for Window to the Soul9/6/2012 c2 
2Speedykitten1643
Hmm this story is interesting so far though I wish there were more chapters to read. It's been 3 whole years since you last updated so I seriously hope you haven't forgotten this story and that you will update it soon.
2Speedykitten1643Hmm this story is interesting so far though I wish there were more chapters to read. It's been 3 whole years since you last updated so I seriously hope you haven't forgotten this story and that you will update it soon.
8/4/2012 c2 Luke Fon Fabre
awesome
awesome
6/20/2010 c2 2Kotei-Heika
Gee, Hime-san, I gotta tell you I feel a bit bad about this but I know very little about Pokemon. Do you mind emailing me some pictures of your characters as well as brief histories? ^^;;
The whole tortured assassin thing makes me interested, though; nothing like a brooding hero just waiting to be enlightened by a sparkling heroine (or hero) and save him from himself so here's my suggestion...
(takes deep breath)
Now I'm pretty sure you want these characters to see some really gruesome experiments combining humans and Pokemons to make the perfect soldiers so I would suggest you get over that and have them divide reactions; the ones against his ideas should keep it to themselvs until a much more convenient time when it comes to overthrow him and the others who like it to fawn over Mr. ARROGANT SMIRKY; also, get him interested in the trainor you want to highlight in this story and send Lucario after him but have the tables turn and Lucario gets captured instead; how will be entirely up to you; let him get enlightened by said trainor and slowly gain free will to judge right from wrong that way until he takes a full 180 on his loyalties!
(pant...)
Anyways, send me a holler if you want some more suggestions; these are just me; I honestly don't know where you wanna head with this story but the potential for drama and heartwarming friendship is great; I can't wait!
Ja ne!
P.S. I'm glad you like the chappie; I was supposed to cut it at the Shinou freaking out part but then I thought I'd go all out since it was a present for you; about Souta I can't help it; he's always loved Inuyasha and kagome's being secretive; what's an overprotective lil brother to do? thanks for the review and I hope my opinions were at least a bit helpful! ^^v
P.S.S. Why don't you do a side story about that Gwendal and Yuuri fighting part when Gwendal asks for Kagome's hand in marriage thing? I bet it would be an AWESOME oneshot and I'd be honored if you wrote it for me! ^^
2Kotei-HeikaGee, Hime-san, I gotta tell you I feel a bit bad about this but I know very little about Pokemon. Do you mind emailing me some pictures of your characters as well as brief histories? ^^;;
The whole tortured assassin thing makes me interested, though; nothing like a brooding hero just waiting to be enlightened by a sparkling heroine (or hero) and save him from himself so here's my suggestion...
(takes deep breath)
Now I'm pretty sure you want these characters to see some really gruesome experiments combining humans and Pokemons to make the perfect soldiers so I would suggest you get over that and have them divide reactions; the ones against his ideas should keep it to themselvs until a much more convenient time when it comes to overthrow him and the others who like it to fawn over Mr. ARROGANT SMIRKY; also, get him interested in the trainor you want to highlight in this story and send Lucario after him but have the tables turn and Lucario gets captured instead; how will be entirely up to you; let him get enlightened by said trainor and slowly gain free will to judge right from wrong that way until he takes a full 180 on his loyalties!
(pant...)
Anyways, send me a holler if you want some more suggestions; these are just me; I honestly don't know where you wanna head with this story but the potential for drama and heartwarming friendship is great; I can't wait!
Ja ne!
P.S. I'm glad you like the chappie; I was supposed to cut it at the Shinou freaking out part but then I thought I'd go all out since it was a present for you; about Souta I can't help it; he's always loved Inuyasha and kagome's being secretive; what's an overprotective lil brother to do? thanks for the review and I hope my opinions were at least a bit helpful! ^^v
P.S.S. Why don't you do a side story about that Gwendal and Yuuri fighting part when Gwendal asks for Kagome's hand in marriage thing? I bet it would be an AWESOME oneshot and I'd be honored if you wrote it for me! ^^
12/23/2009 c2 13Baileystar1014
Dang...I knoew Lucario's were scary, but this is horror movie scary! My gosh! I love this story though, really well written. I hope to God that Lucaro learns
13Baileystar1014Dang...I knoew Lucario's were scary, but this is horror movie scary! My gosh! I love this story though, really well written. I hope to God that Lucaro learns
4/4/2009 c1 4Queen Baka
hey, the first chapter is really good even if it was short. i want to read the next chapter.
4Queen Bakahey, the first chapter is really good even if it was short. i want to read the next chapter.