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48ASiriuslyGleekyTimeLord
This is really cute! I love the idea of Eliot with a son! So cute!
48ASiriuslyGleekyTimeLordThis is really cute! I love the idea of Eliot with a son! So cute!
5/15/2009 c1 2Serenity Starke
Oh, I'm intrigued. I can't wait to see what happens next. Very well written chapter. Easy flowing and nice build up to what I am sure is going to be very good reading.
2Serenity StarkeOh, I'm intrigued. I can't wait to see what happens next. Very well written chapter. Easy flowing and nice build up to what I am sure is going to be very good reading.
5/10/2009 c1 1Jasmine628
Omg! Ben is too cute. And Eliot is such a good Dad. And I hope that Eliot kicks the butt of the guy threatening Ben.
1Jasmine628Omg! Ben is too cute. And Eliot is such a good Dad. And I hope that Eliot kicks the butt of the guy threatening Ben.
5/10/2009 c1 33Goody
Gr to the mean man on the phone, threatening Ben! But I must say, Eliot hanging out with a kid is crazy cute. "What the hell are swimmies!" - classic Eliot!
And I am drooling at the image of Eliot swimming .. m. Very fun, but still that little bit of danger, I love it! And Ben seems like a cool kid.
33GoodyGr to the mean man on the phone, threatening Ben! But I must say, Eliot hanging out with a kid is crazy cute. "What the hell are swimmies!" - classic Eliot!
And I am drooling at the image of Eliot swimming .. m. Very fun, but still that little bit of danger, I love it! And Ben seems like a cool kid.