for Clean up7/5/2009 c15 crazy psychopath with an axe
finish the story please the story is very good but chapter five is just chapter four again
finish the story please the story is very good but chapter five is just chapter four again
4/16/2009 c14 ReimeiOokami
Yaya there play fighting again, that makes this story special.^^
~flixemon~
Yaya there play fighting again, that makes this story special.^^
~flixemon~
4/15/2009 c13 ReimeiOokami
It was an all right chapter, but I did notice the cchange of style and were was the play fighting, other than that good ideas.^^
It was an all right chapter, but I did notice the cchange of style and were was the play fighting, other than that good ideas.^^
3/29/2009 c12 
18ReimeiOokami
Yay two chapters in a day!
Yep I'm still here and reveiwing, and I'm loving these chapters!
~flixemon~
18ReimeiOokamiYay two chapters in a day!
Yep I'm still here and reveiwing, and I'm loving these chapters!
~flixemon~
3/21/2009 c8 ReimeiOokami
Yay there finally on a date, I think it would be cool if tai spyed on them or if davis stalked them I like storys like that and i noticed this chapter was a tad longer than the others.
Yay there finally on a date, I think it would be cool if tai spyed on them or if davis stalked them I like storys like that and i noticed this chapter was a tad longer than the others.
3/20/2009 c7 ReimeiOokami
I only started reading your chapters today and they seem to go very fast and sometimes I don't know whats going on, but I like the fact that T.K. and Kari keep play arguing.(They are PLAY arguing write?) ;-D
I only started reading your chapters today and they seem to go very fast and sometimes I don't know whats going on, but I like the fact that T.K. and Kari keep play arguing.(They are PLAY arguing write?) ;-D
3/15/2009 c1 3Pokemon Ranger Kellyn
oh.. quite fast but still comedicial.. good to see Hikari and Takeru's fanfic..
3Pokemon Ranger Kellynoh.. quite fast but still comedicial.. good to see Hikari and Takeru's fanfic..