for Inevitable Liaisons5/16/2009 c1 
5The Puppeteer
I need more. This is brilliant. You've met a lot of what I was asking in the last chapter, so there was nothing missing here. Good stuff all around. I need more. I want more fight scenes. Oh, I'd love to see a whole spar scene first between Teyla and Ronon and after Ronon losing...all between Teyla and John-ooh and with the military right there. Ooh, bring in some generals too. Like a day when Atlantis is up for review or something and then they notice the crowd. It could bring up the question of whether Teyla would still be accepted on Atlantis considering who or what she looked like. You know that whole trust thing.
5The PuppeteerI need more. This is brilliant. You've met a lot of what I was asking in the last chapter, so there was nothing missing here. Good stuff all around. I need more. I want more fight scenes. Oh, I'd love to see a whole spar scene first between Teyla and Ronon and after Ronon losing...all between Teyla and John-ooh and with the military right there. Ooh, bring in some generals too. Like a day when Atlantis is up for review or something and then they notice the crowd. It could bring up the question of whether Teyla would still be accepted on Atlantis considering who or what she looked like. You know that whole trust thing.
4/20/2009 c1 8dispatcher652
I love the tag fics. Loved how it was John and not Kaanan that helped Teyla accept herself and become comfortable with the beast within.
8dispatcher652I love the tag fics. Loved how it was John and not Kaanan that helped Teyla accept herself and become comfortable with the beast within.
4/19/2009 c1 33Cielito
Aw...hot and sweet. I'm so glad that she realized that Kanan not only couldn't physically satisfy her but it wasn't what she wanted.
And John, to leave her. That must have been hard for him. He so badly just wants to stay with her and yet he's giving her that distance.
Love it!
33CielitoAw...hot and sweet. I'm so glad that she realized that Kanan not only couldn't physically satisfy her but it wasn't what she wanted.
And John, to leave her. That must have been hard for him. He so badly just wants to stay with her and yet he's giving her that distance.
Love it!