder she wore that jacket, those things are freaking watermelons!" Lmao!
5/7 c1 Guest
How can i tell he will come back a ppwer freak...
Lets just say deathknites are tanks... Giant giant tanks
How can i tell he will come back a ppwer freak...
Lets just say deathknites are tanks... Giant giant tanks
3/27 c1 SNERDERMER
The highest rank anyone has ever gotten in a bingo book is S rank, its the highest period, why do people insist on suggesting that someone can get a higher rank then... Say hashirama senju? It's not gonna happen. Saying triple S is saying he's three times more dangerous then Hashirama...
The highest rank anyone has ever gotten in a bingo book is S rank, its the highest period, why do people insist on suggesting that someone can get a higher rank then... Say hashirama senju? It's not gonna happen. Saying triple S is saying he's three times more dangerous then Hashirama...
3/19 c26 DasChinButton
Wow, nice work so far. I was unable to put down my computer since I started reading this story. I feel that it could use a bit more interaction between Naru/Hina and Grime/Kure. Other than that the story has a good amount of action and it flows rather well for a crossover. Keep up the good work and you'll be able to rival Kingkakashi before you know it.
Wow, nice work so far. I was unable to put down my computer since I started reading this story. I feel that it could use a bit more interaction between Naru/Hina and Grime/Kure. Other than that the story has a good amount of action and it flows rather well for a crossover. Keep up the good work and you'll be able to rival Kingkakashi before you know it.
2/19 c15 Guest
at the end there I have to say...WTF?! O_o
at the end there I have to say...WTF?! O_o
2/19 c7 Guest
Finally someone says Sasuke looks gay and weak! LMAO
Finally someone says Sasuke looks gay and weak! LMAO
2/12 c2 Guest
at the end of much of the dialouge, u end with a , instead of an .
at the end of much of the dialouge, u end with a , instead of an .
12/29/2012 c9 Drizzt
is haku really a girl or is haku going to be a boy.
i perfer girl just saying
is haku really a girl or is haku going to be a boy.
i perfer girl just saying
12/29/2012 c7 Drizzt
heh they do not know what awats them on the brigde hahahahaha
heh they do not know what awats them on the brigde hahahahaha
12/29/2012 c6 Drizzt
i like grims he reminds me of Guts from the manga berserk.
i like grims he reminds me of Guts from the manga berserk.
12/29/2012 c5 Drizzt
yu make t sound so real, wow it kinda makes me wanta cry.
not really cause i hae seen way worse. but still good job! :}
yu make t sound so real, wow it kinda makes me wanta cry.
not really cause i hae seen way worse. but still good job! :}
12/29/2012 c4 Drizzt
** ya far side forever
resepct for athur now at 100%
** ya far side forever
resepct for athur now at 100%
12/29/2012 c2 Drizzt
you said fugly instad of ugly please look over other chapters and correct errors, please!
you said fugly instad of ugly please look over other chapters and correct errors, please!

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