for A Few Words8/21/2011 c19 
52YinYangWhiteTiger
I love this series.
here are my words:
Abuse:
Orphanges:
Raijin:
Misunderstood:
Outcasted:
Forgiveness:
52YinYangWhiteTigerI love this series.
here are my words:
Abuse:
Orphanges:
Raijin:
Misunderstood:
Outcasted:
Forgiveness:
5/29/2011 c19 RJJJ
Lol at word 157 and 162! Ah, it's been awhile since I was able to read some fanfiction. Keep up the good work!
Lol at word 157 and 162! Ah, it's been awhile since I was able to read some fanfiction. Keep up the good work!
4/4/2011 c1 2Amaranthe Socotrine
i hope you continue this. it's really funny and i read it a very long time ago, but have only just summed up the courage to review. lol. so yeah, continue, please?
2Amaranthe Socotrinei hope you continue this. it's really funny and i read it a very long time ago, but have only just summed up the courage to review. lol. so yeah, continue, please?
8/6/2010 c19 26PhinalPhantasy
Well that was a fun set. I liked X-treme, it was cute. Raven, throat, and change were pretty funny. I also really loved makeup.
Now for some suggestions: How about Lotion and Maiden, random words that came at the top of my head lol.
26PhinalPhantasyWell that was a fun set. I liked X-treme, it was cute. Raven, throat, and change were pretty funny. I also really loved makeup.
Now for some suggestions: How about Lotion and Maiden, random words that came at the top of my head lol.
7/27/2010 c19 2Lonely Citadel
Lovely, as usual! Though I doubt Fujin would appreciate me describing her as such.
Could you use the word Dollet in the next one? I love it in Dollet :
2Lonely CitadelLovely, as usual! Though I doubt Fujin would appreciate me describing her as such.
Could you use the word Dollet in the next one? I love it in Dollet :
7/9/2010 c18 Lonely Citadel
Hahah poor Rinoa! This chapter was gold, as always.
Is it okay if I request another word? I'd like to see Raven in there.
Hahah poor Rinoa! This chapter was gold, as always.
Is it okay if I request another word? I'd like to see Raven in there.
7/9/2010 c18 26PhinalPhantasy
Wonderful set :) I loved them all, it's hard to pick a fave, though Fujin dumping popcorn on Rinoa was priceless!
26PhinalPhantasyWonderful set :) I loved them all, it's hard to pick a fave, though Fujin dumping popcorn on Rinoa was priceless!
2/24/2010 c17 RJJJ
i really liked that mimic one! i could just imagine what that little scene. :D
i don't know if i packed on words the times before, so i'm only going to throw one at you...
"parody"
keep up the funny/sweet/awesome/fujinxseifer work!
XD
i really liked that mimic one! i could just imagine what that little scene. :D
i don't know if i packed on words the times before, so i'm only going to throw one at you...
"parody"
keep up the funny/sweet/awesome/fujinxseifer work!
XD
1/25/2010 c17 PhinalPhantasy
That was a fun set. So I'm guessing the posse of younger people were the younger versions of Seifer, Fujin, and Raijin from KH II? Smile I think was one of the best and Pale was hilarious! Got to love the meaning of life according to Raijin lol.
That was a fun set. So I'm guessing the posse of younger people were the younger versions of Seifer, Fujin, and Raijin from KH II? Smile I think was one of the best and Pale was hilarious! Got to love the meaning of life according to Raijin lol.
1/21/2010 c17 5Xeno the Hedgehog
some of those were great!
For "pale" I'm surprised you didn't say anything about Raijin giving Seifer a congratulatory slap on the back.
5Xeno the Hedgehogsome of those were great!
For "pale" I'm surprised you didn't say anything about Raijin giving Seifer a congratulatory slap on the back.
12/14/2009 c16 2Lonely Citadel
Aww. I wanted to suggest jealousy. Oh, well. I liked the paragraph on Seifer's combustion the best. Could you do a scenario where Fujin sees Rinoa and Squall being all romantic and gets jealous? I can't think of a word, though.
2Lonely CitadelAww. I wanted to suggest jealousy. Oh, well. I liked the paragraph on Seifer's combustion the best. Could you do a scenario where Fujin sees Rinoa and Squall being all romantic and gets jealous? I can't think of a word, though.