for Ambrosia & Almanacs11/19/2012 c1 Guest
Tha a way pudge :D
Tha a way pudge :D
12/19/2010 c1 the innovator
i can dig the plot, but to be honest, the time periods seem a little out of proportion.
like, i doubt someone could sit for 7 hours drinking and not go through the whole jug, or passed out. i doubt pudge would have taken a few sips and been drunk. its five parts milk and one part vodka, remember? i also kind of feel like you forced the dialogue a little.
but keep at it, your potential is immense.
i can dig the plot, but to be honest, the time periods seem a little out of proportion.
like, i doubt someone could sit for 7 hours drinking and not go through the whole jug, or passed out. i doubt pudge would have taken a few sips and been drunk. its five parts milk and one part vodka, remember? i also kind of feel like you forced the dialogue a little.
but keep at it, your potential is immense.
4/3/2010 c1 look-at-elvira
very good! this could have been from the book ,)
..i know what i'm gonna say next can be annoying but still: pleze continue this! pretty pleeze ,)
very good! this could have been from the book ,)
..i know what i'm gonna say next can be annoying but still: pleze continue this! pretty pleeze ,)
1/16/2010 c1 
1CaleighCatastrophe
I rather like this. Its different from the other fanfiction Ive written, though it leaves one wishing for more.
1CaleighCatastropheI rather like this. Its different from the other fanfiction Ive written, though it leaves one wishing for more.
11/27/2009 c1 demolitionXdeana
haha! intelligent.
i sortof never thought that would ever happen..
but still, awesome. haha.
haha! intelligent.
i sortof never thought that would ever happen..
but still, awesome. haha.
6/11/2009 c1 7bombplaya3
wierd pairing, but I get it. Pudge's thoughts are pretty deep, and his personality sticks to how it is described in the book. Overall 9/10
-playa
7bombplaya3wierd pairing, but I get it. Pudge's thoughts are pretty deep, and his personality sticks to how it is described in the book. Overall 9/10
-playa
6/8/2009 c1 120WindowChild
Oh wow, hilarious! I think their characters are perfect, and I just absolutely love it. I love that Colonel calls Pudge 'Pudgey'. Heehee. Amazing, as always.
120WindowChildOh wow, hilarious! I think their characters are perfect, and I just absolutely love it. I love that Colonel calls Pudge 'Pudgey'. Heehee. Amazing, as always.