for Emergency3/27 c1 Socrates
I liked it...
I liked it...
12/9/2012 c1 Seaweed
Cute but something's still missing. Hmm..maybe a tiny bit more on the surrounding details or actions? A fidget here, a turn of the eyes there.. FF characters are very animated
Cute but something's still missing. Hmm..maybe a tiny bit more on the surrounding details or actions? A fidget here, a turn of the eyes there.. FF characters are very animated
6/4/2012 c1 hamandpineapple
Short and sweet. I like the banter and the naked kitchen lifestyle :) Rikku is a bit OOC but this is of course only an opinion.
Short and sweet. I like the banter and the naked kitchen lifestyle :) Rikku is a bit OOC but this is of course only an opinion.
6/7/2011 c1 Canada
I loved it! so cute
I loved it! so cute
5/23/2011 c1 
24FallenCrimsonStar
Awesome! I've been searching high and low for a RikkuxGippal story like this! Nice.
24FallenCrimsonStarAwesome! I've been searching high and low for a RikkuxGippal story like this! Nice.
6/24/2009 c1 2wickedfaery
I love you! lol, I like you're writing too...normally I'm used to liking a lot more detail in surroundings and all that jazz but I really like the extent to which to describe. I also like the tension and banter you have between rikku and gippal. All around awesome chapter :D
2wickedfaeryI love you! lol, I like you're writing too...normally I'm used to liking a lot more detail in surroundings and all that jazz but I really like the extent to which to describe. I also like the tension and banter you have between rikku and gippal. All around awesome chapter :D
4/11/2009 c1 7Ayata-Ayumi
I loved it. It was cute. I especially liked the 'emergency' concept. I should use that as an excuse one day with my boyfriend. lol
7Ayata-AyumiI loved it. It was cute. I especially liked the 'emergency' concept. I should use that as an excuse one day with my boyfriend. lol