for Saving Home8/30/2010 c1 
14aichioluv
hehe, im here to review again!
i often wished gippal was there in ffx. i love that cocky jackass to bits :)
im always struggling with wishing the translation is right beside the al bhed lines, and wanting the translation to be at the bottom to preserve the al bhed feel (like what you did :P)
but good job! i like tidus' snide comment at the end XD
14aichioluvhehe, im here to review again!
i often wished gippal was there in ffx. i love that cocky jackass to bits :)
im always struggling with wishing the translation is right beside the al bhed lines, and wanting the translation to be at the bottom to preserve the al bhed feel (like what you did :P)
but good job! i like tidus' snide comment at the end XD
5/28/2009 c1 49AndSheWasBeautiful
Awh! Pure cuteness! I loved it! You seem to write Rikku and Gippal perfectly. Well done!
xx Caitlin
49AndSheWasBeautifulAwh! Pure cuteness! I loved it! You seem to write Rikku and Gippal perfectly. Well done!
xx Caitlin