for Reason5/23/2010 c1 
5Leeko
To me this fic reads like a collection of poems. It's your word choice and how cryptic you speak. You give details without form, it's kind of hard to describe. A portrait of two characters, who have since been cut out.
In the end it was perfectly clear why you chose this style and it gave the whole piece a bit of mystery. I liked how most of the story could be related to anyone, not just the chosen pair.
5LeekoTo me this fic reads like a collection of poems. It's your word choice and how cryptic you speak. You give details without form, it's kind of hard to describe. A portrait of two characters, who have since been cut out.
In the end it was perfectly clear why you chose this style and it gave the whole piece a bit of mystery. I liked how most of the story could be related to anyone, not just the chosen pair.
6/18/2009 c1 2Lord Bear
Aw, I wish I hadn't checked the character filters first! :p
Nice work, though; I thought the sense-by-sense format was very original and creative, particularly the way you segued from taste to the bite and revlation that you were speaking about Authur at the end.
Oh and LOL at Ash's review. I could see myself thinking that if I hadn't looked at the filters. :P
Cheers,
Lord Bear
2Lord BearAw, I wish I hadn't checked the character filters first! :p
Nice work, though; I thought the sense-by-sense format was very original and creative, particularly the way you segued from taste to the bite and revlation that you were speaking about Authur at the end.
Oh and LOL at Ash's review. I could see myself thinking that if I hadn't looked at the filters. :P
Cheers,
Lord Bear
6/6/2009 c1 lilyrose
I think this is really cute! Arthur, the cat, gets his fifteen minutes of fame! Well, maybe only two.
Why would someone want to rip it up? You did a good job. It made me smile and laugh. You explained something through your writing that the storyline writers didn't. I really did always wonder why Arthur only bit Suzaku. Now I know; love.
I think this is really cute! Arthur, the cat, gets his fifteen minutes of fame! Well, maybe only two.
Why would someone want to rip it up? You did a good job. It made me smile and laugh. You explained something through your writing that the storyline writers didn't. I really did always wonder why Arthur only bit Suzaku. Now I know; love.
6/6/2009 c1 All That Is Left Unsaid
This was nice and unexpected. I hadn't checked the tag to notice humor at first, so when it got down to taste, some part of me exected the narrator to end up being Euphemia in the midst of her Geass induced massacre (I don' know why though).
Really though, the writing and analyzation was great, I really like the part in -Touch- where he mentioned others made him feel relaxed, but only Suzaku made him feel safe.
This was nice and unexpected. I hadn't checked the tag to notice humor at first, so when it got down to taste, some part of me exected the narrator to end up being Euphemia in the midst of her Geass induced massacre (I don' know why though).
Really though, the writing and analyzation was great, I really like the part in -Touch- where he mentioned others made him feel relaxed, but only Suzaku made him feel safe.
6/4/2009 c1 1Arahazi
Heh heh, I was wondering at first why it was a humor fic, but then you built it up and gave it a clever ending. That was cute ^_^. You're right though, Arthur does need a little more stories surrounding him.
1ArahaziHeh heh, I was wondering at first why it was a humor fic, but then you built it up and gave it a clever ending. That was cute ^_^. You're right though, Arthur does need a little more stories surrounding him.
6/4/2009 c1 2Dark Fenrir
O... I don't know it's Arthur! And this is another great story! *grin from ear to ear*
2Dark FenrirO... I don't know it's Arthur! And this is another great story! *grin from ear to ear*