for Thomas Adventure Story part 1, Penguins Might8/20/2012 c1 
3XDaiseyX
isnt the keyblade guy Sora? im sorry but I just dont know which story I'm supposed to read first,
3XDaiseyXisnt the keyblade guy Sora? im sorry but I just dont know which story I'm supposed to read first,
8/18/2011 c2 the charmed ones
you should have more of Starscream in your story
you should have more of Starscream in your story
1/28/2011 c17 34SkullDestroyer
I am lost. What's happening?
Sorry if that sounded blunt, I just had to say what was needed to be said.
~ Elias "Eli" Mouret
34SkullDestroyerI am lost. What's happening?
Sorry if that sounded blunt, I just had to say what was needed to be said.
~ Elias "Eli" Mouret
10/29/2010 c16 13Omnitrix1
Awesome chapter. I loved how This Is Halloween was Playing in the background., and ow Artemis turned Tonto into a werewolf. They just seem to interest me for some reason. But if you ask me, the Penguins deserved the reward, but they shouldn't have gloated. Completely and utterly awesome.
13Omnitrix1Awesome chapter. I loved how This Is Halloween was Playing in the background., and ow Artemis turned Tonto into a werewolf. They just seem to interest me for some reason. But if you ask me, the Penguins deserved the reward, but they shouldn't have gloated. Completely and utterly awesome.
9/4/2010 c15 Omnitrix1
Kuyou always sickened me. My nickname for him is "Elf-boy," because of those pointy ears of his. He's one of the true monsters. Nothing but scum. Thankfully Thalia and Artemis could hold him down, but I just hope he gets his. Nice chapter, and I like the spanish penguins having trouble with the nine-tailed fox.
Kuyou always sickened me. My nickname for him is "Elf-boy," because of those pointy ears of his. He's one of the true monsters. Nothing but scum. Thankfully Thalia and Artemis could hold him down, but I just hope he gets his. Nice chapter, and I like the spanish penguins having trouble with the nine-tailed fox.
8/6/2010 c14 Omnitrix1
HAHAHAHA! This was funny, and my favorite parts were when Johnny had to find a way out of Olympus, and the parts where Skipper couldn't be on screen because something bad happened which involved his "great weapons." Hi-frickin-larious.
HAHAHAHA! This was funny, and my favorite parts were when Johnny had to find a way out of Olympus, and the parts where Skipper couldn't be on screen because something bad happened which involved his "great weapons." Hi-frickin-larious.
7/4/2010 c13 Omnitrix1
Tonto... TONTO! Also, happy 4th of July. Anyways, this was funny. But now Tonto must die. (I bring out a battle ax) But first I need to put this look-a-like battle ax in it's glass case so no one finds out it's actually something more powerful.
This was hilarious.
Tonto... TONTO! Also, happy 4th of July. Anyways, this was funny. But now Tonto must die. (I bring out a battle ax) But first I need to put this look-a-like battle ax in it's glass case so no one finds out it's actually something more powerful.
This was hilarious.
6/29/2010 c12 Omnitrix1
So... That's the end of my Nega. But you were right, that was a cryptic death. But now, Skipper is dead... Kronos has to be stopped. I also liked that the Nega Guardians have Negatrix's. And I liked the Nega alien forms, including Nega-Alien Y. But now the Nega Guardians have lost their leader. Well, there is Kronos, but he's their traditional leader. But just who is that old man who granted Skipper a pass to the Elysian fields? Only time will tell. So like I said, awesome chapter.
So... That's the end of my Nega. But you were right, that was a cryptic death. But now, Skipper is dead... Kronos has to be stopped. I also liked that the Nega Guardians have Negatrix's. And I liked the Nega alien forms, including Nega-Alien Y. But now the Nega Guardians have lost their leader. Well, there is Kronos, but he's their traditional leader. But just who is that old man who granted Skipper a pass to the Elysian fields? Only time will tell. So like I said, awesome chapter.
