for Aurum Potestas Est6/5/2009 c1 
4ThomasMoore
Great story! Also where do you write your stories before you upload them on the document manager? I'm new here.
4ThomasMooreGreat story! Also where do you write your stories before you upload them on the document manager? I'm new here.
3/14/2009 c1 jonove1203
I liked the story but it was just kinda saying what happened in the book. And it's Aurum Est Protestas. Keep on writing:)
I liked the story but it was just kinda saying what happened in the book. And it's Aurum Est Protestas. Keep on writing:)
3/13/2009 c1 2Avery72
Although you have a nice flow to your writing, the ideas presented don't seem that original. If you tried writing a full-length story about whatever else I'm sure you'd have success.
I really enjoyed the "Bay of Kola" connection to actual cans of carbonated liquid (aka soda).
-Avery
2Avery72Although you have a nice flow to your writing, the ideas presented don't seem that original. If you tried writing a full-length story about whatever else I'm sure you'd have success.
I really enjoyed the "Bay of Kola" connection to actual cans of carbonated liquid (aka soda).
-Avery
3/13/2009 c1 sorry no names
short, but pretty good.
i doubt you need me to tell you this but good job
short, but pretty good.
i doubt you need me to tell you this but good job