for Between the Grave and Glory12/12/2011 c18 angel rodriguez
when will you write more? it better be soon. You've kept me waiting long enough
when will you write more? it better be soon. You've kept me waiting long enough
12/12/2011 c13 angel rodriguez
this is some funny stuff
this is some funny stuff
12/12/2011 c13 angel rodriguez
sorry i haven't reviewed but i was so intent on getting to the next chapter :) You go girl!
sorry i haven't reviewed but i was so intent on getting to the next chapter :) You go girl!
12/12/2011 c6 angel rodriguez
its angel again, and is still loving the plot of your story :)
its angel again, and is still loving the plot of your story :)
12/12/2011 c4 angel rodriguez
you rock! I love everything about your story so far!
you rock! I love everything about your story so far!
12/12/2011 c2 angel rodriguez
i like the mystery part. but otherwise, the story is great :)
i like the mystery part. but otherwise, the story is great :)
7/10/2011 c18 MARI LOVES EMMETT
I liked this chapter but I think its too many point of views for my taste. But their good. I would think its too much work to do different people's p.o.v. but its ur story :D
Keep up with the good work, I wouldn't mind any gossip or mini dramas in the school it would be very interesting.
I liked this chapter but I think its too many point of views for my taste. But their good. I would think its too much work to do different people's p.o.v. but its ur story :D
Keep up with the good work, I wouldn't mind any gossip or mini dramas in the school it would be very interesting.
1/28/2011 c17 
2neverforgetlove
Like the link with the House of Night series too...not sure if that was what you were going for but I saw the parallel :) please update soon!
2neverforgetloveLike the link with the House of Night series too...not sure if that was what you were going for but I saw the parallel :) please update soon!
1/27/2011 c17 MARI LOVES EMMETT
Oh my freakin god... this chapter was beyond your best work I have seen for this story. It has mystery, romance, lust, fantasy and sexy guys. Lol.
I really liked the line kartik says about not denying it we are a man and a woman... that line... was sexy. Haha. But yea its really a good chapter I hope u write more. :)
Oh my freakin god... this chapter was beyond your best work I have seen for this story. It has mystery, romance, lust, fantasy and sexy guys. Lol.
I really liked the line kartik says about not denying it we are a man and a woman... that line... was sexy. Haha. But yea its really a good chapter I hope u write more. :)
1/27/2011 c17 MARI LOVES EMMETT
Oh my freakin god... this chapter was beyond your best work I have seen for this story. It has mystery, romance, lust, fantasy and sexy guys. Lol.
I really liked the line kartik says about not denying it we are a man and a woman... that line... was sexy. Haha. But yea its really a good chapter I hope u write more. :)
Oh my freakin god... this chapter was beyond your best work I have seen for this story. It has mystery, romance, lust, fantasy and sexy guys. Lol.
I really liked the line kartik says about not denying it we are a man and a woman... that line... was sexy. Haha. But yea its really a good chapter I hope u write more. :)
10/14/2010 c16 11AcaciaDawn
I do love this story, but please don't make Ally fall in love with Kartik, because that is so wrong. Kartik is over a hundred, although the same can be said for Edward. However, Edward has a goo reason that he is so old, he's a vampire, and Kartik does not have hat excuse. Besides, I think I would be good for Ally and Edward to stay together.
Please do not make her fall in love with Kartik, maybe good friends, but not lovers.
AcaciaDawn
11AcaciaDawnI do love this story, but please don't make Ally fall in love with Kartik, because that is so wrong. Kartik is over a hundred, although the same can be said for Edward. However, Edward has a goo reason that he is so old, he's a vampire, and Kartik does not have hat excuse. Besides, I think I would be good for Ally and Edward to stay together.
Please do not make her fall in love with Kartik, maybe good friends, but not lovers.
AcaciaDawn
10/13/2010 c9 AcaciaDawn
I like this story so far, but I noticed that in chapter 9 you started taking things directly from the original Twilight story and changing them only in the slightest bit, almost as if you wanted people to notice that you did. Other than that, I absolutly love the story. A lot of people I know don't like Edward and would rather write about Jacob, so I'm glad you used him. Thank you for presenting me with the perfect combination of my two favorite books.
AcaciaDawn.
I like this story so far, but I noticed that in chapter 9 you started taking things directly from the original Twilight story and changing them only in the slightest bit, almost as if you wanted people to notice that you did. Other than that, I absolutly love the story. A lot of people I know don't like Edward and would rather write about Jacob, so I'm glad you used him. Thank you for presenting me with the perfect combination of my two favorite books.
AcaciaDawn.
8/27/2010 c16 1katab524
This is so AWESOME! I can't believe that Alana doesn't want all the things she gets. I would totally want a big room and junk. KEEP WRITING! :)
1katab524This is so AWESOME! I can't believe that Alana doesn't want all the things she gets. I would totally want a big room and junk. KEEP WRITING! :)
8/1/2010 c16 MARI LOVES EMMETT
Omg this was a good chapter but at first it seemed a little slow. I'm glad u continued on the story. also Kartrik seems like a hott dude, in a ALL girl skool... Which I bet he'll like very much. And he kinda seems like a already boyfriend in a way.butonce agn i'm glad u made a new chapter, next time make it longer and keep doin' them chapters! :D
Omg this was a good chapter but at first it seemed a little slow. I'm glad u continued on the story. also Kartrik seems like a hott dude, in a ALL girl skool... Which I bet he'll like very much. And he kinda seems like a already boyfriend in a way.butonce agn i'm glad u made a new chapter, next time make it longer and keep doin' them chapters! :D