for Cause and Effect9/29/2012 c1 Anonymous
This is looking good so far! I'm liking your characterization and whatnot, Matt's laziness and Mello's attitude and the way that they interact. I just wish that there were more to read, because I was all set and ready for chapter 2!
This is looking good so far! I'm liking your characterization and whatnot, Matt's laziness and Mello's attitude and the way that they interact. I just wish that there were more to read, because I was all set and ready for chapter 2!
1/26/2011 c1 
6UnderMissTaken
3 I love this pairing. ^^
I really like the descriptive words you used in the story.
...dang it I wanna know what happens next. Sad face.
Anyways, great story so far.
6UnderMissTaken3 I love this pairing. ^^
I really like the descriptive words you used in the story.
...dang it I wanna know what happens next. Sad face.
Anyways, great story so far.
8/21/2009 c1 2Sweetheart5793
What happens next. I liked the fan fic okay. It wasn't really long enough for me to be able to say anything about it. If it were longer it would probably have been really good, it has definite potential.
2Sweetheart5793What happens next. I liked the fan fic okay. It wasn't really long enough for me to be able to say anything about it. If it were longer it would probably have been really good, it has definite potential.
6/20/2009 c1 1plumber-penguin
Nicely detailed, and I loved the part at the beginning, it puts you on a nail-biting cliffhanger. Lol Matt is immensely lazy, he could barely wave to Mello, but his feelings are true. Mello's on the protective, cause he didn't want Matt to be involved, goes to show how much they love each other. Please update soon! ~From your friendly neighbourhood psycho
(obviously remade Spiderman quote lol)
1plumber-penguinNicely detailed, and I loved the part at the beginning, it puts you on a nail-biting cliffhanger. Lol Matt is immensely lazy, he could barely wave to Mello, but his feelings are true. Mello's on the protective, cause he didn't want Matt to be involved, goes to show how much they love each other. Please update soon! ~From your friendly neighbourhood psycho
(obviously remade Spiderman quote lol)
4/22/2009 c1 4moostronaut
Ha! That was hysterical! I love the whole 'DO YOU HEAR ME, JEEVAS?' thing! & the 'I love you, Mell' & 'SHUT UP!' that was funny! XD
Well, I sure hope ya feel better! (& btw, I updated! Yay 4 me! & I'm no longer broken! Well, kinda...I waddle when I run...X3)
W/ feel better hugs, ~UDM :3
4moostronautHa! That was hysterical! I love the whole 'DO YOU HEAR ME, JEEVAS?' thing! & the 'I love you, Mell' & 'SHUT UP!' that was funny! XD
Well, I sure hope ya feel better! (& btw, I updated! Yay 4 me! & I'm no longer broken! Well, kinda...I waddle when I run...X3)
W/ feel better hugs, ~UDM :3