for the evil inside of me9/28/2009 c5 Gabsmom
I think you've got a good start. I noticed you used some scenes from season 4, but added your own perspectives to it. I like how you've made Dean a little more sympathetic towards Sam. The only thing I think that you need to work on is your spelling, but I think that when you get a beta, he/she will help you with the proofreading.
Keep up with this story. It's on my fav's list!
Gabsmom
I think you've got a good start. I noticed you used some scenes from season 4, but added your own perspectives to it. I like how you've made Dean a little more sympathetic towards Sam. The only thing I think that you need to work on is your spelling, but I think that when you get a beta, he/she will help you with the proofreading.
Keep up with this story. It's on my fav's list!
Gabsmom
6/11/2009 c4 cuddygirl18
i love it! well, next chapter should be more pain with sam or reveal the person hiding inside sam? take your time.
i love it! well, next chapter should be more pain with sam or reveal the person hiding inside sam? take your time.
6/6/2009 c3 Gabsmom
I like the story so far...I would like to see where you take it. I think that you should continue. I have this on my favorites so that as you post a new chapter I can read it...
so please write MORE!
I like the story so far...I would like to see where you take it. I think that you should continue. I have this on my favorites so that as you post a new chapter I can read it...
so please write MORE!
5/16/2009 c1 
1IHeartSPN
Wow - that was enlightening. It somewhat outlined the good nature of Sam's morality - something which not many people seem to do these days, as they automatically shun him something abominable, but no, it was insightful and firm :)
Very good interpretation ;)
I still think of Sammy as sensitive, naive, Season one Walking Encyclopedia of Weirdness little geek, no matter how impure his actions may be at times :)
I think you should continue!
1IHeartSPNWow - that was enlightening. It somewhat outlined the good nature of Sam's morality - something which not many people seem to do these days, as they automatically shun him something abominable, but no, it was insightful and firm :)
Very good interpretation ;)
I still think of Sammy as sensitive, naive, Season one Walking Encyclopedia of Weirdness little geek, no matter how impure his actions may be at times :)
I think you should continue!
5/15/2009 c1 Gabsmom
I know this is your first story, and quite honestly, you're braver than me, because I have ideas, but am not creative enough nor as I said, brave enough to put them to words. I think the story has potential, just figure out where you are going with it. Is it going to be an action fic or angsty...I would like to keep reading it if you are going to continue. Get a beta, I don't know how you do it, I just know that a lot of the writers will get someone to edit their stories before they post them. I am going to put this on my favorites.
Good luck!
I know this is your first story, and quite honestly, you're braver than me, because I have ideas, but am not creative enough nor as I said, brave enough to put them to words. I think the story has potential, just figure out where you are going with it. Is it going to be an action fic or angsty...I would like to keep reading it if you are going to continue. Get a beta, I don't know how you do it, I just know that a lot of the writers will get someone to edit their stories before they post them. I am going to put this on my favorites.
Good luck!