for Mills and Fowl5/18/2010 c1 
55S-Michael
I have to be honest, not where I thought you were going with this. I was sitting there going, "How do you get Haily from Juliet? Do they have a similar meaning or something?"
*Slaps forehead.*
Ah, well. It was good, really.
55S-MichaelI have to be honest, not where I thought you were going with this. I was sitting there going, "How do you get Haily from Juliet? Do they have a similar meaning or something?"
*Slaps forehead.*
Ah, well. It was good, really.
3/12/2010 c1 sara
good one ...keep continuing
good one ...keep continuing
1/7/2010 c1 happygome
"19th century Montana badger-baiting craze"
I. want. that. book.
"19th century Montana badger-baiting craze"
I. want. that. book.
8/13/2009 c1 Vivian3742
WOW this is genius i liked how you made the story relate with Artemis,Minerva,and Holly.
KEEP WRITING
WOW this is genius i liked how you made the story relate with Artemis,Minerva,and Holly.
KEEP WRITING
8/12/2009 c1 23Liris
Romantic adn amusing, nice combo. Hard to pull off, but you managed. Well done. And now for the sequel...
Liris
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23LirisRomantic adn amusing, nice combo. Hard to pull off, but you managed. Well done. And now for the sequel...
Liris
x
8/7/2009 c1 25Name On The Spine
Hehehehehe. I can't help but giggle. This is cute, and funny and romantic. I really, really like it.
25Name On The SpineHehehehehe. I can't help but giggle. This is cute, and funny and romantic. I really, really like it.
8/7/2009 c1 6lefthand ritehand fish
haha this is good and funny. Cool interesting plot. keep writing.
6lefthand ritehand fishhaha this is good and funny. Cool interesting plot. keep writing.
6/29/2009 c1 LiRA
*tries to review*
*is laughing too hard*
*deep soothing breaths*
Ok, that was awesome. I'm glad people have sat up and taken notice of Colfer's interesting little character twist with Violet and Artemis.
Nicely done!
*tries to review*
*is laughing too hard*
*deep soothing breaths*
Ok, that was awesome. I'm glad people have sat up and taken notice of Colfer's interesting little character twist with Violet and Artemis.
Nicely done!
6/14/2009 c1 45Musafreen
I'm glad someone's worked on the violet Tsirbleu angle. I always thought that had some potential.
Beautifully written, good flow, brilliant on characterization. I liked the theme too. And I can really imagine Artemis and Juliet saying whatever it is they're saying.
And the title was good too.
Musafreen
45MusafreenI'm glad someone's worked on the violet Tsirbleu angle. I always thought that had some potential.
Beautifully written, good flow, brilliant on characterization. I liked the theme too. And I can really imagine Artemis and Juliet saying whatever it is they're saying.
And the title was good too.
Musafreen
6/12/2009 c1 2stargazer626
I love this story! Such tongue-in-cheek, poke-fun, cheeky writing, and a particularly inventive way to describe feelings... with a few humourous moments thrown in to lighten the mood (which wasn't too sombre to begin with). The terrible pseudonyms made me alternately groan and laugh... the only problem is the bit "off" title. I think something else would be more suitable, to grab people's attention... Anyway, good job!
2stargazer626I love this story! Such tongue-in-cheek, poke-fun, cheeky writing, and a particularly inventive way to describe feelings... with a few humourous moments thrown in to lighten the mood (which wasn't too sombre to begin with). The terrible pseudonyms made me alternately groan and laugh... the only problem is the bit "off" title. I think something else would be more suitable, to grab people's attention... Anyway, good job!
6/10/2009 c1 2avatarmirai
I love the subtlety in this story. lol as it has been said in TTP, Freud would have a field day ;)
2avatarmiraiI love the subtlety in this story. lol as it has been said in TTP, Freud would have a field day ;)
6/10/2009 c1 random girl
This story is very good.
p.s. you misspelled Juliet.
This story is very good.
p.s. you misspelled Juliet.
6/9/2009 c1 Lady linnea
i doff me hat to you, pure genious x please , please update soon!
i doff me hat to you, pure genious x please , please update soon!
6/9/2009 c1 6ilex-ferox
This was wonderful! I especially liked the opening parody, although I'm not sure Athena Elysium's breast heaved as much as in a real Mills and Boon. The Golden Rose-Petal Award was inspired as was the vindictive Chihuahua. The style was so fittingly sardonic, too, and the A/H sub-plot was a gem! I wish I'd written this. Just one (very) minor criticism, it's Juliet not Juliette.
I suspect Holly may not be as ignorant as he hoped - I'm sure Foaly knows all about Artemis' extra-curricular activities.
6ilex-feroxThis was wonderful! I especially liked the opening parody, although I'm not sure Athena Elysium's breast heaved as much as in a real Mills and Boon. The Golden Rose-Petal Award was inspired as was the vindictive Chihuahua. The style was so fittingly sardonic, too, and the A/H sub-plot was a gem! I wish I'd written this. Just one (very) minor criticism, it's Juliet not Juliette.
I suspect Holly may not be as ignorant as he hoped - I'm sure Foaly knows all about Artemis' extra-curricular activities.