6/28/2010 c11 lololol
LOL! HOW"D THE HECK DID THEY GET ALL THAT STUFF. That snape teddy bear thing made me laugh, so did that bit with Aegis! OMG LOL
LOL! HOW"D THE HECK DID THEY GET ALL THAT STUFF. That snape teddy bear thing made me laugh, so did that bit with Aegis! OMG LOL
6/27/2010 c11 tabuu
wow that was a lot of stuff, im suprised that they even got close to aegis
wow that was a lot of stuff, im suprised that they even got close to aegis
6/27/2010 c11 Omnitrix1
Me: The penguins stole my Journal? (pause) THEY MUST DIE!
Tonto: Omni, calm down.
Me: And Tonto, you're related to the Tonto from The Lone Ranger?
Tonto: Yep. My family has a long heritage of heroes.
Me: But that Tonto wasn't an idiot. He was an Indian. How are you related to him?
Tonto: Like I said my mother's side. (pause, again)
Me: That really doesn't explain anything at all.
Tonto(looking worried:) Um... YOU SAW NOTHING! (there's blast of smoke and Tonto is gone)
Me: Okay, that's weird. Also, you've been on FictionPress? Plus, you got help from an author named Madz97? I've got an account on that site as well. On that site, I'm Omnitrix2. Do you have an account there? (before I can ask anything else, I see a piece of paper where Tonto stood) Huh?
(I pick up the piece of paper, and read it)
Me: My God, it can't be. The Tonto secret formula, it's-
STATIC
Me: The penguins stole my Journal? (pause) THEY MUST DIE!
Tonto: Omni, calm down.
Me: And Tonto, you're related to the Tonto from The Lone Ranger?
Tonto: Yep. My family has a long heritage of heroes.
Me: But that Tonto wasn't an idiot. He was an Indian. How are you related to him?
Tonto: Like I said my mother's side. (pause, again)
Me: That really doesn't explain anything at all.
Tonto(looking worried:) Um... YOU SAW NOTHING! (there's blast of smoke and Tonto is gone)
Me: Okay, that's weird. Also, you've been on FictionPress? Plus, you got help from an author named Madz97? I've got an account on that site as well. On that site, I'm Omnitrix2. Do you have an account there? (before I can ask anything else, I see a piece of paper where Tonto stood) Huh?
(I pick up the piece of paper, and read it)
Me: My God, it can't be. The Tonto secret formula, it's-
STATIC
5/21/2010 c10 Omnitrix1
Johnny killed Rico. That's terrible, but doesn't Johnny dress in a warped version of Alex's clothes? Oh well, I guess it's because now he works for Kronos. He needed the change any way. But the evil is spreading, and that's not good. But the chapter, now that's good.
Johnny killed Rico. That's terrible, but doesn't Johnny dress in a warped version of Alex's clothes? Oh well, I guess it's because now he works for Kronos. He needed the change any way. But the evil is spreading, and that's not good. But the chapter, now that's good.
1/1/2010 c9 Omnitrix1
Alex Storm: Johnny Hurricane. My opposite is as evil as I am good. No wonder he would be a dangerous foe in the future.
(the door breaks down and Johnny Hurricane is standing in the rubble with his yo-yo in hand {also Johnny Hurricane doesn't wear a hood})
Johnny Hurricane: Well, well, well. If it isn't Alex Storm.
Alex Storm: Johnny Hurricane. How did you get back to our universe?
Johnny Hurricane: I have my ways. Now where was I? Oh yeah, revenge. (Johnny gets into a fighting stance)
Alex Storm: I Kicked your butt a lot of times before, and I can do it again. (Alex gets into a fighting stance)
By the way, who was this foe that you mentioned at the end of the chapter? Was it... him? (I don't mean Him from the Powerpuff girls shows) You know, that PM story I was sending you? He'll fall sooner or later, but he'll still be around.
Alex Storm: Johnny Hurricane. My opposite is as evil as I am good. No wonder he would be a dangerous foe in the future.
(the door breaks down and Johnny Hurricane is standing in the rubble with his yo-yo in hand {also Johnny Hurricane doesn't wear a hood})
Johnny Hurricane: Well, well, well. If it isn't Alex Storm.
