for The Road to Forgiveness6/12 c19 
13immortalwizardpirateelf-fan
Sorry but with what happened I don't know how in the fuck the baby nor Bella are going to be physically all right. I sure as hell know Bella will NEVER be all right mentally after the abuse she suffered. Giving birth like that would cause severe harm to the baby and the mother. Not only that but you can't tell me the drugs Bella was injected with that nearly caused her to OD DIDN'T harm the baby. I work in health care. I KNOW the baby WILL have problems.
13immortalwizardpirateelf-fanSorry but with what happened I don't know how in the fuck the baby nor Bella are going to be physically all right. I sure as hell know Bella will NEVER be all right mentally after the abuse she suffered. Giving birth like that would cause severe harm to the baby and the mother. Not only that but you can't tell me the drugs Bella was injected with that nearly caused her to OD DIDN'T harm the baby. I work in health care. I KNOW the baby WILL have problems.
5/10 c23 Guest
skimmed through most of this story,heartbreaking plot,glad they got their happy ending though.
skimmed through most of this story,heartbreaking plot,glad they got their happy ending though.
10/11/2012 c23 chnctgislnd07
I cant believe you killed Emmett :( I cried from that point on. Very intense story.
I cant believe you killed Emmett :( I cried from that point on. Very intense story.
9/23/2012 c12 ymi2bz4t
Okay, I'm hooked...this is a great story! I'm wondering about the "can't dye my hair" thing. Chris shot her up with all kinds of drugs, so, why does a bottle of Loreal Preference bother her so much? I think I'd go for it! LOL! Thanks for the great read!
Okay, I'm hooked...this is a great story! I'm wondering about the "can't dye my hair" thing. Chris shot her up with all kinds of drugs, so, why does a bottle of Loreal Preference bother her so much? I think I'd go for it! LOL! Thanks for the great read!
8/14/2012 c2 122brown-eyes
Wow, Edward is so sweet here, but it sounds like his work is cut out for him with how traumatized she has been. I hope she is getting help.
122brown-eyesWow, Edward is so sweet here, but it sounds like his work is cut out for him with how traumatized she has been. I hope she is getting help.
6/8/2012 c1 Hell-of-a-butler
I was constantly on the edge of my seat because of this story but I LOVED IT!
I was constantly on the edge of my seat because of this story but I LOVED IT!
1/9/2012 c23 haylee21
it was an okay story...it was alittle rushed and info was lost making things confusing. and the whole baby being cut out was just weird and didnt make much sense. the plot wasnt a bad idea..it was good...you just needed to slow it down and add me detail
it was an okay story...it was alittle rushed and info was lost making things confusing. and the whole baby being cut out was just weird and didnt make much sense. the plot wasnt a bad idea..it was good...you just needed to slow it down and add me detail
10/29/2011 c23 19kikiharuka13666
OMG! This story is... there is no way to describe it. It was really happy and i really liked it, then you killed Emmett. Why couldn't you just let him live. He is one of my favorite characters! Anyway I loved the story.
19kikiharuka13666OMG! This story is... there is no way to describe it. It was really happy and i really liked it, then you killed Emmett. Why couldn't you just let him live. He is one of my favorite characters! Anyway I loved the story.