for Daily cloud6/16/2009 c3 
11Tsuki Hoshigaki
Lol
Hidan and Kakuzu have done it this time
I just love Madara/Tobi for this whole scheme
11Tsuki HoshigakiLol
Hidan and Kakuzu have done it this time
I just love Madara/Tobi for this whole scheme
6/16/2009 c1 1GRANDmerlinpants
Brilliant story idea! I do not think anyone has thought of it before. I suppose this story is to insult all Akatsuki members... You have to improve on both your spelling and grammar, or else people may not understand what you are trying to say. Yes, your spelling and grammar is that bad, but please don't take this comment too seriously! You can try using the grammar/spelling correction gadget in MicroSoft Word Office or in the story editor in . Please read my new story, Orochimaru's First and Last Love Story. If you don't give a damn about Orochimaru, then forget it. Anyway, I'd really like to read more from you!
1GRANDmerlinpantsBrilliant story idea! I do not think anyone has thought of it before. I suppose this story is to insult all Akatsuki members... You have to improve on both your spelling and grammar, or else people may not understand what you are trying to say. Yes, your spelling and grammar is that bad, but please don't take this comment too seriously! You can try using the grammar/spelling correction gadget in MicroSoft Word Office or in the story editor in . Please read my new story, Orochimaru's First and Last Love Story. If you don't give a damn about Orochimaru, then forget it. Anyway, I'd really like to read more from you!
6/16/2009 c3 Litewarior
lmao. Poor Hidan and Kakuzu. I hope they leave before the Pope kills them!
Itachi and Kisame had that coming to them. Why were they crawling around in vents in Vegas anyways? Hm...
lmao. Poor Hidan and Kakuzu. I hope they leave before the Pope kills them!
Itachi and Kisame had that coming to them. Why were they crawling around in vents in Vegas anyways? Hm...
6/14/2009 c1 xxkeeponlivingxx
Wow, the Iruka comment was GENIUS! xD
This story is very well-edited; I liked the idea of Madara living in Tobi's head. Other than a few typos, good job! ^-^
Wow, the Iruka comment was GENIUS! xD
This story is very well-edited; I liked the idea of Madara living in Tobi's head. Other than a few typos, good job! ^-^