for Coming Clean1/5 c12 waitingformyletter
I have read this story multiple time and I absolutely adore it! I would have enjoyed a little smut ;) but it was still utterly perfect! Seamus...poor Seamus! I loved Blaise! I haven't checked to see if there is a sequel but I hope there is!
I have read this story multiple time and I absolutely adore it! I would have enjoyed a little smut ;) but it was still utterly perfect! Seamus...poor Seamus! I loved Blaise! I haven't checked to see if there is a sequel but I hope there is!
11/19/2012 c15 
8Sychronergy
Somewhere in the middle, I sometimes think that things were overly dramatic, but it did turn out rather complete.
I admit I skipped all the Seamus part, though. Couldn't stand his freaking stupid whining over nothing.
Enjoyed the story immensely. Thanks for writing it.
8SychronergySomewhere in the middle, I sometimes think that things were overly dramatic, but it did turn out rather complete.
I admit I skipped all the Seamus part, though. Couldn't stand his freaking stupid whining over nothing.
Enjoyed the story immensely. Thanks for writing it.
11/19/2012 c9 Sychronergy
Wow, can Seamus like, GTFO? I'm sorry, but he is really annoying the heck out of me.
You have Malfoy who's taking it like a man - torture, shame, and pain. Then you have Seamus, angsting over every word, too weak to do anything for himself. Uggh.
This fic would have been loads better without those annoying Seamus bits and just focusing on Harry/Draco.
Rant aside, this fic is really brilliant. The whole time, I keep thinking that the emotions are all so raw. Very well written, with realistic characterization.
Wow, can Seamus like, GTFO? I'm sorry, but he is really annoying the heck out of me.
You have Malfoy who's taking it like a man - torture, shame, and pain. Then you have Seamus, angsting over every word, too weak to do anything for himself. Uggh.
This fic would have been loads better without those annoying Seamus bits and just focusing on Harry/Draco.
Rant aside, this fic is really brilliant. The whole time, I keep thinking that the emotions are all so raw. Very well written, with realistic characterization.
10/29/2012 c9 Guest
if your ;life is (was) really in place like this you need help.
Professional and quickly.
if your ;life is (was) really in place like this you need help.
Professional and quickly.
9/18/2012 c15 Changedaccountssss
Not a bad story, just I don't think Harry is like that. He's not homophobic. You can just totally tell. But what you did, turning him into this macho, gay hating jerk. I hate people like him.
Not a bad story, just I don't think Harry is like that. He's not homophobic. You can just totally tell. But what you did, turning him into this macho, gay hating jerk. I hate people like him.
9/18/2012 c9 Changedaccountssss
This is depressing. The torture, the name calling, the fact that you made Draco so incredibly WEAK. I don't like it. If I hate anything more, it's definitely Draco being weak.
This is depressing. The torture, the name calling, the fact that you made Draco so incredibly WEAK. I don't like it. If I hate anything more, it's definitely Draco being weak.
9/18/2012 c6 Changedaccountssss
Lucius should not be a parent. Your supposed to protect your children from the big bad, not give the big bad to them.
Lucius should not be a parent. Your supposed to protect your children from the big bad, not give the big bad to them.
9/18/2012 c5 Changedaccountssss
Seamus is a bit of a hypocrite I think, calling Harry that awful word, I just can't say that word, yet, he was sleeping with Blaise. I would have kicked both Seamus and Harry's asses if they had hurt me the way they hurt Draco and Blaise. They don't deserve Draco and Blaise. They deserve to be miserable.
Seamus is a bit of a hypocrite I think, calling Harry that awful word, I just can't say that word, yet, he was sleeping with Blaise. I would have kicked both Seamus and Harry's asses if they had hurt me the way they hurt Draco and Blaise. They don't deserve Draco and Blaise. They deserve to be miserable.
9/18/2012 c3 Changedaccountssss
Poor Draco. Stupid Harry for punching Draco when he's gone through Hell and back. And stupid Harry for not admitting that he is Gay.
Poor Draco. Stupid Harry for punching Draco when he's gone through Hell and back. And stupid Harry for not admitting that he is Gay.
9/18/2012 c2 Changedaccountssss
Harry is so stupid. How could he lie about being gay. What is wrong with men? seriously, if your gay, your gay, there is no going back. And besides there is absolutely nothing wrong with it. People just fear what they don't understand.
Harry is so stupid. How could he lie about being gay. What is wrong with men? seriously, if your gay, your gay, there is no going back. And besides there is absolutely nothing wrong with it. People just fear what they don't understand.
9/18/2012 c1 Changedaccountssss
A picture of them in bed on the front page of the paper? a little to extreme if you ask me. And illegal.
A picture of them in bed on the front page of the paper? a little to extreme if you ask me. And illegal.
9/16/2012 c13 mustangsnaps
Don't get me wrong, I adore this story but I have one correction for you. About the use of skelegrow. Ok so u hav pomfrey say to Seamus that for his broken hand he needs skelegrow. But in book two of HP wnlhen Harry loses his arm bones pomfrey tells him that if he came to her with just a broken arm she could fix it imediatly with a simple spell, but he only needs skelegrow cuz his bones are missing. It was just kind of bothering me. Other than that this story is amazing! I love it. U are a great author. Keep up the good work:)
Don't get me wrong, I adore this story but I have one correction for you. About the use of skelegrow. Ok so u hav pomfrey say to Seamus that for his broken hand he needs skelegrow. But in book two of HP wnlhen Harry loses his arm bones pomfrey tells him that if he came to her with just a broken arm she could fix it imediatly with a simple spell, but he only needs skelegrow cuz his bones are missing. It was just kind of bothering me. Other than that this story is amazing! I love it. U are a great author. Keep up the good work:)