Alex Storm: Johnny Hurricane. How did you get back to our universe?
Johnny Hurricane: I have my ways. Now where was I? Oh yeah, revenge. (Johnny gets into a fighting stance)
Alex Storm: I Kicked your butt a lot of times before, and I can do it again. (Alex gets into a fighting stance)
By the way, who was this foe that you mentioned at the end of the chapter? Was it... him? (I don't mean Him from the Powerpuff girls shows) You know, that PM story I was sending you? He'll fall sooner or later, but he'll still be around.
12/20/2009 c8 Omnitrix1
Tonto: This is good. I wonder if there will be a Valentine's special.
(I run through the door and close with lightning speed)
(I see Tonto)
Me: Hey Tonto.
(I run up to Tonto and he sees that my face isn't contorted in anger)
Tonto: Are you mad?
Me: What, no. Okay, I'm slightly annoyed that you teleported me away, but I'm not angry.
Tonto(getting scared:) Okay. Who are you and what have you done with the real Omni?
Me(annoyed:) I am the real Omni. But I have a question. Why did you get rid of me when I wanted to see you?
Tonto: You were going to attack me.
Me(shocked:) What? Why would I do that, it's Christmas. (I pull a jacket from behind my back) You just forgot your jacket, I was going to return it to you.
(Tonto is starting to get scared so he pulls up my shirt)
Tonto: You have a belly button. You are the real Omni.
Me: Yes, I am. Oh, by the way (I pull a present from behind my back) Merry Christmas.
(Tonto screams like a little girl takes the present and shreds the wrapping paper off of it)
(Tonto takes a carton out of the box. it's a carton of...)
Tonto(excited:) EGGNOG!
(it was the only thing on his list, besides the other stuff he asked me for which are coming in a week)
NOW FOR A CHRISTMAS CATCHPHRASE!
Merry Christmas to all
And God bless us, everyone.
Tonto: This is good. I wonder if there will be a Valentine's special.
(I run through the door and close with lightning speed)
(I see Tonto)
Me: Hey Tonto.
(I run up to Tonto and he sees that my face isn't contorted in anger)
Tonto: Are you mad?
Me: What, no. Okay, I'm slightly annoyed that you teleported me away, but I'm not angry.
Tonto(getting scared:) Okay. Who are you and what have you done with the real Omni?
Me(annoyed:) I am the real Omni. But I have a question. Why did you get rid of me when I wanted to see you?
Tonto: You were going to attack me.
Me(shocked:) What? Why would I do that, it's Christmas. (I pull a jacket from behind my back) You just forgot your jacket, I was going to return it to you.
(Tonto is starting to get scared so he pulls up my shirt)
Tonto: You have a belly button. You are the real Omni.
Me: Yes, I am. Oh, by the way (I pull a present from behind my back) Merry Christmas.
(Tonto screams like a little girl takes the present and shreds the wrapping paper off of it)
(Tonto takes a carton out of the box. it's a carton of...)
Tonto(excited:) EGGNOG!
(it was the only thing on his list, besides the other stuff he asked me for which are coming in a week)
NOW FOR A CHRISTMAS CATCHPHRASE!
Merry Christmas to all
And God bless us, everyone.
10/3/2009 c6 Omnitrix1
Ha! Take that Julien. If I know Julien, he'll have a hissy fit, hurt every one he meets emotionally, and throw random objects that he finds on the ground.
NOW FOR THE CATCHFRAISE!
I am the most powerful being in the universe
I have one million nine hundred three aliens on my Omnitrix
I have a stupid assistant named Tonto whose Omnitrix sucks
It has one million nine hundred two aliens on it!
Ha! Take that Julien. If I know Julien, he'll have a hissy fit, hurt every one he meets emotionally, and throw random objects that he finds on the ground.
NOW FOR THE CATCHFRAISE!
I am the most powerful being in the universe
I have one million nine hundred three aliens on my Omnitrix
I have a stupid assistant named Tonto whose Omnitrix sucks
It has one million nine hundred two aliens on it!