for Amor Delirus1/1 c2 PoorQueequeg
Great story so far. Gratuitously evil Romulan and the beautiful love slave. We've all imagined this fic so I'm super stoked to find someone has actually written it! Great.
Great story so far. Gratuitously evil Romulan and the beautiful love slave. We've all imagined this fic so I'm super stoked to find someone has actually written it! Great.
1/16/2012 c23 
4Berry Smoothie
You. Are. Awesome.
Seriously. This is a really, really excellent story, the idea is great and the plot nicely done.
But the best part was the way you wrote the individual characters. I felt like there was some character growth, and there was emotional depth, and it was very much possible to get completely lost in story, and then to look up an hour later, realizing that it's 1 am.
I'm dead serious :)
4Berry SmoothieYou. Are. Awesome.
Seriously. This is a really, really excellent story, the idea is great and the plot nicely done.
But the best part was the way you wrote the individual characters. I felt like there was some character growth, and there was emotional depth, and it was very much possible to get completely lost in story, and then to look up an hour later, realizing that it's 1 am.
I'm dead serious :)
9/11/2011 c23 5Lady Asher
This story is so messed up, it's not even funny... and yet it's mesmerizing as well. One little deviation from canon leads to this completely different world - when your Nero took the Enterprise crew prisoner instead of not bothering to do anything to them in their insignificance, he provided the opportunity for all this trauma (and drama) to take place, but also for the Federation to gain incredible technological jumps from the Narada, since it didn't disappear into a black hole this time around. That one small change can cause all that... that you can THINK that far ahead... wow. That's just incredible. And then the fact that your characters travel the entire spectrum of human emotion in this is mesmerizing. I'm going to bet that they end up getting over it eventually - but I can't know unless you update again! I really hope you haven't abandoned this story, but I guess you haven't been active here for a while. =(
Please come back! You're too good of a writer to vanish into the abyss!
5Lady AsherThis story is so messed up, it's not even funny... and yet it's mesmerizing as well. One little deviation from canon leads to this completely different world - when your Nero took the Enterprise crew prisoner instead of not bothering to do anything to them in their insignificance, he provided the opportunity for all this trauma (and drama) to take place, but also for the Federation to gain incredible technological jumps from the Narada, since it didn't disappear into a black hole this time around. That one small change can cause all that... that you can THINK that far ahead... wow. That's just incredible. And then the fact that your characters travel the entire spectrum of human emotion in this is mesmerizing. I'm going to bet that they end up getting over it eventually - but I can't know unless you update again! I really hope you haven't abandoned this story, but I guess you haven't been active here for a while. =(
Please come back! You're too good of a writer to vanish into the abyss!
1/11/2011 c5 shaymer
This chapter was so moving. Uhura's logic and emotions come together in a way that allow her to take some control over her captor. Very well written chapter. I could sense exactly when and why she starts to lose it. The shame is too much for her to bear. She'd rather die doing something noble for the Enterprise. This allows her to finally accept her captivity and assign a purpose to her ordeal. Great writing.
This chapter was so moving. Uhura's logic and emotions come together in a way that allow her to take some control over her captor. Very well written chapter. I could sense exactly when and why she starts to lose it. The shame is too much for her to bear. She'd rather die doing something noble for the Enterprise. This allows her to finally accept her captivity and assign a purpose to her ordeal. Great writing.
11/18/2010 c23 6spockett
Hell.o, I have fallen in love with this story. I really hope you continue with it. It would be such a shame to let it go now after you had put so much into it. Please,Please finish.
6spockettHell.o, I have fallen in love with this story. I really hope you continue with it. It would be such a shame to let it go now after you had put so much into it. Please,Please finish.
10/23/2010 c23 2Elizawriter
Chapter 23 - McCoy - good on lots of levels. Much of the conversation is really natural and believable and I really like the little appearances of small smiles. Gives me the hope that there's a silver lining.
2ElizawriterChapter 23 - McCoy - good on lots of levels. Much of the conversation is really natural and believable and I really like the little appearances of small smiles. Gives me the hope that there's a silver lining.
10/23/2010 c20 Elizawriter
just great from beginning to end. no idea where you were planning to take the story but everywhere you did was just fantastic.
just great from beginning to end. no idea where you were planning to take the story but everywhere you did was just fantastic.
3/26/2010 c4 Rhiannon
Hey there... I just noticed the story isn't complete yet, and the last update was oct 2009. Are you still gonna continue writing? I would hate to be hanging at a very exciting moment and then never learn how it continues.
