for Reflections from a Balcony8/28/2012 c6 jjj
D'aww! Reading this made me feel all peaceful, calm, and happy :) They're. so. sweet. together.
DX -.- :(
*starts thinking about Sam/Jack*... *sigh* all great couples...
D'aww! Reading this made me feel all peaceful, calm, and happy :) They're. so. sweet. together.
DX -.- :(
*starts thinking about Sam/Jack*... *sigh* all great couples...
8/28/2012 c6 Guest
More please.
More please.
10/16/2009 c5 
1Fitzroy
Girl I swear, you need to put a warning on some of these things...do not read if emotional...or some kind of caution tape needs to run across it.
This is stunning as always. A beautifully written piece that captures the feeling at the end of "Lifeline" and "Ghost in the Machine" that emptiness and that loss of her all over again.
Hopefully you're in a happier mood, so maybe that means a happier Reflection soon...;)...maybe?
1FitzroyGirl I swear, you need to put a warning on some of these things...do not read if emotional...or some kind of caution tape needs to run across it.
This is stunning as always. A beautifully written piece that captures the feeling at the end of "Lifeline" and "Ghost in the Machine" that emptiness and that loss of her all over again.
Hopefully you're in a happier mood, so maybe that means a happier Reflection soon...;)...maybe?
9/10/2009 c4 1Fitzroy
Okay...you're gonna make me cry. This is so beautiful, it really does show what they were like and what they should have been like. I can't wait for more.
1FitzroyOkay...you're gonna make me cry. This is so beautiful, it really does show what they were like and what they should have been like. I can't wait for more.
9/10/2009 c3 Fitzroy
Oh wow...this takes my breath away. This is the way they should have been, to at least have a chance. He's tried to get her back so many times. It's gotta be this just once.
Oh wow...this takes my breath away. This is the way they should have been, to at least have a chance. He's tried to get her back so many times. It's gotta be this just once.
9/10/2009 c4 51Eloloo
If you keep writing like this, soon I won't be able to write something correct anymore ! xD
Well, this is just as wonderful as the three others.
And the title reminds me of one of Phil Collins' songs, "Another Day in Paradise" ^^
Great job Erin, when I saw the notification that you've just add a new chapter, I was squeeing like a stupid fangirl xD LOL.
*hugs*
51ElolooIf you keep writing like this, soon I won't be able to write something correct anymore ! xD
Well, this is just as wonderful as the three others.
And the title reminds me of one of Phil Collins' songs, "Another Day in Paradise" ^^
Great job Erin, when I saw the notification that you've just add a new chapter, I was squeeing like a stupid fangirl xD LOL.
*hugs*
9/7/2009 c3 7Leucothea29
I like this one. It is angsty, but it's /happy/ at the end! "Because we're together, always and forever." = makes me happy to thik they'll be able to be together, always. Think about Wuthering Heights... Heathcliff was finally happy when he was able to be next to Catherine forever. I know it sounds a little morbid, but still, you have to admit there's a certain amount of sweetness and everlasting love there.
I mean seriously, they loved each other. That's one of the best points of the book. The bad part is that they have such a blasted time showing it to each other. I liked the way Catherine (or the narrator, I don't remember which one) described her love of Heathcliff. She talked about her love being deeper than most people are capable of loving. Think of John and Elizabeth, or Sam and Jack for that matter (squee!). Then think of Cathy and Heathcliff. *sniff*
Thanks for sharing with us!
Leuthy
7Leucothea29I like this one. It is angsty, but it's /happy/ at the end! "Because we're together, always and forever." = makes me happy to thik they'll be able to be together, always. Think about Wuthering Heights... Heathcliff was finally happy when he was able to be next to Catherine forever. I know it sounds a little morbid, but still, you have to admit there's a certain amount of sweetness and everlasting love there.
I mean seriously, they loved each other. That's one of the best points of the book. The bad part is that they have such a blasted time showing it to each other. I liked the way Catherine (or the narrator, I don't remember which one) described her love of Heathcliff. She talked about her love being deeper than most people are capable of loving. Think of John and Elizabeth, or Sam and Jack for that matter (squee!). Then think of Cathy and Heathcliff. *sniff*
Thanks for sharing with us!
Leuthy
9/7/2009 c3 51Eloloo
Wow ... I'm speechless now.
You're a wonderful writer, I hope you're aware of that ^_^
Your poetry is just so beautiful !
I really enjoyed reading your three poems, and I hope there will be more soon ! =D
I apologize if you find some mistakes here, English is not my mother tongue (I'm french ^^)
51ElolooWow ... I'm speechless now.
You're a wonderful writer, I hope you're aware of that ^_^
Your poetry is just so beautiful !
I really enjoyed reading your three poems, and I hope there will be more soon ! =D
I apologize if you find some mistakes here, English is not my mother tongue (I'm french ^^)
4/9/2009 c2 7Leucothea29
I like it... muy bein. I think that the other poem kind of shadows behind this one. I find it hard to think of Elizabeth w/o thinking of her being gone. I like the fact that there's a sister poem. Very nice.
Ok, I've gone and read it again, specifically ignoring the other poem (so SAD, but GOOD). This made the poem more upbeat. Very good. It portrayed their relationship very well, I thought.
Keep 'em commin.
Leucothea29
7Leucothea29I like it... muy bein. I think that the other poem kind of shadows behind this one. I find it hard to think of Elizabeth w/o thinking of her being gone. I like the fact that there's a sister poem. Very nice.
Ok, I've gone and read it again, specifically ignoring the other poem (so SAD, but GOOD). This made the poem more upbeat. Very good. It portrayed their relationship very well, I thought.
Keep 'em commin.
Leucothea29
4/9/2009 c2 1Fitzroy
Love it, love it, love it...as always ;)
You must have been reading my thoughts, I wanted to say something in my last review about maybe doing a happy side to show a flip side to John's pain and here it is. A wonderfully panoramic view of their world...it takes me back to "Before I Sleep" and a certain wonderful balcony scene...something about a birthday? ;)
Great writing as always, very emotional and heart-string tugging ;)
1FitzroyLove it, love it, love it...as always ;)
You must have been reading my thoughts, I wanted to say something in my last review about maybe doing a happy side to show a flip side to John's pain and here it is. A wonderfully panoramic view of their world...it takes me back to "Before I Sleep" and a certain wonderful balcony scene...something about a birthday? ;)
Great writing as always, very emotional and heart-string tugging ;)
4/7/2009 c1 Fitzroy
This is amazing, it captures everything that was...the two of them. Superb writing as always, exceptionally poignant and heartbreaking. Hopefully you got an A+ ;)
This is amazing, it captures everything that was...the two of them. Superb writing as always, exceptionally poignant and heartbreaking. Hopefully you got an A+ ;)
4/7/2009 c1 jjj
Poetry is awesome, but so freaking sad!
Tear!
Seriously, I mean, AGKK!
I think writing this good and sad should have to have a warning on it!
as always, keep 'em comin'
j
Poetry is awesome, but so freaking sad!
Tear!
Seriously, I mean, AGKK!
I think writing this good and sad should have to have a warning on it!
as always, keep 'em comin'
j