for Rush to Judgment11/10/2010 c1 
56writergirl99
Hey, this was an amazing addition to this epsiode. I love the fact that it was not the whole cliche "I love you" moment in there. I know thats what I would prefer.
This is brilliant! It seemed to capture Jess and her emotions perfectly after what happened. I know that Flack had a lot going on, but he was still a complete and utter jerk to her. At least he apologised.
I loved this so much! Keep up the amazing work!
P.s. I too was one who drooled over "Prey!" The scene at the begining was sooo hot!
56writergirl99Hey, this was an amazing addition to this epsiode. I love the fact that it was not the whole cliche "I love you" moment in there. I know thats what I would prefer.
This is brilliant! It seemed to capture Jess and her emotions perfectly after what happened. I know that Flack had a lot going on, but he was still a complete and utter jerk to her. At least he apologised.
I loved this so much! Keep up the amazing work!
P.s. I too was one who drooled over "Prey!" The scene at the begining was sooo hot!
12/14/2009 c1 44irishgirl9
Aww, this is a sweet little story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Don and Jess have so much chemistry and you captured it well. I thought the same thing about that scene, that Jess was more concerned that IA believe her when she says Don's innocent than what IA knowing they are dating means for her career.
44irishgirl9Aww, this is a sweet little story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Don and Jess have so much chemistry and you captured it well. I thought the same thing about that scene, that Jess was more concerned that IA believe her when she says Don's innocent than what IA knowing they are dating means for her career.
4/18/2009 c1 27lily moonlight
Really good! I liked how this turned out; sometimes you have to go with how the story wants to be written :) I'm enjoying how you're writing Flack and Angell, great dialogue together and the ending was very nice. I liked it!
27lily moonlightReally good! I liked how this turned out; sometimes you have to go with how the story wants to be written :) I'm enjoying how you're writing Flack and Angell, great dialogue together and the ending was very nice. I liked it!
4/18/2009 c1 CcSrI
Thanks so much for writing this! It was lovely. And Prey was definitely hot, hot, hot. Yum, Flack in handcuffs =D Gosh, they are so awesome together. I totally think you shouls write more about them...
Thanks so much for writing this! It was lovely. And Prey was definitely hot, hot, hot. Yum, Flack in handcuffs =D Gosh, they are so awesome together. I totally think you shouls write more about them...
4/18/2009 c1 30LyzabethSay
That was ultimate fluff! You could jsut feel the sensitivity and love-iness between them =D
Good job!
And I think yellow roses are apology roses... I think
30LyzabethSayThat was ultimate fluff! You could jsut feel the sensitivity and love-iness between them =D
Good job!
And I think yellow roses are apology roses... I think