for Mask of Aura5/15 c4 
10Sanokal
Normally, I detest stories that put humans in a BIONICLE world.
This is an exception. Kezoa is portrayed perfectly, and very naturally. I'm enjoying this fic, and I hope you continue.
If you do, might I suggest an OC? Just a thought.
Sanokal
10SanokalNormally, I detest stories that put humans in a BIONICLE world.
This is an exception. Kezoa is portrayed perfectly, and very naturally. I'm enjoying this fic, and I hope you continue.
If you do, might I suggest an OC? Just a thought.
Sanokal
4/2 c4 Guest
i love this story. :) Please continue soon!
i love this story. :) Please continue soon!
4/2 c1 Guest
I love this story so much, it's very well written :)
I love this story so much, it's very well written :)
4/1 c1 Guest
This story is really great, hope you continue soon :)
This story is really great, hope you continue soon :)
5/29/2012 c4 2Watcher in the dark
I wonder what will happen when Maltegere tell the toa about how Kezoa is/was human
2Watcher in the darkI wonder what will happen when Maltegere tell the toa about how Kezoa is/was human
5/24/2012 c4 7Qwerty282
Great job, faithful to the story, excellent characterization; all hallmarks of a great fanfic. Hope you keep writing and thinking!
7Qwerty282Great job, faithful to the story, excellent characterization; all hallmarks of a great fanfic. Hope you keep writing and thinking!
5/24/2012 c4 The Gentleman Ghost
I find it rather peculier that the Toa Nuva havn't asked about Kezoa's Toa power yet. Will you include that in the next chapter? Update soon!
I find it rather peculier that the Toa Nuva havn't asked about Kezoa's Toa power yet. Will you include that in the next chapter? Update soon!
3/29/2012 c3 The Gentleman Ghost
It's a little short for such a long wait, but hey, whatever continues the story
It's a little short for such a long wait, but hey, whatever continues the story
3/29/2012 c3 3Shatter Dave
Chapter three was really short, but I am liking this story. I love how you started it and will be looking forward for the next chapters to come. Keep up the good work.
3Shatter DaveChapter three was really short, but I am liking this story. I love how you started it and will be looking forward for the next chapters to come. Keep up the good work.