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46Kenneth Black
XD XD XD XD Fireball-hot, indeed. This was a scorching-burn chapter, and I'll be glad when you get the next one up. *grin* Ahh, Hades, Artemis, and Xena, all on the same side for the sake of two soulmates coming together and stopping a bid bad Ares. =3 You've certainly got me intrigued. More word power to ya! XD
46Kenneth BlackXD XD XD XD Fireball-hot, indeed. This was a scorching-burn chapter, and I'll be glad when you get the next one up. *grin* Ahh, Hades, Artemis, and Xena, all on the same side for the sake of two soulmates coming together and stopping a bid bad Ares. =3 You've certainly got me intrigued. More word power to ya! XD
1/4/2012 c4 Kenneth Black
Ooooh! XD Great conditions, and ever-so-torturous for the Warrior Princess and her mate. =3 Hmmm, I really am surprised by Hades taking her in on conditions such as that just to let Xena go in the end, with Ares rampaging around in Tartarus, but then again, this is really interesting. ^^
Ooooh! XD Great conditions, and ever-so-torturous for the Warrior Princess and her mate. =3 Hmmm, I really am surprised by Hades taking her in on conditions such as that just to let Xena go in the end, with Ares rampaging around in Tartarus, but then again, this is really interesting. ^^
1/4/2012 c3 Kenneth Black
Whoa. . . At this time, I'm appropriately reminded that animals can't go to heaven. -.- ^^; Ahhh, Gabrielle's journey down to Tartarus just sounds positively awesome! XD I love the tension around this. =3
Whoa. . . At this time, I'm appropriately reminded that animals can't go to heaven. -.- ^^; Ahhh, Gabrielle's journey down to Tartarus just sounds positively awesome! XD I love the tension around this. =3
1/4/2012 c2 Kenneth Black
*gape* Whoa, "joined to you"? XD As in, Ephiny's gonna be Gabrielle's consort? XD AHAHAHAHAHAAAAA! Wow, this is original! Awesome idea! =3
*gape* Whoa, "joined to you"? XD As in, Ephiny's gonna be Gabrielle's consort? XD AHAHAHAHAHAAAAA! Wow, this is original! Awesome idea! =3
12/29/2010 c1 1bardatheart
hey! i began reading this because the summary was interesting, and i got through the five chapters that you posted but now i feel the need to finish this awesome story! I would really appreciate it if you could post the rest of the story or e-mail it to me, or tell me where to find it! Thanks! Pretty good job for your first time
1bardathearthey! i began reading this because the summary was interesting, and i got through the five chapters that you posted but now i feel the need to finish this awesome story! I would really appreciate it if you could post the rest of the story or e-mail it to me, or tell me where to find it! Thanks! Pretty good job for your first time
9/14/2010 c5 28the mighty lu bu
Definite improvement. First I like Ares motivation here for getting to Xena. He always wants her. This chapter seems to be a launch point for some future event.
This story is an excellent use of drama. I feel that you have a lot potential as a writer. Keep it up.
28the mighty lu buDefinite improvement. First I like Ares motivation here for getting to Xena. He always wants her. This chapter seems to be a launch point for some future event.
This story is an excellent use of drama. I feel that you have a lot potential as a writer. Keep it up.
9/6/2010 c1 3Winter Wish 7
Wow! really, really good story! i enjoyed reading it, and i cannot wait for more! thanks love Winter Wish 7 Xxx
3Winter Wish 7Wow! really, really good story! i enjoyed reading it, and i cannot wait for more! thanks love Winter Wish 7 Xxx
8/22/2010 c4 28the mighty lu bu
Much better, should have been the third chapter.
Ok, Xena is trying to pay for her crimes, this is something she nearly obsesses over it. And this is certainly a different way to go about. Kudos to you for thinking of it.
Then there is Gabrielle’s emotion, she should have more. But this is a start and this story as well as your ability seems to progressing which is good, progress is a wonderful thing. Don’t get discouraged.
Artemis does not have a large part in the series which allows you the writer to take on whatever approach you deem most fitting to your story, just don’t forget that once you establish the rules for the character you need to abide by them or provide a logical cause for a sudden change of character
Artemis is almost a created character in that way as she had very little role in both series. You can shape her too what you like, villian, hero or something in between. You seem be going toe benevolent route with her. She seems to have taken an interest in both Xena and Gabrielle.
As for Hades, hades in the series was always a good guy in a tough role, which you capture pretty well considering he is only spoken of and not actually scene.
Glad to see the actual explanation behind the kissed arrows. It’s actually sweet and shows a lot for Artemis to be participating this way as well as Xena dedication of love to Gabrielle to try to communicate with her.
Over all, needs more editing, but this is an improvement of previous chapter, good job, keep practicing your craft. It takes time to awesome and with dedication you can become an awesome writer.
28the mighty lu buMuch better, should have been the third chapter.
Ok, Xena is trying to pay for her crimes, this is something she nearly obsesses over it. And this is certainly a different way to go about. Kudos to you for thinking of it.
Then there is Gabrielle’s emotion, she should have more. But this is a start and this story as well as your ability seems to progressing which is good, progress is a wonderful thing. Don’t get discouraged.
Artemis does not have a large part in the series which allows you the writer to take on whatever approach you deem most fitting to your story, just don’t forget that once you establish the rules for the character you need to abide by them or provide a logical cause for a sudden change of character
Artemis is almost a created character in that way as she had very little role in both series. You can shape her too what you like, villian, hero or something in between. You seem be going toe benevolent route with her. She seems to have taken an interest in both Xena and Gabrielle.
As for Hades, hades in the series was always a good guy in a tough role, which you capture pretty well considering he is only spoken of and not actually scene.
Glad to see the actual explanation behind the kissed arrows. It’s actually sweet and shows a lot for Artemis to be participating this way as well as Xena dedication of love to Gabrielle to try to communicate with her.
Over all, needs more editing, but this is an improvement of previous chapter, good job, keep practicing your craft. It takes time to awesome and with dedication you can become an awesome writer.
8/22/2010 c3 the mighty lu bu
It is short and leaves me little to comment on.
However it is a good little chapter. Though if Xena is in Tartarus how in the "Tartarus" is Xena sending her notes.
You really increase the story with the revation that Xena is dead by Artemis. Now it's like Xena's dead? But she is coming back, and how? It leave potential for later chapters. I would like to say more but i have nothing left to talk about.
It is short and leaves me little to comment on.
However it is a good little chapter. Though if Xena is in Tartarus how in the "Tartarus" is Xena sending her notes.
You really increase the story with the revation that Xena is dead by Artemis. Now it's like Xena's dead? But she is coming back, and how? It leave potential for later chapters. I would like to say more but i have nothing left to talk about.