for Burning3/22/2011 c2 Ingrid
I just read this fanfiction, and I must really compliment you for writing one of the best naomily fictions I have read in a long time.
You really capture the thoughts of Naomi and Emily very well, and I hope you will keep writing.
I just read this fanfiction, and I must really compliment you for writing one of the best naomily fictions I have read in a long time.
You really capture the thoughts of Naomi and Emily very well, and I hope you will keep writing.
5/1/2010 c2 Izobel
OMG that was so awesome. I love angsty smut. *Drools*
Keep writing more please...!
OMG that was so awesome. I love angsty smut. *Drools*
Keep writing more please...!
5/20/2009 c1 
1plumbago62
Loved This Story. Very Vivid And Discriptive. fills in the blanks between Scenes nicely.
1plumbago62Loved This Story. Very Vivid And Discriptive. fills in the blanks between Scenes nicely.
5/15/2009 c2 sarahlt75
phew! wow your writing is fantastic,true tallent...more?x
phew! wow your writing is fantastic,true tallent...more?x
5/4/2009 c2 4you-smell-terrific
*death*
I don't have much to say right now, other than you write wonderfully LOL
4you-smell-terrific*death*
I don't have much to say right now, other than you write wonderfully LOL
4/27/2009 c2 15ApathyandEmpathy
This is beautifully written, i love how you flick between the reality of the moment and both girls knowing that afterwards things are probably going to fall apart. Awesome.
15ApathyandEmpathyThis is beautifully written, i love how you flick between the reality of the moment and both girls knowing that afterwards things are probably going to fall apart. Awesome.
4/27/2009 c1 6urbankazoos
Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. THIS is the way all Naomily should be written, so I'm hoping (literally) that you're not quite done with them. PLEASE don't be done with them.
6urbankazoosYes. Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes. THIS is the way all Naomily should be written, so I'm hoping (literally) that you're not quite done with them. PLEASE don't be done with them.
4/26/2009 c2 whew
it's hot in here
it's hot in here
4/26/2009 c2 kittenweasel
Beautifully written (and extremely hot!)
I've not watched the whole series yet, but it feels like you've captured their thoughts and feelings perfectly here. Much awesomeness.
Beautifully written (and extremely hot!)
I've not watched the whole series yet, but it feels like you've captured their thoughts and feelings perfectly here. Much awesomeness.
4/26/2009 c1 anon in awe
holy...
wow...that was f*ing amazing. you have a way with words. the emotions weaved together so well and were captured in such detail...i'm a bit breathless after reading that.
loved the ending too...
brilliant job, i'm going to be looking forward to your stuff now.
holy...
wow...that was f*ing amazing. you have a way with words. the emotions weaved together so well and were captured in such detail...i'm a bit breathless after reading that.
loved the ending too...
brilliant job, i'm going to be looking forward to your stuff now.
4/26/2009 c1 nik
Loved it! You should definitely write a second part!
Loved it! You should definitely write a second part!
4/26/2009 c1 JamesDeanIsDead
i love the writing!
its so descriptive and although you called it smut i didn't see that, i saw the writing of experienced craftsman/person.
i absolutely loved it!
and it made me chuckle a bit because like your Naomi i have a thing for high heels {those Christian Louboutin heels (black stilettos) with the red sole}
again loved it please keep writing
i love the writing!
its so descriptive and although you called it smut i didn't see that, i saw the writing of experienced craftsman/person.
i absolutely loved it!
and it made me chuckle a bit because like your Naomi i have a thing for high heels {those Christian Louboutin heels (black stilettos) with the red sole}
again loved it please keep writing
4/25/2009 c1 amt
i definitely think you need to write naomis point of view
i definitely think you need to write naomis point of view