for Why?5/11/2009 c1 
97Shining Zephyr
Why haven't I reviewed this? *loser*
Yeah, it might seem like Old Snake/Roxas is odd, but you make it seem so damn- natural. It's almost as if they were meant for one another, my dear. You've done a really great job with these two, and I really enjoy the path you took with them.
...I failed to mention I'm doing an MGS/KH one-shot soon, didn't I?
~Shiny-sama
97Shining ZephyrWhy haven't I reviewed this? *loser*
Yeah, it might seem like Old Snake/Roxas is odd, but you make it seem so damn- natural. It's almost as if they were meant for one another, my dear. You've done a really great job with these two, and I really enjoy the path you took with them.
...I failed to mention I'm doing an MGS/KH one-shot soon, didn't I?
~Shiny-sama
4/25/2009 c1 32Heart-Of-Memories
Me has a feeling you're loving FFN's idea of making crossovers a category. XD
Technically, Terra and Aqua don't know Roxas. Terra and Aqua are in Birth By Sleep, which is for the PSP, and BBS is 10 years prior to the original KH. Roxas is in KH2, and the DS Midquel, 358 over 2 days. Ventus is the Roxas look-alike from that crazy trailer. (Sorry for the ramble, KH is my area of expertise)
As for the story...I've been reading your work for a while, and while Snake with emotions is all well and good (and rather cute), I have some trouble reading these stories. Grammer's fine, it's the over-descriptive writing style that draws my attention away from the story itself. It's just a personal quirk with me, your writing style is bueatiful and it should stay that way, I just have a wandering mind. DX Makes reading these stories harder then it should be! And I like Snake with emotions~!
32Heart-Of-MemoriesMe has a feeling you're loving FFN's idea of making crossovers a category. XD
Technically, Terra and Aqua don't know Roxas. Terra and Aqua are in Birth By Sleep, which is for the PSP, and BBS is 10 years prior to the original KH. Roxas is in KH2, and the DS Midquel, 358 over 2 days. Ventus is the Roxas look-alike from that crazy trailer. (Sorry for the ramble, KH is my area of expertise)
As for the story...I've been reading your work for a while, and while Snake with emotions is all well and good (and rather cute), I have some trouble reading these stories. Grammer's fine, it's the over-descriptive writing style that draws my attention away from the story itself. It's just a personal quirk with me, your writing style is bueatiful and it should stay that way, I just have a wandering mind. DX Makes reading these stories harder then it should be! And I like Snake with emotions~!
4/18/2009 c1 Razzkat
All right, I finally get around to reading some of your crossovers! This was, quite frankly, adorable. Like in many of your stories, I love when a character reaches out to Snake and lifts him up, because you and I both know that he deserves it. Roxas was a cute choice (wait…he’s the blonde one, right?). It’s nice to have a younger bright person/older (horribly) jaded person couple.
I also loved the dueling questioning between the two. A very nice way of complimenting Snake, Roxas.
[The Keyblade wielder obsered him] You mean ‘observed’ here?
Oh, and I loved the atmosphere. Disneyland…so happy! Just emphasizes how unhappy Snake was. Which he needn’t be.
I’m off to read (at least!) two more of your wonderful stories. Great job!
All right, I finally get around to reading some of your crossovers! This was, quite frankly, adorable. Like in many of your stories, I love when a character reaches out to Snake and lifts him up, because you and I both know that he deserves it. Roxas was a cute choice (wait…he’s the blonde one, right?). It’s nice to have a younger bright person/older (horribly) jaded person couple.
I also loved the dueling questioning between the two. A very nice way of complimenting Snake, Roxas.
[The Keyblade wielder obsered him] You mean ‘observed’ here?
Oh, and I loved the atmosphere. Disneyland…so happy! Just emphasizes how unhappy Snake was. Which he needn’t be.
I’m off to read (at least!) two more of your wonderful stories. Great job!