for Bully Surfs FF Net11/27/2012 c1 Please do
Aw, I'm in love all over again! I simply adore the humor to add to the characters, normally I would get as far as being defensive over Peanut bursting into tears- but twice now, count that's two out of two, all I'm left doing is laughing right along. If it's the way you play it in or your style altogether i don't know, but it's all so light and airy that I can simply relax and enjoy the story!
I tend to even avoid stories written like this, reminds me too much of my grade ten literature class...plays- lets just say I didn't do too well on that unit;; But! This I do enjoy, it's the dialog that showcases your humor and it is a little too fun to try and read etween the lines.
btw, I will hold you to that.
Please, I can imagine about a thousand followups to this- every one I adore. So you better finish this!
Aw, I'm in love all over again! I simply adore the humor to add to the characters, normally I would get as far as being defensive over Peanut bursting into tears- but twice now, count that's two out of two, all I'm left doing is laughing right along. If it's the way you play it in or your style altogether i don't know, but it's all so light and airy that I can simply relax and enjoy the story!
I tend to even avoid stories written like this, reminds me too much of my grade ten literature class...plays- lets just say I didn't do too well on that unit;; But! This I do enjoy, it's the dialog that showcases your humor and it is a little too fun to try and read etween the lines.
btw, I will hold you to that.
Please, I can imagine about a thousand followups to this- every one I adore. So you better finish this!
6/26/2012 c1 Anonymous
Omg this story is amazing! You should write a story where when they read the fanfics about them selfs they recreate them like against their will. For example if Gary starts to read a fanfic about him and Pete he will all of a sudden go to pete and start kissing him or something! lol ;)
Omg this story is amazing! You should write a story where when they read the fanfics about them selfs they recreate them like against their will. For example if Gary starts to read a fanfic about him and Pete he will all of a sudden go to pete and start kissing him or something! lol ;)
5/3/2009 c1 
1Sakura-Sanctuary
ROFL! I loved this! My favorite part was when Gary was like "Ah c'mon, Femmeboy. You know you can't resist this." Fucking LOL'd! xD
1Sakura-SanctuaryROFL! I loved this! My favorite part was when Gary was like "Ah c'mon, Femmeboy. You know you can't resist this." Fucking LOL'd! xD
4/26/2009 c1 3Ghost520
Nice story and concept lmao.. it sounded kinda weird at first xD That would scare the shit out of me to find out that im a character in a video game...
3Ghost520Nice story and concept lmao.. it sounded kinda weird at first xD That would scare the shit out of me to find out that im a character in a video game...
4/25/2009 c1 34schizophrenic-clown
I just came across this, and I love it! I really do! This was so hilarious! Loved Gary in this one. -sigh- That was so funny.
-favs-
This story is my 200th fav. Yeah!
-favs author-
And, you, will be my 54th author. :)
34schizophrenic-clownI just came across this, and I love it! I really do! This was so hilarious! Loved Gary in this one. -sigh- That was so funny.
-favs-
This story is my 200th fav. Yeah!
-favs author-
And, you, will be my 54th author. :)
4/19/2009 c1 14The Tin Dogs Bollocks
LOL! Haha this is hilarious! Poor Johnny! I think the only person really loving that was Gary xD Brilliant!
14The Tin Dogs BollocksLOL! Haha this is hilarious! Poor Johnny! I think the only person really loving that was Gary xD Brilliant!
4/16/2009 c1 35DarkMoonX
This was hilarious! Had me laughing so hard! I bet everyone would be pissed off, except for Gary haha. This was awesome! =D
35DarkMoonXThis was hilarious! Had me laughing so hard! I bet everyone would be pissed off, except for Gary haha. This was awesome! =D
4/16/2009 c1 1TheWastelander
! OH SHIT, DUDE! Just the other day I was thinking "If the characters from Bully were real and found this site, they'd be pretty damn pissed! Ha! This is HILARIOUS keep on making these, dude! Total favorited!
1TheWastelander! OH SHIT, DUDE! Just the other day I was thinking "If the characters from Bully were real and found this site, they'd be pretty damn pissed! Ha! This is HILARIOUS keep on making these, dude! Total favorited!