for Bella And Edward go to Bikini bottom4/27/2011 c4 RobertSexual
Okay, so, I don;t actually know if you tried at all or you just wanted a bunch of reviews so wrote a ** story, but if you did and you're just a new writer, I'm gonna give you credit. But, Spongebob/Twilight barely makes sense and your not helping it with the story line. There are also plotholes as big as the hole in the ozone layer.
Okay, so, I don;t actually know if you tried at all or you just wanted a bunch of reviews so wrote a ** story, but if you did and you're just a new writer, I'm gonna give you credit. But, Spongebob/Twilight barely makes sense and your not helping it with the story line. There are also plotholes as big as the hole in the ozone layer.
2/2/2011 c8 Dragonhunter
Wow. FAIL. I'm not even a fan of either, and even I can tell you how fail this is. In fact, the only reason I'm even reviewing this crap is because I saw someone bashing it on a site.
Here are the rules for writing a crossover:
1. It HAS to make sense. I mean, this is supposed to be humor, which is an excuse, but you utterly fail, because it is in no way funny.
2. Don't favor one fandom over another. EVER. This is practically a hatefic.
3. Pay attention to canon. I have never even watched the show and even I know you're taking it overboard.
4. Don't kill off characters for no reason. I mean, she just flies into the scene and you chop her head off!
5. Use correct grammar in ANY story.
6. Don't go on a butthurt rampage and beg for reviews. EVER. Don't you know how pathetic that makes you?
Well, you wanted a review, and now you've gotten one.
I could go on, but I have better things to do. Like nailing my eardrums to the wall.
Sincerely,
The awesomest person EVA,
~Dragonhunter
P.S. You are mai bestest frienemy EVAR. Wanna go watch paint dry?
P.P.S. Yes, I am a little wierd.
Wow. FAIL. I'm not even a fan of either, and even I can tell you how fail this is. In fact, the only reason I'm even reviewing this crap is because I saw someone bashing it on a site.
Here are the rules for writing a crossover:
1. It HAS to make sense. I mean, this is supposed to be humor, which is an excuse, but you utterly fail, because it is in no way funny.
2. Don't favor one fandom over another. EVER. This is practically a hatefic.
3. Pay attention to canon. I have never even watched the show and even I know you're taking it overboard.
4. Don't kill off characters for no reason. I mean, she just flies into the scene and you chop her head off!
5. Use correct grammar in ANY story.
6. Don't go on a butthurt rampage and beg for reviews. EVER. Don't you know how pathetic that makes you?
Well, you wanted a review, and now you've gotten one.
I could go on, but I have better things to do. Like nailing my eardrums to the wall.
Sincerely,
The awesomest person EVA,
~Dragonhunter
P.S. You are mai bestest frienemy EVAR. Wanna go watch paint dry?
P.P.S. Yes, I am a little wierd.
1/7/2011 c4 Anonymous
I'd just like you to know that you are utterly spineless and should not write fanfiction. Instead of writing what YOU want to write, you cowtow to the readers and write what THEY want. This borders on violating this site's TOS. You seem to believe that Sandy should not have been killed, judging by your comment calling those who called for her death "meanies". So DON'T KILL HER OFF. Show some spine.
And stop doing that "make reviews if you want me to continue, lolol!" thing. It's annoying, and stifles criticism that can help you improve.
By the way, Mark Hamill's Joker is vastly superior to Heath Ledger's.
I'd just like you to know that you are utterly spineless and should not write fanfiction. Instead of writing what YOU want to write, you cowtow to the readers and write what THEY want. This borders on violating this site's TOS. You seem to believe that Sandy should not have been killed, judging by your comment calling those who called for her death "meanies". So DON'T KILL HER OFF. Show some spine.
And stop doing that "make reviews if you want me to continue, lolol!" thing. It's annoying, and stifles criticism that can help you improve.
By the way, Mark Hamill's Joker is vastly superior to Heath Ledger's.
1/1/2011 c8 cayla
this story is great u should have it where all the cullens teach spongebob how not 2 act gay. and them they watch the cartoon on tv and sponge watches it with them. oh and HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011 WHOO
this story is great u should have it where all the cullens teach spongebob how not 2 act gay. and them they watch the cartoon on tv and sponge watches it with them. oh and HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011 WHOO
1/1/2011 c8 cayla
this story is great u should have it where all the cullens teach spongebob how not 2 act gay. and them they watch the cartoon on tv and sponge watches it with them. oh and HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011 WHOO
this story is great u should have it where all the cullens teach spongebob how not 2 act gay. and them they watch the cartoon on tv and sponge watches it with them. oh and HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011 WHOO
11/26/2010 c1 Da Real Bella Cullen
havent red yet butjus so u bo steven hillenberg created sbsp
havent red yet butjus so u bo steven hillenberg created sbsp
9/20/2010 c8 
3MaisyCullen13
Haha this story was sooooo funny! I like when you did Emmett's POV. Plz put another chapter!
3MaisyCullen13Haha this story was sooooo funny! I like when you did Emmett's POV. Plz put another chapter!
8/7/2010 c8 4bffalwlt
That story was AWESOME my friend and I love Spongebob so that might be a new story!
4bffalwltThat story was AWESOME my friend and I love Spongebob so that might be a new story!
6/1/2010 c8 3pepsicola56
hey how long ago did you lose your sanity just wondering my best friend lost hers abaut a week after she was born then 10 years later she met me
3pepsicola56hey how long ago did you lose your sanity just wondering my best friend lost hers abaut a week after she was born then 10 years later she met me
6/1/2010 c6 pepsicola56
holy crap sandys revenge and go you take spanish class or do have the daring book for girls and you know i live on the same street as my dads family and your username is my nickname in my neborhood sad isnt it P.M. me
holy crap sandys revenge and go you take spanish class or do have the daring book for girls and you know i live on the same street as my dads family and your username is my nickname in my neborhood sad isnt it P.M. me
5/31/2010 c8 Anon
this story is so crazy it is quite funny!
this story is so crazy it is quite funny!
5/26/2010 c8 17VampireNits
that was so... weird...and totally AWESOME! YEAH! YOU GO GIRL! NICE ONE SISTAH!
17VampireNitsthat was so... weird...and totally AWESOME! YEAH! YOU GO GIRL! NICE ONE SISTAH!