for Stargate: the new Alliance10/7/2012 c6 Fenrisulven13
I dont remember if Ive allready commented on this story but anyway!
GREAT story!
Have you put this story on hold?
I dont remember if Ive allready commented on this story but anyway!
GREAT story!
Have you put this story on hold?
7/2/2012 c6 
6synbad2
Great story line so far...
I do have to say this though... Outbound Flight failed due to the actions of on Chiss Commander by the name of Thrawn...
6synbad2Great story line so far...
I do have to say this though... Outbound Flight failed due to the actions of on Chiss Commander by the name of Thrawn...
4/13/2012 c6 lovguru23
bad ass
dud. relly love it
bad ass
dud. relly love it
8/16/2011 c6 Hawkcam1996
Here's a strategy I would suggest to SG1 for this situation if I could. And I'm referring to the 2 star destroyers not the situation they were in afterwards. They should've took down the first one's shields and beamed a nuke inside, then go for the second one and detonate the nuke when the second one's shields are down. Then, while detonating the nuke they beam another one into the other star destroyer and then concentrate on the landing crafts with the troops. This way, they can take them all out and not let any escape or land on the surface. But I'm not complaining about the way they did it because I've been waiting for the stargate program to be revealed to the public. But if I was there (which would be the coolest thing ever) I would tell them what I said before and then tell them to set up a mine field by placing nukes in areas that would make it impossible to get througb without touching one, and making tbe nukes so sensitive that the slightest touch would detonate them. But good story.
Here's a strategy I would suggest to SG1 for this situation if I could. And I'm referring to the 2 star destroyers not the situation they were in afterwards. They should've took down the first one's shields and beamed a nuke inside, then go for the second one and detonate the nuke when the second one's shields are down. Then, while detonating the nuke they beam another one into the other star destroyer and then concentrate on the landing crafts with the troops. This way, they can take them all out and not let any escape or land on the surface. But I'm not complaining about the way they did it because I've been waiting for the stargate program to be revealed to the public. But if I was there (which would be the coolest thing ever) I would tell them what I said before and then tell them to set up a mine field by placing nukes in areas that would make it impossible to get througb without touching one, and making tbe nukes so sensitive that the slightest touch would detonate them. But good story.
4/28/2011 c1 2o0Aurie0o
Hey there! :) Nice story, I'm liking your creativity so far. The biggest thing that bugs me, however, is the lack of punctuation and correct grammar/spelling. When I see that, I end up not wanting to read the story, no matter how creative it may be. I see true potential for this story if you fix those things up a bit!
2o0Aurie0oHey there! :) Nice story, I'm liking your creativity so far. The biggest thing that bugs me, however, is the lack of punctuation and correct grammar/spelling. When I see that, I end up not wanting to read the story, no matter how creative it may be. I see true potential for this story if you fix those things up a bit!
4/24/2010 c5 stark40763
So I guess now we find out if Asgard/Ancient/Earth/Goa'uld Tech all combined into a mish-mash of ships can stand up against The Imperials...though if it was a fight between Atlantis and The Imperials, then it would be a different story. Well, if atlantis was fully powered that is...
So I guess now we find out if Asgard/Ancient/Earth/Goa'uld Tech all combined into a mish-mash of ships can stand up against The Imperials...though if it was a fight between Atlantis and The Imperials, then it would be a different story. Well, if atlantis was fully powered that is...
4/24/2010 c3 stark40763
Even odds that when Jedi die, they ascend. We all know what that means of course, that they have to play by The Alteran's rules, whether they like it or not.
Even odds that when Jedi die, they ascend. We all know what that means of course, that they have to play by The Alteran's rules, whether they like it or not.
4/24/2010 c2 stark40763
Thrawn really should have done his research better. Though if he did, he might have went after Earth first, and that wouldn't be good.
Thrawn really should have done his research better. Though if he did, he might have went after Earth first, and that wouldn't be good.
4/24/2010 c1 stark40763
So The Star Wars movies exist in your story? I gotta say I love that concept, because who doesn't want The Force and Jedi to be real?
So The Star Wars movies exist in your story? I gotta say I love that concept, because who doesn't want The Force and Jedi to be real?
12/13/2009 c1 2jason864 sg-1
DONT STOP! U should have earth with more ships and reaserching planatary defences and new ships it would be awsome
2jason864 sg-1DONT STOP! U should have earth with more ships and reaserching planatary defences and new ships it would be awsome
12/3/2009 c6 1hilldill
Please continue with this awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
1hilldillPlease continue with this awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
12/1/2009 c3 4RJLCyberPunk
What is the secret they fear? SGverse hyperdrive? Ascension? All of the above?
4RJLCyberPunkWhat is the secret they fear? SGverse hyperdrive? Ascension? All of the above?
12/1/2009 c2 RJLCyberPunk
When it comes to Stargates one needs a really serious blast in the multigigaton range to take them out. Such as the MK9 gate buster bomb. And given the fact that most settlements are built near the gates would mean wiping out the whole planet population they intent to conquer in one stroke. I think Thrawn would be inerested in learning what exactly kind of devices are those and how he could use them himself to his advantage. Once he does all he has to do to prevent the natives from escaping would be to dial the intended target's gate so they cannot dial out and flee from the invasion. That's how the Goa'uld empire did it and it worked for them brilliantly until the Tau'ri showed up that is. :D
When it comes to Stargates one needs a really serious blast in the multigigaton range to take them out. Such as the MK9 gate buster bomb. And given the fact that most settlements are built near the gates would mean wiping out the whole planet population they intent to conquer in one stroke. I think Thrawn would be inerested in learning what exactly kind of devices are those and how he could use them himself to his advantage. Once he does all he has to do to prevent the natives from escaping would be to dial the intended target's gate so they cannot dial out and flee from the invasion. That's how the Goa'uld empire did it and it worked for them brilliantly until the Tau'ri showed up that is. :D
11/29/2009 c5 RJLCyberPunk
OK First of I like the idea of an invasion of the SG universe by the SW universe.Especilly having tried one myself having said that keep in mind that SG hyperspace and SW hyperspace are pretty different. You have not specified which hyperdrive the imperials are suing but given the fact that they have only conquered very primitive worlds leads me to believe they are still using their own which has severe restrictions around gravitational fields unlike SGverse hyperdrive. Other than that keep up the good work.
OK First of I like the idea of an invasion of the SG universe by the SW universe.Especilly having tried one myself having said that keep in mind that SG hyperspace and SW hyperspace are pretty different. You have not specified which hyperdrive the imperials are suing but given the fact that they have only conquered very primitive worlds leads me to believe they are still using their own which has severe restrictions around gravitational fields unlike SGverse hyperdrive. Other than that keep up the good work.