for Chaos 'Influential Friends'4/9/2009 c2
47Ruby Rosetta Red
Excellent chapter...i liked the switch between present (even the non shipper that i proclaim to be) and the past. You write young Bobby so well. It doesn't surprise me in the least that his father would hire him a prostitute- it was a great line, Bobby telling his dad that he was immune to him now, bravo Bobby!
My hubby of x amount of years, but younger than Bobby has a lot of grey hair (its a genetic thing) and, like Alex, i don't notice it at all.
Am working on something of my own, stay tuned ;)
47Ruby Rosetta RedExcellent chapter...i liked the switch between present (even the non shipper that i proclaim to be) and the past. You write young Bobby so well. It doesn't surprise me in the least that his father would hire him a prostitute- it was a great line, Bobby telling his dad that he was immune to him now, bravo Bobby!
My hubby of x amount of years, but younger than Bobby has a lot of grey hair (its a genetic thing) and, like Alex, i don't notice it at all.
Am working on something of my own, stay tuned ;)
4/8/2009 c2
18bammi1
Typical of Bobby's father that he would think to give him that for his 16th birthday. Glad that his mom remembered his birthday. That had to have been tough for her to come up with that money for his birthday present.
Even though I am not a B/A shipper, I am glad that he is married and has a child; I think that is what he has always wanted. And Bobby does deserve some happiness. Good chapter.
18bammi1Typical of Bobby's father that he would think to give him that for his 16th birthday. Glad that his mom remembered his birthday. That had to have been tough for her to come up with that money for his birthday present.
Even though I am not a B/A shipper, I am glad that he is married and has a child; I think that is what he has always wanted. And Bobby does deserve some happiness. Good chapter.
4/7/2009 c2
33cifan
Loved the flashback, although his dad...what a slime ball. And, the established BA is nice in this chapter. So sad he never really enjoyed his b-day.
33cifanLoved the flashback, although his dad...what a slime ball. And, the established BA is nice in this chapter. So sad he never really enjoyed his b-day.
4/6/2009 c2
2rindy713
that was sweet! i feel so sad for bobby, growing up with such a screwed-up dad. it figures that he would have a good sense of right and wrong even at 16, just as he does later in life. loved the scene where the girls notice bobby is buff!
2rindy713that was sweet! i feel so sad for bobby, growing up with such a screwed-up dad. it figures that he would have a good sense of right and wrong even at 16, just as he does later in life. loved the scene where the girls notice bobby is buff!
4/4/2009 c2
81Humor In A Bittersweet Life
WOW! I don't know what else to say. What an awesome chapter. I loved them being married and him thinking back. Just great ... WOW!
81Humor In A Bittersweet LifeWOW! I don't know what else to say. What an awesome chapter. I loved them being married and him thinking back. Just great ... WOW!
4/4/2009 c2 chlark4
Yes, now that's how it should be. I have a nasty little mind but darnit to heck, I miss them. Thank god the premiere is coming back. Loved the chapter. Can't wait for more. Post more soon.
Yes, now that's how it should be. I have a nasty little mind but darnit to heck, I miss them. Thank god the premiere is coming back. Loved the chapter. Can't wait for more. Post more soon.
4/2/2009 c1
20DejaBlue1972
Cool! A new concept for us to look at Bobby's life. I like it! Post more soon please. :o)
20DejaBlue1972Cool! A new concept for us to look at Bobby's life. I like it! Post more soon please. :o)
4/2/2009 c1
2rindy713
wow, that was terrific! i look forward to more of these stories from bobby's youth - and the ties to the present.
2rindy713wow, that was terrific! i look forward to more of these stories from bobby's youth - and the ties to the present.
3/30/2009 c1
47Ruby Rosetta Red
I liked this. For a moment i thought that Peter was Bobby's son, it was good to read that he wasn't. I like the sound of this fic. Look forward to the next one.
Off to catch up!
47Ruby Rosetta RedI liked this. For a moment i thought that Peter was Bobby's son, it was good to read that he wasn't. I like the sound of this fic. Look forward to the next one.
Off to catch up!
3/29/2009 c1
18bammi1
First of all, thank you! You're one of my favorites, too, as you know.
That was an interesting little story. I can certainly see an older woman being intersted in a young Bobby. And I can see Bobby being a mature 18 year old, already wise to the ways of the world, having been forced from a very young age to fend for himself. So his giving advice to an older woman is not surprising, nor is the fact that he would not take any money from her. Great story! Looking forward to the next.
18bammi1First of all, thank you! You're one of my favorites, too, as you know.
That was an interesting little story. I can certainly see an older woman being intersted in a young Bobby. And I can see Bobby being a mature 18 year old, already wise to the ways of the world, having been forced from a very young age to fend for himself. So his giving advice to an older woman is not surprising, nor is the fact that he would not take any money from her. Great story! Looking forward to the next.
3/29/2009 c1
81Humor In A Bittersweet Life
That was amazing. So good. I can't wait for the next chapter ... whatever it may be.
81Humor In A Bittersweet LifeThat was amazing. So good. I can't wait for the next chapter ... whatever it may be.
