for Grief4/17 c1 Lynn
He certainly wore his emotions on his sleeve
He certainly wore his emotions on his sleeve
5/29/2012 c1 
59Dax's10thHost
This is beautiful.
I wish I could go through and pinpoint each passage that touched me, that shook my heart or trembled through my mind the first time, second time, third time that I read them. But I'm afraid I'd be here the rest of the day, and that the character limit on this review wouldn't allow it. Suffice it to say, you've created something marvelous here.
Like I've said before, J/C is not my first pairing choice, nor my second, third - I'm not even sure where I sit on the matter. But this... this is beautiful, and I loved what it did for me.
The passage about wisdom and Tuvok and Kes particularly struck me, as did the final line. I may not be a J/Cer, but this is... wow. All I can say is thank you, and please... keep writing!
59Dax's10thHostThis is beautiful.
I wish I could go through and pinpoint each passage that touched me, that shook my heart or trembled through my mind the first time, second time, third time that I read them. But I'm afraid I'd be here the rest of the day, and that the character limit on this review wouldn't allow it. Suffice it to say, you've created something marvelous here.
Like I've said before, J/C is not my first pairing choice, nor my second, third - I'm not even sure where I sit on the matter. But this... this is beautiful, and I loved what it did for me.
The passage about wisdom and Tuvok and Kes particularly struck me, as did the final line. I may not be a J/Cer, but this is... wow. All I can say is thank you, and please... keep writing!
5/18/2012 c1 Kerry J
I didn't read the disclaimer at the beginning and thought she was really dead, so it came as such a relief when she materialised.
You write grief very well, it was so easy to feel for Chakotay while watching him trying not to fall apart and only succeeding partly.
Great story!
I didn't read the disclaimer at the beginning and thought she was really dead, so it came as such a relief when she materialised.
You write grief very well, it was so easy to feel for Chakotay while watching him trying not to fall apart and only succeeding partly.
Great story!
2/13/2011 c1 JamieRobs
Oh wow, you've done it again, brought me to tears! This was so sad, I swear I held my breath while reading it! You really write so beautifully. I love this ending and part of me thinks it's so beautiful it should be left alone and another part of me wishes for a sequel, even though it was written 15 years ago, LOL! I hope you're still writing!
Oh wow, you've done it again, brought me to tears! This was so sad, I swear I held my breath while reading it! You really write so beautifully. I love this ending and part of me thinks it's so beautiful it should be left alone and another part of me wishes for a sequel, even though it was written 15 years ago, LOL! I hope you're still writing!
12/30/2010 c1 28Georgiaish
This has not had enough reviews praising it. So I thought I'd add one. I loved it!
28GeorgiaishThis has not had enough reviews praising it. So I thought I'd add one. I loved it!
4/15/2009 c1 6LoZDCMVGfan
wow that was amazing. I can't believe the others were better than you... but what actually happened- and what happened next?
6LoZDCMVGfanwow that was amazing. I can't believe the others were better than you... but what actually happened- and what happened next?