for Storm Winds3/29/2010 c1 pacificuser
Nice work,I hope to read more of your writing! Will you ever write a part-2 to this story?
Nice work,I hope to read more of your writing! Will you ever write a part-2 to this story?
2/21/2010 c9 
1Archie from the bunker
Huh. I'm not sure why, but I feel a little disappointed.
Don't get me wrong, the story was great. Characters were interesting, fight scenes were well detailed so they were easy to follow and of course the storyline was fantastic. I also have to, once again, mention how your enviromenta details make me ashamed, since the best enviro details I can seem to come up with are 'birds were singing'.
The 'wolf-hadoken' sure took me by suprise. But it only figures that someone like the Daiwolf should be more then just 'Garou SMASH' when it comes to combat.
As to why I feel dissappointed, maybe it's because the story was just so damn good, that any ending, no matter what, would feel anticlimatic. The whole adventure was suc a roller-coaster of action that I didn't want it to stop, and when it did, I feel **.
Well, when I can't point out anything else negative about a story then the fact that it ended, I'd say that count as one good story.
PS: the mental Image if Isaac casually putting bullets in to werewolves heads as he watches the final fight craks me up xD.
1Archie from the bunkerHuh. I'm not sure why, but I feel a little disappointed.
Don't get me wrong, the story was great. Characters were interesting, fight scenes were well detailed so they were easy to follow and of course the storyline was fantastic. I also have to, once again, mention how your enviromenta details make me ashamed, since the best enviro details I can seem to come up with are 'birds were singing'.
The 'wolf-hadoken' sure took me by suprise. But it only figures that someone like the Daiwolf should be more then just 'Garou SMASH' when it comes to combat.
As to why I feel dissappointed, maybe it's because the story was just so damn good, that any ending, no matter what, would feel anticlimatic. The whole adventure was suc a roller-coaster of action that I didn't want it to stop, and when it did, I feel **.
Well, when I can't point out anything else negative about a story then the fact that it ended, I'd say that count as one good story.
PS: the mental Image if Isaac casually putting bullets in to werewolves heads as he watches the final fight craks me up xD.
1/28/2010 c8 Archie from the bunker
I have to ask you something. Silver is harmful to weres, right? Then how come thay have silver claws themself? Shouldn't the silver cause the... like, a rash or something :P
Sorry, that sounded nice and stupid... I just mean that in Were: the Apocalypse, if a were carrises silver, his gnosis rating drops by one. Some weres also have a gift where they can turn their claws to silver, but this causes a little damage to themselves too.
This isn't really so much 'critique' as it is me being a qurious dunce. Sorry in advance.
I have to ask you something. Silver is harmful to weres, right? Then how come thay have silver claws themself? Shouldn't the silver cause the... like, a rash or something :P
Sorry, that sounded nice and stupid... I just mean that in Were: the Apocalypse, if a were carrises silver, his gnosis rating drops by one. Some weres also have a gift where they can turn their claws to silver, but this causes a little damage to themselves too.
This isn't really so much 'critique' as it is me being a qurious dunce. Sorry in advance.
1/19/2010 c7 Archie from the bunker
Ooh! Kaze was badass enough when she was human, but now that she's a werewolf I feel like she could tear all those other wimpy wolves to pieces in seconds!
Damn you and your cliffhangers!
Ooh! Kaze was badass enough when she was human, but now that she's a werewolf I feel like she could tear all those other wimpy wolves to pieces in seconds!
Damn you and your cliffhangers!
1/3/2010 c5 Archie from the bunker
Really nice. Lots of enviromental details. And it had the kind of ''why won't this f*cking thing die already'' feeling that is fitting when fighting a bigass werewolf.
Really nice. Lots of enviromental details. And it had the kind of ''why won't this f*cking thing die already'' feeling that is fitting when fighting a bigass werewolf.
12/28/2009 c4 Archie from the bunker
All around, this has been a really good story. My only small complaint is that the daiwolf didn't put up as much of a fight that I had hoped, but then again I have a huge boner for werewolf anyway so it doesn't count.
Hope to see more soon.
All around, this has been a really good story. My only small complaint is that the daiwolf didn't put up as much of a fight that I had hoped, but then again I have a huge boner for werewolf anyway so it doesn't count.
Hope to see more soon.
12/26/2009 c3 Nice
*squeel*
This is awesome, cant wait for the next part
*squeel*
This is awesome, cant wait for the next part
8/30/2009 c1 3drewbie
How's that explain Kaze becoming a werewolf? Poetic as it was it just left me with questions. If you were a bard, I would be dropping jugs of alcohol in front of you to loosen your tongue.
3drewbieHow's that explain Kaze becoming a werewolf? Poetic as it was it just left me with questions. If you were a bard, I would be dropping jugs of alcohol in front of you to loosen your tongue.
4/11/2009 c1 6Yokai Hebitori
Excellant descriptive paragraphs; this was good prologue, and I hope the chapters to come are just as good.^^
Keep Up The Good Work!
(^_^) Yokai Summoner
6Yokai HebitoriExcellant descriptive paragraphs; this was good prologue, and I hope the chapters to come are just as good.^^
Keep Up The Good Work!
(^_^) Yokai Summoner