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2teddy240b
Severus as Dr. Frankenstein - a great idea. Why didn't you finish the story. You're a very good writer.
2teddy240bSeverus as Dr. Frankenstein - a great idea. Why didn't you finish the story. You're a very good writer.
9/24/2012 c12 Shelbi
please please finish this story! I think it's a really good start!
please please finish this story! I think it's a really good start!
5/6/2012 c1 8duffie83
Oooohh, very interesting start. Hermione so very rarely screws up, and never this spectacularly. :O)
8duffie83Oooohh, very interesting start. Hermione so very rarely screws up, and never this spectacularly. :O)
7/24/2011 c2 72Kerr Avonsen
Oh I like it when Snape is in the position of a mentor, when he tries to get Hermione to THINK instead of regurgitate her textbooks. Just the kind of story I like. Looking forward to more.
72Kerr AvonsenOh I like it when Snape is in the position of a mentor, when he tries to get Hermione to THINK instead of regurgitate her textbooks. Just the kind of story I like. Looking forward to more.
5/20/2011 c12 5ZabuzasGirl
Apprentince Audition
Update! Do not let this one go! Update you put it off for way too long as it is.
5ZabuzasGirlApprentince Audition
Update! Do not let this one go! Update you put it off for way too long as it is.
5/9/2011 c12 6Mira Black-Lupin
OMG! i love this chapter! I can't believe what Snape is trying to do!
Is for Lily? it coud be very interesting to read a fic Snape/Hermione Snape/Lily!
Please pleaseee update soon!
I don't speak english very well but i'm trying! Hope you can understand what i'm saying!
6Mira Black-LupinOMG! i love this chapter! I can't believe what Snape is trying to do!
Is for Lily? it coud be very interesting to read a fic Snape/Hermione Snape/Lily!
Please pleaseee update soon!
I don't speak english very well but i'm trying! Hope you can understand what i'm saying!
4/27/2011 c11 1stgulik
I'm reluctant to read these last two chapters because chances are remote that the mysteries will all be resolved. So I'll just put this story on alert and tell you thanks for the beginning of such a great story. Your writing style is clear, concise, and free of vanity. As with your other stories, you don't skimp on descriptions of the surroundings. (I want to visit that library!) Your main characters are OOC but really engaging. It's such a pleasure to see Ron Weasley treated as a young man who has intelligence, poise and potential. Thanks again.
1stgulikI'm reluctant to read these last two chapters because chances are remote that the mysteries will all be resolved. So I'll just put this story on alert and tell you thanks for the beginning of such a great story. Your writing style is clear, concise, and free of vanity. As with your other stories, you don't skimp on descriptions of the surroundings. (I want to visit that library!) Your main characters are OOC but really engaging. It's such a pleasure to see Ron Weasley treated as a young man who has intelligence, poise and potential. Thanks again.
4/27/2011 c1 stgulik
I've been reading fanfic for only a few months, but yours is the first - the very first - that features Hermione and Ron WITHOUT the tedious, rote explanation that they *used* to go out but that they discovered they should be just friends. Also no Ron-bashing. Very unique of you!
I've been reading fanfic for only a few months, but yours is the first - the very first - that features Hermione and Ron WITHOUT the tedious, rote explanation that they *used* to go out but that they discovered they should be just friends. Also no Ron-bashing. Very unique of you!
1/8/2011 c12 4Ceralyn
I hope Severus isn't thinking of Lily...still it's very interesting. It doesn't seem to be heading down the dark depressive style other fanfics that have even attempted anything like this always have.
Very interesting overall. Severus is very mysterious; I'm glad we at least were able to find out what all the fuss was about.
Look forward to reading more.
4CeralynI hope Severus isn't thinking of Lily...still it's very interesting. It doesn't seem to be heading down the dark depressive style other fanfics that have even attempted anything like this always have.
Very interesting overall. Severus is very mysterious; I'm glad we at least were able to find out what all the fuss was about.
Look forward to reading more.
1/2/2011 c2 Amari Frost
I liked your story until Hermione started smoking, what the hell are you doing? Trying to kill her? I think you dropped her I.Q. 50 points by brain cell death.
I liked your story until Hermione started smoking, what the hell are you doing? Trying to kill her? I think you dropped her I.Q. 50 points by brain cell death.
10/25/2010 c12 kree
No! Why? This is the best story I've read in weeks and it's not complete! Please update soon! I really like the way you've done Snape, and his and Hermione's interaction - hell, I like everything except that it's not finished.
No! Why? This is the best story I've read in weeks and it's not complete! Please update soon! I really like the way you've done Snape, and his and Hermione's interaction - hell, I like everything except that it's not finished.
8/9/2010 c10 aremel
Best chapter. It has nothing to do with Snape being in it start til finish nor the fact that i could imagine him in my minds eye because it was so well written in character.
Loved the part where he said' I followed your thoughts.' *leaves*
niiiiice.
Best chapter. It has nothing to do with Snape being in it start til finish nor the fact that i could imagine him in my minds eye because it was so well written in character.
Loved the part where he said' I followed your thoughts.' *leaves*
niiiiice.