for Ocarina of Time4/25/2011 c1 FlamingHobo
Well written chapter overall, i like the small additions your putting in :P
Well written chapter overall, i like the small additions your putting in :P
8/24/2010 c1 
3Jason Duffy
Good start to a classic story.
Navi really has an attitude. I hope she warms up to Link soon.
3Jason DuffyGood start to a classic story.
Navi really has an attitude. I hope she warms up to Link soon.
8/22/2010 c7 Lol4dead
This is a damn good fanfic. I mainly belive so because your giving link parents. I always kinda wondered who links parents were.
This is a damn good fanfic. I mainly belive so because your giving link parents. I always kinda wondered who links parents were.
8/22/2010 c7 Lol4dead
This is a damn good fanfic. I mainly belive so because your giving link parents. I always kinda wondered who links parents were.
This is a damn good fanfic. I mainly belive so because your giving link parents. I always kinda wondered who links parents were.
4/20/2009 c5 Linkblade1
This is a good original novelization of the game, and the way you have Link and Malon showing affection and dreaming of eachother early on is cute. I can see it easily growing into what happens in the future. Your writing style is simple yet good and the little notes are good to avoid too many reviews for the same question but some I feel are not needed. All in all an excellent story, please keep it going, I hate when authors stop writing a good story. I do have a question though, what do all the colors Navi glows represent. In the game she would turn blue to talk to people, green when there was something important, and yellow when there was an enemy. So I'm a little confused about the significance of Navi's color in your fic. But keep up the great work ^_^
This is a good original novelization of the game, and the way you have Link and Malon showing affection and dreaming of eachother early on is cute. I can see it easily growing into what happens in the future. Your writing style is simple yet good and the little notes are good to avoid too many reviews for the same question but some I feel are not needed. All in all an excellent story, please keep it going, I hate when authors stop writing a good story. I do have a question though, what do all the colors Navi glows represent. In the game she would turn blue to talk to people, green when there was something important, and yellow when there was an enemy. So I'm a little confused about the significance of Navi's color in your fic. But keep up the great work ^_^
4/11/2009 c4 random
i've seen how some people like to keep their stories on track with the games story line. i like how you make up you're own stuff.
i've seen how some people like to keep their stories on track with the games story line. i like how you make up you're own stuff.
4/8/2009 c3 random
Wonderful story so far. I like how you use things from the manga and the games. keep up the good work.
Wonderful story so far. I like how you use things from the manga and the games. keep up the good work.
4/4/2009 c1 Linn
I love it!
The writing and everything! It's really great, you have to continue!
I love it!
The writing and everything! It's really great, you have to continue!