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5/17 c15 Guest
Naruto: No wonder she wore that jacket, those things are freaking watermelons!" Lmao!
5/7 c1 Guest
How can i tell he will come back a ppwer freak...

Lets just say deathknites are tanks... Giant giant tanks
3/27 c1 SNERDERMER
The highest rank anyone has ever gotten in a bingo book is S rank, its the highest period, why do people insist on suggesting that someone can get a higher rank then... Say hashirama senju? It's not gonna happen. Saying triple S is saying he's three times more dangerous then Hashirama...
3/19 c26 DasChinButton
Wow, nice work so far. I was unable to put down my computer since I started reading this story. I feel that it could use a bit more interaction between Naru/Hina and Grime/Kure. Other than that the story has a good amount of action and it flows rather well for a crossover. Keep up the good work and you'll be able to rival Kingkakashi before you know it.
2/27 c13 Kinji Loves Socialism
Tis a great story
2/19 c15 Guest
at the end there I have to say...WTF?! O_o
2/19 c7 Guest
Finally someone says Sasuke looks gay and weak! LMAO
2/12 c2 Guest
at the end of much of the dialouge, u end with a , instead of an .
1/17 c9 2Naruto1357
lol dude you said "Uzumaking Naruto" in the conversation with Haku. Lol
12/29/2012 c9 Drizzt
is haku really a girl or is haku going to be a boy.

i perfer girl just saying
12/29/2012 c7 Drizzt
heh they do not know what awats them on the brigde hahahahaha
12/29/2012 c6 Drizzt
i like grims he reminds me of Guts from the manga berserk.
12/29/2012 c5 Drizzt
yu make t sound so real, wow it kinda makes me wanta cry.

not really cause i hae seen way worse. but still good job! :}
12/29/2012 c4 Drizzt
** ya far side forever

resepct for athur now at 100%
12/29/2012 c2 Drizzt
you said fugly instad of ugly please look over other chapters and correct errors, please!
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