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1futurePOTUS
I just took 1.5 hours to read this entire series. You are incredibly talented. Thank you for writing these. All of them are beautiful stories. I've been on FF for a long while, but only found you through Mark Reads, which I am extremely thankful for. These are beautiful stories. Thank you again.
1futurePOTUSI just took 1.5 hours to read this entire series. You are incredibly talented. Thank you for writing these. All of them are beautiful stories. I've been on FF for a long while, but only found you through Mark Reads, which I am extremely thankful for. These are beautiful stories. Thank you again.
4/25 c11 13Nianti
Amazing story; just read Wild Magic a few days ago, and this matches up with it quite nicely. Thank you for sharing it; your writing style is awesome. :)
13NiantiAmazing story; just read Wild Magic a few days ago, and this matches up with it quite nicely. Thank you for sharing it; your writing style is awesome. :)
4/10 c11 Lionhearted21
You really did capture Numair's voice brilliantly. I loved reading Wild Magic from his pov and can't wait to read the others you wrote!
You really did capture Numair's voice brilliantly. I loved reading Wild Magic from his pov and can't wait to read the others you wrote!
4/4 c11 9Happiness and Hamsters
I have tried many times myself to portray the story of Daine in the eyes of Numair and failed spectacularly. This is fantastic! I have many admirations for you, Loten, I truly do.
9Happiness and HamstersI have tried many times myself to portray the story of Daine in the eyes of Numair and failed spectacularly. This is fantastic! I have many admirations for you, Loten, I truly do.
4/2 c11 Guest
This is absolutely amazing. I just want you to know that I really enjoyed reading this. Possibly the best fanfiction I've ever read.
This is absolutely amazing. I just want you to know that I really enjoyed reading this. Possibly the best fanfiction I've ever read.
4/1 c11 1Kudz
Here via Mark Reads - clearly I've got a lot of catching up to do! Looking forward to reading through everything Tortall and Potterverse, though - you're an amazing writer, and I love your characterizations of Daine and Numair. Kudos!
1KudzHere via Mark Reads - clearly I've got a lot of catching up to do! Looking forward to reading through everything Tortall and Potterverse, though - you're an amazing writer, and I love your characterizations of Daine and Numair. Kudos!
2/15 c1 1KeepCalmLoveSeverus
Alright - you know who Tamora Pierce is. Can I propose NOW? I've never talked to anyone who knew her work! AND you prefer it to her Circle of Magic drivel. (Can you tell I like Tortall better? Xp)
1KeepCalmLoveSeverusAlright - you know who Tamora Pierce is. Can I propose NOW? I've never talked to anyone who knew her work! AND you prefer it to her Circle of Magic drivel. (Can you tell I like Tortall better? Xp)
2/6 c10 SurviveInfinity
I'm sick, so I'm reading the Numair and Alanna conversation and laughing and every few seconds it sounds like I'm hacking up a lung because I'm coughing so hard but I can't stop laughing.
I really enjoy this. Thank you for writing it. :)
I'm sick, so I'm reading the Numair and Alanna conversation and laughing and every few seconds it sounds like I'm hacking up a lung because I'm coughing so hard but I can't stop laughing.
I really enjoy this. Thank you for writing it. :)
1/25 c2 Aonokioku
Wow! I've always liked the Immortals series (I've read it several times) as well as her other books. You do a great job of writing Numair. I also love your HP stuff :)
What can I say? I'm a fanficaholic. Sorry that I don't have any constructive criticism for you-all I can say is that it's great!
Keep up the good work!
Aonokioku
Wow! I've always liked the Immortals series (I've read it several times) as well as her other books. You do a great job of writing Numair. I also love your HP stuff :)
What can I say? I'm a fanficaholic. Sorry that I don't have any constructive criticism for you-all I can say is that it's great!
Keep up the good work!
Aonokioku
1/15 c11 4allthebloodybrits
Oh. Wow.
I'd like to start by saying that of all the fandoms to choose from, I have stayed away from both writing and reading fanfiction for the Immortals Quartet. It is the series that is closest to my heart. I originally read them the first winter in a new town and new school, and was reading them when my grandfather, who was truly my best friend, passed away. Now, nearly five years later, I am reading this story after my grandmother, my other bestfriend, has passed on. You have helped me through this the way Tamora helped me through the loss of my grandfather, and that is truly powerful. Thank you, for writing a story that has managed to touch my heart the same way Tamora did all those years ago.
4allthebloodybritsOh. Wow.
I'd like to start by saying that of all the fandoms to choose from, I have stayed away from both writing and reading fanfiction for the Immortals Quartet. It is the series that is closest to my heart. I originally read them the first winter in a new town and new school, and was reading them when my grandfather, who was truly my best friend, passed away. Now, nearly five years later, I am reading this story after my grandmother, my other bestfriend, has passed on. You have helped me through this the way Tamora helped me through the loss of my grandfather, and that is truly powerful. Thank you, for writing a story that has managed to touch my heart the same way Tamora did all those years ago.
12/3/2012 c11 31lightfeather5632
This... was... really really really absolutely fabulously amazingly-*list of like, what, 5 million adjectives?*-...good.
31lightfeather5632This... was... really really really absolutely fabulously amazingly-*list of like, what, 5 million adjectives?*-...good.
11/27/2012 c11 o.oredeyeo.o
I never get tired of rereading this whole series. I must've read them half a dozen times by now. I just love your interpretation and twists to the characters. I'm off to read the rest of em again!
I never get tired of rereading this whole series. I must've read them half a dozen times by now. I just love your interpretation and twists to the characters. I'm off to read the rest of em again!
8/27/2012 c1 1inklover93
Ok. I am going to warn you now. I am about to write a review for every story of your that I have read (which is all of the Immortals Series ones). So bear with me please. I love them all so much I want to be able to tell you how much.
When I read this one for the first time I actually went searching for it. I wanted to know his POV during when he was drugged and when he met her and stumbled upon this treasure. Since then I have read it so many times that I have lost count and I find myself fighting not to pull it up and read it again every time I am on fanfiction. These are by far the best written stories I have ever read in any category on fanfiction. I want to put it on my kindle so bad so that I may read it over and over again wherever I am but I can't seem to put it in jpeg form. In addition to that, I find myself reading this one more than I do Wild Magic. Which is saying something seeing as how I have actually gotten that one onto my kindle.:)
1inklover93Ok. I am going to warn you now. I am about to write a review for every story of your that I have read (which is all of the Immortals Series ones). So bear with me please. I love them all so much I want to be able to tell you how much.
When I read this one for the first time I actually went searching for it. I wanted to know his POV during when he was drugged and when he met her and stumbled upon this treasure. Since then I have read it so many times that I have lost count and I find myself fighting not to pull it up and read it again every time I am on fanfiction. These are by far the best written stories I have ever read in any category on fanfiction. I want to put it on my kindle so bad so that I may read it over and over again wherever I am but I can't seem to put it in jpeg form. In addition to that, I find myself reading this one more than I do Wild Magic. Which is saying something seeing as how I have actually gotten that one onto my kindle.:)