for YuGiOh GX Generation Next5/19 c27 Thunber
Hey Wiz, I really love this fic, and I love your Artwork to, I have been looking at yours works for some time by now (I totally forgot to add you to dA so Im doing it now lol) and I know you are busy and everything but if you find time and inspiration please try to continue it if you cant then I understand completely and Im thankful to you for creating it anyways
Hey Wiz, I really love this fic, and I love your Artwork to, I have been looking at yours works for some time by now (I totally forgot to add you to dA so Im doing it now lol) and I know you are busy and everything but if you find time and inspiration please try to continue it if you cant then I understand completely and Im thankful to you for creating it anyways
4/21 c27 Ninja-Ashleamay
I love this story I've read it so many times and love it each time I do read it. Please update it soon :D
I love this story I've read it so many times and love it each time I do read it. Please update it soon :D
2/26 c27 
8Riku'sgirl19
this story is really awesome! i love the twinns! they are so cute! i cant wait to read more! please update soon!
8Riku'sgirl19this story is really awesome! i love the twinns! they are so cute! i cant wait to read more! please update soon!
2/21 c1 10overdramatic comedian
Good story line! Since English isn't your first language, I'll give you a little broad constructive criticism to help. You did very well for English not being your first language. I know it is a very hard language to learn, even I have trouble with it sometimes. So very good job!
* Make a new paragraph each time you switch speakers.
* Make sure you clarify who is speaking. The story can get confusing if you don't.
* Watch the verb tenses.
* Really watch your articles ( a, an, and the). You leave them out when you shouldn't and add them when you don't need them.
Remember, though, good job and keep writing!
10overdramatic comedianGood story line! Since English isn't your first language, I'll give you a little broad constructive criticism to help. You did very well for English not being your first language. I know it is a very hard language to learn, even I have trouble with it sometimes. So very good job!
* Make a new paragraph each time you switch speakers.
* Make sure you clarify who is speaking. The story can get confusing if you don't.
* Watch the verb tenses.
* Really watch your articles ( a, an, and the). You leave them out when you shouldn't and add them when you don't need them.
Remember, though, good job and keep writing!
1/20 c27 Wolf's rain97
You had better finish this fanfic. I love it too much.
You had better finish this fanfic. I love it too much.
1/18 c27 Namejw17
I really love your story, it's amazing!
I really love your story, it's amazing!
1/17 c27 Guest
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
12/28/2012 c27 jw17
I love your story, it's awesome. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out.
I love your story, it's awesome. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out.