I will read a bit more slowly now, but please update soon. If you want to, you can contact me via twitter @rhiannon1307 and tell me if you're planning to update any time soon or - which I don't hope - you have abandoned the story.
Cheers
Rhiannon
Hey there... I just noticed the story isn't complete yet, and the last update was oct 2009. Are you still gonna continue writing? I would hate to be hanging at a very exciting moment and then never learn how it continues.
I will read a bit more slowly now, but please update soon. If you want to, you can contact me via twitter @rhiannon1307 and tell me if you're planning to update any time soon or - which I don't hope - you have abandoned the story.
Cheers
Rhiannon
3/26/2010 c3 Rhiannon
Wow, this story is really amazingly well written. I find your characters all to be extremely in character, the psychological dilemma of the situation was well explored and explained. You have a talent to not over-dramatisize things, yet make them extremely touching.
When Nyota was under the influence of the drug for the first time, it almost made me sick to read it. But it made so much sense to fully describe her artificial lust instead of just portraying it as purely 'bad'. It IS bad, it is even horrible, ESPECIALLY because he made her enjoy it.
Poor Spock, my heart breaks for him. All that logical reasoning for what is best in the situation doesn't help the fact that he is broken inside. I really wonder who is suffering worse here, him, having to watch it, having to be taken away later without being able to do something; or her, having to endure all this and let it happen. And I honestly don't know what I would have done for that second time, taken the drug or not. It did make sense that she did.
God, what a horrible, cruel and sick situation they're all in. And what a wonderful way to write it!
I really loved Kirk in chapter 3. He's reckless, yeah, but he's also very kind at heart. So I love your portrayal of him because you get it JUST right. I wanted to hug him (of course after hugging Spock).
Loving and hating this. Imensely!
Rhiannon
Wow, this story is really amazingly well written. I find your characters all to be extremely in character, the psychological dilemma of the situation was well explored and explained. You have a talent to not over-dramatisize things, yet make them extremely touching.
When Nyota was under the influence of the drug for the first time, it almost made me sick to read it. But it made so much sense to fully describe her artificial lust instead of just portraying it as purely 'bad'. It IS bad, it is even horrible, ESPECIALLY because he made her enjoy it.
Poor Spock, my heart breaks for him. All that logical reasoning for what is best in the situation doesn't help the fact that he is broken inside. I really wonder who is suffering worse here, him, having to watch it, having to be taken away later without being able to do something; or her, having to endure all this and let it happen. And I honestly don't know what I would have done for that second time, taken the drug or not. It did make sense that she did.
God, what a horrible, cruel and sick situation they're all in. And what a wonderful way to write it!
I really loved Kirk in chapter 3. He's reckless, yeah, but he's also very kind at heart. So I love your portrayal of him because you get it JUST right. I wanted to hug him (of course after hugging Spock).
Loving and hating this. Imensely!
Rhiannon
1/7/2010 c23 4prgurly79
now that i have officially signed up...i'm going to review, dammit!
love this story. hopefully another chapter coming soon?
4prgurly79now that i have officially signed up...i'm going to review, dammit!
love this story. hopefully another chapter coming soon?
11/26/2009 c5 rainINTOaPAPERcup
THIS WAS AMAZING! Hehehehe i always did think what it would be like with Nero and Uhura, but i could never find any fics that had it. you have completed me XD! FAVORITED!
THIS WAS AMAZING! Hehehehe i always did think what it would be like with Nero and Uhura, but i could never find any fics that had it. you have completed me XD! FAVORITED!
11/21/2009 c23 47Linstock
*snerk* Bones cooking sweet potato pie. Lovely. Nice reframe Bones. Good therapy to offer the client an alternate “frame” through which to view their trauma. Even if they do not embrace it it gives the idea that there is an alternate view . Well done you. LOL having a hubby that can discuss Vulcans and Romunlans. Mine would say something like “Volcanoes and Romanians Why? What do they have in common?”
47Linstock*snerk* Bones cooking sweet potato pie. Lovely. Nice reframe Bones. Good therapy to offer the client an alternate “frame” through which to view their trauma. Even if they do not embrace it it gives the idea that there is an alternate view . Well done you. LOL having a hubby that can discuss Vulcans and Romunlans. Mine would say something like “Volcanoes and Romanians Why? What do they have in common?”
11/21/2009 c22 Linstock
Well done! A very challenging chapter and so well done. Spock struggling with his feelings is very hard to do without overdoing. Hats off to you.
Well done! A very challenging chapter and so well done. Spock struggling with his feelings is very hard to do without overdoing. Hats off to you.