for TUAOA:Naruto: Terror of the Einst3/4 c44 drevagon
I hope you make the sequel because if it is anything like this one then I know it will be epic.
I hope you make the sequel because if it is anything like this one then I know it will be epic.
7/19/2012 c7 Guest
I loved your choice of my plague by slipknot, I'm a huge slipknot fan myself and I squealed like a fan girl when I saw that XD keep up the great work!
I loved your choice of my plague by slipknot, I'm a huge slipknot fan myself and I squealed like a fan girl when I saw that XD keep up the great work!
11/1/2011 c2 Dragunav
So if Narutos' Items weren't ready..What would be the point for Kakashi to get the items? Clever thinking. He's not 3 months late if his order isn't finished...
So if Narutos' Items weren't ready..What would be the point for Kakashi to get the items? Clever thinking. He's not 3 months late if his order isn't finished...
9/3/2011 c16 
2sasuXsaku33
that was one funny hinata hour hahahahaha and speaking of sasuke what do you Think of his 'enternal' sharigan?
2sasuXsaku33that was one funny hinata hour hahahahaha and speaking of sasuke what do you Think of his 'enternal' sharigan?
9/1/2011 c11 sasuXsaku33
ewww picture of animal sex *pukes*
me: *standing in the crowd* *puts naruto cap on and picks up a naruto sign that has his name on it and startes shaking it gently while smiling* good job
ewww picture of animal sex *pukes*
me: *standing in the crowd* *puts naruto cap on and picks up a naruto sign that has his name on it and startes shaking it gently while smiling* good job
9/1/2011 c10 sasuXsaku33
that so cute where hnata touched naruto accidently then they both blushed and that was funny
at the end of hinata hour
that so cute where hnata touched naruto accidently then they both blushed and that was funny
at the end of hinata hour
9/1/2011 c1 Sierpedro777
Hey its me. SOrry I haven't been online or anything lately. Sorry I haven't been keeping up with my your stories either. School has been busy.
Problem: I can't get into my fanfiction account. I don't know why but the site tells me that my email isn't registered with the account. I may have to get a new account to finish my story.
Just so you know, I am now CannedMadMan66 on DA now. Please look for me on there for now on. Thanks.
Hey its me. SOrry I haven't been online or anything lately. Sorry I haven't been keeping up with my your stories either. School has been busy.
Problem: I can't get into my fanfiction account. I don't know why but the site tells me that my email isn't registered with the account. I may have to get a new account to finish my story.
Just so you know, I am now CannedMadMan66 on DA now. Please look for me on there for now on. Thanks.
8/14/2011 c26 6bh18
GOOD GOD I CAN'T READ THIS ANYMORE! This thing sucks! It just plain sucks on every level I can imagine! I the only reason I made it this far was because of the naru/hina fluff! Do you even HAVE a Beta Reader? If so, FIRE that guy/girl now! He doesn't know squat about what a Beta reader is supposed to do or he/she doesn't know squat about... well much else if he/she passes this steaming pile of ** through!
Now that my rant is out it's time for the compliments. Which are FEW. Your story structure is excellent, that much I like but your grammar and sentance structure is HORRIBLE! I would give you some advice about how to fix this but the problems are just too damn many to list in a review! Wait, I'm ranting again. Aside from the...you know whats. This has the potential to be an excellent fic if you just scrub the ** shelf off. Get yourself a decent Beta reader, and by decent I mean a god, Microsoft Word, if you have it which I find doubtful, and a crash course in writing. Oh and dialoge. Nobody talks like this. "I am not sure why I did not do this." Too crisp, formal and unreal. People use conjectures (Is that right?) like I'm, don't, They're and such. Also I remembered you have a habit for using one word in one sentence twice, i.e. She exuberatly said with exuberace. That is just plain no. That and your overuse of the word 'as.' Do us and everyone else a favor, AVOID IT LIKE THE PLAUGE!
6bh18GOOD GOD I CAN'T READ THIS ANYMORE! This thing sucks! It just plain sucks on every level I can imagine! I the only reason I made it this far was because of the naru/hina fluff! Do you even HAVE a Beta Reader? If so, FIRE that guy/girl now! He doesn't know squat about what a Beta reader is supposed to do or he/she doesn't know squat about... well much else if he/she passes this steaming pile of ** through!
Now that my rant is out it's time for the compliments. Which are FEW. Your story structure is excellent, that much I like but your grammar and sentance structure is HORRIBLE! I would give you some advice about how to fix this but the problems are just too damn many to list in a review! Wait, I'm ranting again. Aside from the...you know whats. This has the potential to be an excellent fic if you just scrub the ** shelf off. Get yourself a decent Beta reader, and by decent I mean a god, Microsoft Word, if you have it which I find doubtful, and a crash course in writing. Oh and dialoge. Nobody talks like this. "I am not sure why I did not do this." Too crisp, formal and unreal. People use conjectures (Is that right?) like I'm, don't, They're and such. Also I remembered you have a habit for using one word in one sentence twice, i.e. She exuberatly said with exuberace. That is just plain no. That and your overuse of the word 'as.' Do us and everyone else a favor, AVOID IT LIKE THE PLAUGE!
5/12/2011 c6 2sasuXsaku33
you kinda don't make any sense for the speaking parts when there finished but good job
2sasuXsaku33you kinda don't make any sense for the speaking parts when there finished but good job
8/30/2010 c44 chris bounds
hello i just read the 1 chapter prequal and terror of einst in about a week and have to ask "WERE THE F DID YOU GET THE IDEA FOR THIS MASTERPEICE OF HORROR, ROMANCE, HUMOR, AND SO MUCH MORE! but really this is already in my top 5 stories read ever and in last 3 or 4 years i've read about 1,000 different stories, and that's not counting mult-story series as more then one per series. hope you keep making truely great and grand stories based on this for a long time.
hello i just read the 1 chapter prequal and terror of einst in about a week and have to ask "WERE THE F DID YOU GET THE IDEA FOR THIS MASTERPEICE OF HORROR, ROMANCE, HUMOR, AND SO MUCH MORE! but really this is already in my top 5 stories read ever and in last 3 or 4 years i've read about 1,000 different stories, and that's not counting mult-story series as more then one per series. hope you keep making truely great and grand stories based on this for a long time.