for Unmasking Ashford Ouran Academy3/19/2011 c5 
1VampirePrinssess
omg that was great
oh I'm a bit confuse so Hikaru is the Black Knights member that Zero requested?
update soon
laters
1VampirePrinssessomg that was great
oh I'm a bit confuse so Hikaru is the Black Knights member that Zero requested?
update soon
laters
12/19/2009 c5 3H A R U K A -light
wow~I haven't heard about you in so long~
great chapter^_^
love the shirley part by the way!
3H A R U K A -lightwow~I haven't heard about you in so long~
great chapter^_^
love the shirley part by the way!
12/18/2009 c5 5fedora wind
Now THAT'S interesting. The Ouran characters in the C.G world? Pure Genius.
I'll wait patiently for chapters to come, and don't worry about not updating that often, if you update that way, it sometimes gives more time to think about the plot and polish the story, but that's just my point of view.
5fedora windNow THAT'S interesting. The Ouran characters in the C.G world? Pure Genius.
I'll wait patiently for chapters to come, and don't worry about not updating that often, if you update that way, it sometimes gives more time to think about the plot and polish the story, but that's just my point of view.
8/19/2009 c4 24HannahHell
It's perfect!
My two favorites animes together?
Are you some kind of a Genious?
Continue soon! Please!
24HannahHellIt's perfect!
My two favorites animes together?
Are you some kind of a Genious?
Continue soon! Please!
8/1/2009 c4 1KittyRiotLuvsYew053
oh! i love the story so far :D it wouls be great if the hitachin twins followed rolo into the secret chamber in the library. idk why just to make fun of how boring they thought ne was or something! idk your story :D
love it and subscribing!
1KittyRiotLuvsYew053oh! i love the story so far :D it wouls be great if the hitachin twins followed rolo into the secret chamber in the library. idk why just to make fun of how boring they thought ne was or something! idk your story :D
love it and subscribing!
6/7/2009 c4 3H A R U K A -light
good chapter-
Um...did you make Lulu and Suzaku have a moment?
I'm wondering...if this is a romance what are going to be the main couples (I can only guess-_-) oh well your story keep up the good work!
3H A R U K A -lightgood chapter-
Um...did you make Lulu and Suzaku have a moment?
I'm wondering...if this is a romance what are going to be the main couples (I can only guess-_-) oh well your story keep up the good work!
5/26/2009 c3 reader-sama
its interesting i luv the end of chap 3 where lulu will date CC i luv ccxlelouch
its interesting i luv the end of chap 3 where lulu will date CC i luv ccxlelouch
5/24/2009 c3 Colors of the Rebellion
This Is a really intresting stroy-
I myself haven't read Ouran but I think that the world suits C.G in a comedic sense.
I hope you do not mind some constructive advice- here I go-
1-you should try and detail things more, everything is mostly driven by dialouge, which is alright but isn't as in depth as it could be.
2-try and get a better flow when switching speakers.
3- Give more insight on what the characters are feeling and try not to get into really cliche emotions-
but otherwise having read that this is your 1st fic i really really enjoy it, and I am assured that as the story progreses it will be quite enjoyable.
This Is a really intresting stroy-
I myself haven't read Ouran but I think that the world suits C.G in a comedic sense.
I hope you do not mind some constructive advice- here I go-
1-you should try and detail things more, everything is mostly driven by dialouge, which is alright but isn't as in depth as it could be.
2-try and get a better flow when switching speakers.
3- Give more insight on what the characters are feeling and try not to get into really cliche emotions-
but otherwise having read that this is your 1st fic i really really enjoy it, and I am assured that as the story progreses it will be quite enjoyable.
5/24/2009 c3 H A R U K A -light
This was a funny chapter- how come everyone's just out to get Lelouch! oh poor Lelouch. sigh. I was smiling while reading this.
This was a funny chapter- how come everyone's just out to get Lelouch! oh poor Lelouch. sigh. I was smiling while reading this.