for Together Again5/25/2009 c3 
4ZIIIX
Bravo. This was a marvelous chapter expertly written I must say. You have captured the arrogance of Shizuma quite nicely, and I do like how Nagisa is trying to fight her, but unfortunately cannot do much in the stupor she's in when Shizuma gets to be like, well, Shizuma. Good update, and I await for the next. Oh, and thanks for trying some of my adjectives. I wasn't expecting you to actually use them, but was merely stating what I like to use myself. Until next time.
4ZIIIXBravo. This was a marvelous chapter expertly written I must say. You have captured the arrogance of Shizuma quite nicely, and I do like how Nagisa is trying to fight her, but unfortunately cannot do much in the stupor she's in when Shizuma gets to be like, well, Shizuma. Good update, and I await for the next. Oh, and thanks for trying some of my adjectives. I wasn't expecting you to actually use them, but was merely stating what I like to use myself. Until next time.
5/7/2009 c2 12ethicsforsale
Oh I approve of this fic! You've definitely got me curious as to what Shizuma was doing whenever she disappeared on Nagisa, and why she chose this particular moment to try and get her back. You seem to have the character dynamics down pat, and I'm definitely a fan of the Yaya/Tsubomi pairing.
I really hope you keep on updating this!
12ethicsforsaleOh I approve of this fic! You've definitely got me curious as to what Shizuma was doing whenever she disappeared on Nagisa, and why she chose this particular moment to try and get her back. You seem to have the character dynamics down pat, and I'm definitely a fan of the Yaya/Tsubomi pairing.
I really hope you keep on updating this!
5/5/2009 c2 26Stavri
great chapter. really good and very interesting. so, finally is the day that nagisa have to go and live with shizuma. so, fights and personal problems made the couple to break up. i wonder what sort of problems shizuma had and refused to tell it to her nagisa. yaya-chan and tsubomi looked so funny here yet so cute. i love it when i see them together. i wonder when tamao will realise that she can't have in no way nagisa as her gf. we all know how much nagisa loves shizuma even they are not together, for the moment. and how much close was tamao's and nagisa's relationship was?. we will find out, i hope. also, i hope that things between shizumaxnagisa will be ok again. they are soulmates and all people need a second chance. keep going. i can't wait for the next chapter to come up.
26Stavrigreat chapter. really good and very interesting. so, finally is the day that nagisa have to go and live with shizuma. so, fights and personal problems made the couple to break up. i wonder what sort of problems shizuma had and refused to tell it to her nagisa. yaya-chan and tsubomi looked so funny here yet so cute. i love it when i see them together. i wonder when tamao will realise that she can't have in no way nagisa as her gf. we all know how much nagisa loves shizuma even they are not together, for the moment. and how much close was tamao's and nagisa's relationship was?. we will find out, i hope. also, i hope that things between shizumaxnagisa will be ok again. they are soulmates and all people need a second chance. keep going. i can't wait for the next chapter to come up.
5/5/2009 c2 2Jennayees
lol yay a chapter...hm...so thats how they separated...lol i kinda get it and wow nagisa dated tomoe before?...hmm...i wonder how shizuma is gunna get nagisa back...*sigh* o well ill never know...just have to wait for the chapters =="
hope you update soon ^_^
2Jennayeeslol yay a chapter...hm...so thats how they separated...lol i kinda get it and wow nagisa dated tomoe before?...hmm...i wonder how shizuma is gunna get nagisa back...*sigh* o well ill never know...just have to wait for the chapters =="
hope you update soon ^_^
5/4/2009 c2 4ZIIIX
'Nother chapter, and still looking good. I like the interaction between Nagisa and Tamao, but I've got a bad feeling about what Shizuma will do to Tamao depending on the answer she's looking for. (Favourite character, pay no mind)
I noticed in the in the last chapter that you have an interesting way of colours for the characters, like Nagisa having lilac coloured eyes and Shizuma having sienna. Just found it kinda strange. I mean I can see Tamao having sapphire eyes since she does in the manga, but... I just don't know. Just an observation though, pay no mind.
4ZIIIX'Nother chapter, and still looking good. I like the interaction between Nagisa and Tamao, but I've got a bad feeling about what Shizuma will do to Tamao depending on the answer she's looking for. (Favourite character, pay no mind)
I noticed in the in the last chapter that you have an interesting way of colours for the characters, like Nagisa having lilac coloured eyes and Shizuma having sienna. Just found it kinda strange. I mean I can see Tamao having sapphire eyes since she does in the manga, but... I just don't know. Just an observation though, pay no mind.
5/4/2009 c2 usagiharuka
please update thia amazing story. you have all three of my fav couples yaya/tsubomi, amane/hikari, and nagisa and shizuma maybe miyki can get tamao and a hint of chikaru/shion loving .
please update thia amazing story. you have all three of my fav couples yaya/tsubomi, amane/hikari, and nagisa and shizuma maybe miyki can get tamao and a hint of chikaru/shion loving .
5/4/2009 c2 7Amber sama
o my god i love this story, i can't belive it this good.ya{pore shizuma and nagisa:(]
7Amber samao my god i love this story, i can't belive it this good.ya{pore shizuma and nagisa:(]
4/26/2009 c1 26Stavri
great story. so, in here shizuma and nagisa have broken up for some reason which we are going to find out in the next chapter. shizuma doesn't lose a chance and visits nagisa and asks her to stay with her since she is leaving from Miator. Nagisa doesn't give an asnwer but surely she is going to stay with her cause once more Shizuma uses her famous charm on her. indeed shizuma hasn't change however you can't deny the fact that they are soulmates. that's why nagisa reacts the way she reacts. and now, shizuma and nagisa are going to stay together. i think it's a very good idea of these two living in the same place. in that way they might make up again and besides, from what i see this is the only chance they have. i only hope they can make it. anyway, keep going. i can't wait for the next chapter to come up. and of course the reason why they took different ways.
26Stavrigreat story. so, in here shizuma and nagisa have broken up for some reason which we are going to find out in the next chapter. shizuma doesn't lose a chance and visits nagisa and asks her to stay with her since she is leaving from Miator. Nagisa doesn't give an asnwer but surely she is going to stay with her cause once more Shizuma uses her famous charm on her. indeed shizuma hasn't change however you can't deny the fact that they are soulmates. that's why nagisa reacts the way she reacts. and now, shizuma and nagisa are going to stay together. i think it's a very good idea of these two living in the same place. in that way they might make up again and besides, from what i see this is the only chance they have. i only hope they can make it. anyway, keep going. i can't wait for the next chapter to come up. and of course the reason why they took different ways.
4/26/2009 c1 2Jennayees
o interesting story...sad that they aint together right now...but im sure they will later on lol...wonder why they aint together...(sigh) have to wait for the nxt chapter the find out Dx
hope you update soon ^_^
nice start by the way xD
2Jennayeeso interesting story...sad that they aint together right now...but im sure they will later on lol...wonder why they aint together...(sigh) have to wait for the nxt chapter the find out Dx
hope you update soon ^_^
nice start by the way xD
4/25/2009 c1 5Lilium7904
Oh~ this is a really good start. And I surely loved the way you are writting...you are able to make us feel what they are feeling with a story at the third person...C'est tellement rare maintenant pour une romance.
J'adore, I'll see you other story. Hope you'll update soon! *happy*
5Lilium7904Oh~ this is a really good start. And I surely loved the way you are writting...you are able to make us feel what they are feeling with a story at the third person...C'est tellement rare maintenant pour une romance.
J'adore, I'll see you other story. Hope you'll update soon! *happy*