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5/28/2010 c15 6Miss Basset
This is probably one of my favorite Merlin fics I have read so far, just thought you would like to know.

A few hours ago, I got bored so I looked up Arthur and Gwen up on Wikipedia (the best place in the world), and I started to become very angry with both Lancelot and Gwen. I mean, how could someone do that to someone as amazing and wonderful and hot as Arthur? But then, after reading your epilogue, I remembered that Arthur has Merlin, which has to be just about one of the best pairings ever. So everyone is (slightly) happy.

-Basset
4/24/2010 c7 A fan
omg I cry so much just, I hope it everything feels well, I cannot endure it, but you well write up to now
4/7/2010 c15 Mercury's Winter
Loved it! Awesome job, love the angst and the h/c, very well written. Good job with the characters as well. Probably could have benefited from a good beta but didn't take away from how much I liked this one. Thanks!
2/18/2010 c15 7Oreal770
that. was. beautiful *wipes a tear away*

liked the reference to 'ghost' at the end... very romantic :/

well i was almost in tears, then kinda smiling, then grinning like an idiot, then sad, then almost in tears again!

what IS this madness!

but seriously, amazing

Oreal
2/8/2010 c15 12Rokkis
Huh... you need to check this story as completed btw. And honestly I think you should have ended this one chapter earlier... this last chapter seemed so unnecessary and pointless. Chapter 14 ended well and I really don't think this last chapter adds anything to the original plot.

Cheers!
12/19/2009 c15 Sitanya
Well I was a little surprise to find that there was more than friendship between the boys (because it wasn't written in the summary or in the Genre of the story). Maybe it is because I didn't bother to read the authors notes :P

Nevertheless, it doesn't really matter because I LOVE YAOI!. xD And this story is so cool ! I started to watch Merlin not long ago (today xD) and stopped at the thenth episode ; WHY DIDN'T HE REVEAL HIMSELF ! It was so frustrating xD I would have loved to see the show continue with the fact that Arthur knows about Merlin. Well...

And then I started to search for a different story where Merlin had to reveal his power... And here I found yours ! Incredible. It... just fit ! A little of angnst, love and... so cool ! The only thing : I would have liked a different ending... I understand it, but I would have liked that Gwen and Artur were married just for the show and that each of them would have there own love story behind the scenes...

The complication of the end just add more angst that I find a little useless. But... apart from that... GREAT WORK !
12/2/2009 c15 8FalseReflections
LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic. I thought the part where Arthur kissed Merlin after rescuing him made the perfect ending. The rest that came afterwards became a little dull because the suspense has already gone.

HOWEVER, I still HEART this fic because. firstly, it is one of the better written Merthur fics. Secondly, enough effort was made to develop the character's emotions and reactions. Thirdly, because there was Merlin acting all docile and Arthur beating himself up over that (oh yes) and lastly, because you made a genuine effort to link it all back to the original legend which we all know and love.

THANK YOU for this fic.

Keep writing!
11/5/2009 c10 1screenjunkie
W.O.W!

Thats all I can say...amazing lolx
9/27/2009 c15 Lobster3
Great story, but you still have it marked as in progress. You should change it to completed or people will filter out your story
9/14/2009 c2 65vertigoSWAY
Arthur's such a meanie! xD

But I trust the story so...
8/19/2009 c15 22FireChildSlytherin5
Great story. :)
7/24/2009 c15 CrayonsPink
Fantastic job! I loved it!
7/8/2009 c15 29heartfallen
Very interesting and captivating story. It was a pleasure to read
7/1/2009 c12 6kattastic999
Uther/Gaius? *shudders violently* ugh! thats disgusting! who the hell would EVER follow that ship? UGH! *shudders again* huhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuh, gives me the willies just thinking about it.
7/1/2009 c9 kattastic999
two things. One, i know who Sir Lucan is! and two. WHAT? you cant give up SWEARING! thats just unnatural!
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