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5/1/2011 c15
1Luneon the Eclipse Pokemon
I just thought about one of these with sawsbucks but youll have to read to find out XD
1Luneon the Eclipse PokemonI just thought about one of these with sawsbucks but youll have to read to find out XD
10/1/2010 c15
1TS and Double-T Forever Strong
Awee! But dang... you should probably have more reviews than that.
1TS and Double-T Forever StrongAwee! But dang... you should probably have more reviews than that.
4/25/2010 c14 ChargingForwardBlind
Alright - it took me a long time, but here ya go!
Another excellent chapter! The action was good, the characters were good...I just hope that Cyndaquil will find Chikorita, even if he has to go to the Frost Area. I'm glad that Dialga appeared! He's one of my favorites! Ugh, I just hope Dark Mew stops causing all this trouble...
Great job, I'm sorry this took so long, and I can't wait for another update!
Alright - it took me a long time, but here ya go!
Another excellent chapter! The action was good, the characters were good...I just hope that Cyndaquil will find Chikorita, even if he has to go to the Frost Area. I'm glad that Dialga appeared! He's one of my favorites! Ugh, I just hope Dark Mew stops causing all this trouble...
Great job, I'm sorry this took so long, and I can't wait for another update!
2/4/2010 c14 Zariots
GREAT JOB! I like the velocity which the history is related.
I want to read the next chapter, I'm in suspense.
Sorry if I write bad, I'm mexican :p
GREAT JOB! I like the velocity which the history is related.
I want to read the next chapter, I'm in suspense.
Sorry if I write bad, I'm mexican :p
1/13/2010 c13
5ChargingForwardBlind
Another great chapter! And you've left me in suspense AGAIN! This fic always keeps me guessing! I love how the story is progressing, and I hope to see an update soon! This is one of my favorite stories and I'm eager to see what happens next!
5ChargingForwardBlindAnother great chapter! And you've left me in suspense AGAIN! This fic always keeps me guessing! I love how the story is progressing, and I hope to see an update soon! This is one of my favorite stories and I'm eager to see what happens next!
11/10/2009 c13
1TS and Double-T Forever Strong
GASP! DUN DUN DUN! Do Chikorita and Cyndaquil like each other?o.o
1TS and Double-T Forever StrongGASP! DUN DUN DUN! Do Chikorita and Cyndaquil like each other?o.o
10/28/2009 c10
2Alec97531
-The second it said 'Forest Maze' the SMRPG song popped into my head!
-The origin of Surge's accent was hilarious
-I think that cyndaquil and chikorita answered the questions TOO easily.
2Alec97531-The second it said 'Forest Maze' the SMRPG song popped into my head!
-The origin of Surge's accent was hilarious
-I think that cyndaquil and chikorita answered the questions TOO easily.
10/23/2009 c12
5ChargingForwardBlind
Sorry it took me so long to get to read this, but I loved this chapter! I'm glad a bit of Cyndaquil's past was revealed - I have a feeling that he might get angry again sometime in the future...but that's just a guess! Anyway, great job with continuation and I'm excited for the next chapter! I can't wait to see Dialga...but I hope Cyndaquil and Chikorita can get out of whatever trap Dark Mew has set for them!
5ChargingForwardBlindSorry it took me so long to get to read this, but I loved this chapter! I'm glad a bit of Cyndaquil's past was revealed - I have a feeling that he might get angry again sometime in the future...but that's just a guess! Anyway, great job with continuation and I'm excited for the next chapter! I can't wait to see Dialga...but I hope Cyndaquil and Chikorita can get out of whatever trap Dark Mew has set for them!
10/17/2009 c12
5Once Upon An Oddity
great story! I'm glad I looked in your profile or else i'd would have never read it. thats right I stay and belong in the Hamtaro section. I'm a turtle and its my shell. but I came out of my shell to look a this story I've been hearing about. Its really good! Continue on and update soon.
5Once Upon An Odditygreat story! I'm glad I looked in your profile or else i'd would have never read it. thats right I stay and belong in the Hamtaro section. I'm a turtle and its my shell. but I came out of my shell to look a this story I've been hearing about. Its really good! Continue on and update soon.
10/1/2009 c11
24StaraLaura
OH MY FRIGGN GAWSH, I'M SO SO SO SORRY THAT THIS IS SO SO SO LATE!
I like it! Plenty of action and plenty of adventures in this so far! (I can tell this is going to be a long story. Woo hoo!) I really have nothing to complain about since it's a nice, easy to read story. you could use a little more dialogue with "Chikorita squealed" or words like that, insead of just living it like "You can't defeat it." or something. But I wouldn't worry about that too much and I say that you're doing just fine. More than fine, since I really am begging for the next chapter!
~YOU WILL BE AT THE MERCY OF THE ROCKIES!
-sxmfan :3
24StaraLauraOH MY FRIGGN GAWSH, I'M SO SO SO SORRY THAT THIS IS SO SO SO LATE!
I like it! Plenty of action and plenty of adventures in this so far! (I can tell this is going to be a long story. Woo hoo!) I really have nothing to complain about since it's a nice, easy to read story. you could use a little more dialogue with "Chikorita squealed" or words like that, insead of just living it like "You can't defeat it." or something. But I wouldn't worry about that too much and I say that you're doing just fine. More than fine, since I really am begging for the next chapter!
~YOU WILL BE AT THE MERCY OF THE ROCKIES!
-sxmfan :3
9/3/2009 c11
5ChargingForwardBlind
Oh wow! Dark Mew as Uxie, I definitely wasn't expecting that at all! Another great chapter - I've really liked the plot so far, and it just keeps getting more and more interesting. I can't wait to see Dialga! Hopefully Dark Mew will stay away for the time being so our heroes can get to the Mountain of Time...Great job! :D
5ChargingForwardBlindOh wow! Dark Mew as Uxie, I definitely wasn't expecting that at all! Another great chapter - I've really liked the plot so far, and it just keeps getting more and more interesting. I can't wait to see Dialga! Hopefully Dark Mew will stay away for the time being so our heroes can get to the Mountain of Time...Great job! :D
8/23/2009 c1 dashoff
Good call. The story was better than the summary.
I think it would be better to be more secretive with your plot so as to keep us guessing, rather than laying down your cards on the table for everyone to see (Though saying that you did got my attention).
I was happy to see Mew appearing as I can never get enough of that little guy.
I look forward to seeing more of Cyndaquil and company when I have time to continue reading.
Good call. The story was better than the summary.
I think it would be better to be more secretive with your plot so as to keep us guessing, rather than laying down your cards on the table for everyone to see (Though saying that you did got my attention).
I was happy to see Mew appearing as I can never get enough of that little guy.
I look forward to seeing more of Cyndaquil and company when I have time to continue reading.
7/22/2009 c1
35PuccaFanGirl
Oh! I think Cyndaquil and Chikorita are gonna be a couple! They're already cute together! I'll read the next Chapter soon. Great story! ^^
35PuccaFanGirlOh! I think Cyndaquil and Chikorita are gonna be a couple! They're already cute together! I'll read the next Chapter soon. Great story! ^^
